Siheyuan: After I Traveled Through Time, the Courtyard Was in Chaos

[Laughing and crying] [Laughing and crying] I have read so many books, and the first time I saw it, it broke a big mother's arms and legs. This angle was very surprising. There are a few small holes, but the problem is not major and does not affect the full text. If it can be maintained, the score will not be lower. Selling grain and meat will deduct half a star. A modern person who has traveled through time should not be such a virgin. You don't have an invincible plug-in. If you produce so much grain, are you really not afraid of being treated as an enemy agent? Don't think that I can't get you without evidence. Can you handle the big memory trick? Half a star will be deducted for eating braised pork all the time, and each person will receive 2 taels of meat coupons per month. You have traveled through time and space, and it is less than 2 months. Count how many times you have eaten meat. If I really report you, how can you explain the source of the meat?

A very good novel, highly recommended.

This is my first time writing, and there are many imperfections, such as time management, the timing of the protagonist's appearance, etc. However, I think this entry point was well chosen, but the description and details are a bit imperfect. I will practice more on the new book. I hope everyone likes it, so I shamelessly give myself a 5. If you see any unreasonable things, please point them out. I will read the comments and correct them.

Not bad, I can watch it

The design is pretty good 😊 but the writing needs to be improved

Step by step, good-looking, I hope there are more words

Very good Siheyuan time travel article! The anatomy of human nature is very real! Young people should read more articles like this! Understand society and human nature? There were no articles like this when I was young? Are society's experiences all painful lessons? Did you not truly understand the meaning of life until middle age?

It's not bad, the protagonist doesn't have to fight with the animals every day, and the eldest mother was useless at the beginning, so the pension group doesn't have so much free time to harm people, and takes away their money, so the internal conflicts of the pension group break out. First, Silly Zhu was expelled, and then Yi Zhonghai was punished for eating peanuts. The pension group was basically destroyed... It's somewhere between direct killing and a letter of understanding.

The entry point is very good and novel. Not bad, not bad

The main character seems to be gone in the follow-up. He appears occasionally. It is completely unreasonable for Yi Zhonghai to kill Jia Dongxu. If such a thing happens, the entire factory will investigate, especially the machine. Special investigation will be carried out. There is a difference between natural loosening of screws and artificial loosening. This kind of thing can tell that someone is murdered at a glance. As long as it is done, there will be traces.

The beginning was not good, but the writing became more and more exciting later on. Although the common problem of this kind of novel is that it is stretched to the limit, the wonderful plot arrangement makes it worth reading.

It's okay, worth a look

Interesting, interesting [laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh][laugh]

Although there are many little poisonous points, it is still very good to take the initiative to torture the birds. [Like][Like][Like]