The Outcast: A Surprise Attack on Mount Longhu by the Three-One Sect from the Start

The language in this book is exquisite, and the author has considerable skills in calligraphy. Although the various descriptive techniques are not easy to pick up, they are still proficient in one sentence, making people feel deeply involved. As a fanfic, it fully demonstrates the charm of the protagonist on the basis of fully respecting the original work. The changes brought about by the protagonist in this story are also fascinating, and even make people really wish that there was such a person in the original story. I think this book has a gap in level compared to the more than 20 Under One Person fanfics I have read before. I highly recommend it if you like Under One Person. With about a hundred chapters, this book is more spiritual, vivid and worth reading carefully.

I really want to complain about it, it's so beautiful, it needs to be written with style, and the story needs to be story-telling, and most importantly, he has his own very complete story line, without those cookie-cutter classic plots that every fanfic would write, and truly manages to tell a brand new and vivid story. The characters have core, and it's a very nice article.

Not only is it funny, but it's also deep, and the author's creation really doesn't feel inconsistent. He actually changed a lot of the plot, but it really feels like Under One Person, and it feels like Under One Person in another timeline.

It's so good-looking. The author has captured the essence of old man Mi Er's fight. He can capture each person's personality traits and continue the development of the story. The characters are vivid and vivid. There is nothing wrong with it so far. Moreover, the protagonist's combat ability is on the same level as Laotianshi. It's a pleasure to read.

A new book that I really like and think has great potential. The author particularly likes the interaction between the senior brothers Tu Ming and Lu Jin in your writing. The senior brothers Longhushan are also very interesting. Please write more chapters of our old-age hot-blooded series.

Not bad, nothing poisonous, the protagonist is an old man, but he kills decisively The prequel of "Under One Man" is the old-age hot-blooded episode. It was so interesting to train Wang Bing to be obedient.

A rare humanist! Very interesting

The writing is very good and in line with my taste. Come on guys, I hope it won't stop updating.

It's quite novel, please support it with five stars.

I have read more than 100 chapters. The character descriptions in this book are really beautiful. I personally feel that there is no other fanfiction that is much better than this one. Each character is vivid and the author's skills are truly extraordinary. The plot with the addition of characters is extremely exciting. The score is 6.3, Which is really low.