Dual Transmigration: You Were Told to Make a Movie, So Why Are You Making It for Real?

The writing is not bad, but the power awakening could be earlier. After all, this is the kind of plot you promote in your introduction. In this way, it is easier to retain the target readers. Most similar books increase the protagonist's popularity and strength in the early stage. I remember that your introduction mentioned the protagonist's strength. It is related to popularity, and you did have a few words in the article to increase fans and views. It would be a pity not to explore the cool points you listed. [Sneaky laugh] Try to have as many cool points as possible in the beginning of the online article. The beginning is more important than the climax or even the end. If the first show cannot retain readers, it will be difficult to not push the flow later.

To be honest, the subject matter of this book is very to my liking, but there are still many problems with this book. I still hope that the author can write better and better. 1 The name of the book comes from "Making a Movie in a Different World". I thought this book was interesting because of its alternative literary style. If I hadn't accidentally clicked on it and read the introduction, I wouldn't have read this book. In addition, the introduction does not convey the exciting points of this book very well (he is the heir to a great Eastern country in another world, and he has his own way on Blue Star). Also, the pace of the protagonist's video shooting in another world is too slow. I think it may be the author's settings (influence, world weight, power of faith, etc. Will strengthen the protagonist's abilities), which are strongly tied to the video shooting, so the pace is slowed down. After seeing the latest chapter, the author probably wants to get rid of this relatively inefficient method, so it is best to change the name and introduction of this book. 2. Many plots in this book are still too cliche, such as the part about sharing a house with a female roommate. 3. There is too little about the worldview of the different world, such as the local social structure, the living conditions of the residents, the customs and customs, and there is relatively little talk about it. At present, it feels like it is just a magical medieval country. Overall, it feels like the protagonist's strength has leapt too fast. In one moment, the Empire and the Light Sect have become bastards. In the next step, they will be enemies from heaven and earth? Of course this part is really fun, but where is the protagonist's new motivation? It can be said that the first part is about trying hard to become stronger so as not to expose one's identity, but how do you plan to write the second part? 4. The cool part started too slowly. I feel like I could write a lot about the coolness of the main character, but there are too few limited items. At present, glass beads are of some use. Later, I think it can be useful to add some food from the earth to other worlds, such as tea, which can be mixed with local magic to enhance physical fitness, magic aptitude and so on. The parts about being on my own on Earth and making movies are both pretty good. I feel like it would be better for the author to balance the fun aspects of both sides later.

It's pretty good-looking, but don't you even distinguish it now? Double penetration and two realms are not the same thing, right? Double penetration means two protagonists.

The thing that is difficult to write about this kind of book is the plot of urban transit. It is best to write less plot except for buying supplies and posting videos. Alien World is okay. Although it is not very surprising, it is at least better than most books and can be read.

A compound bow may be useful for ordinary people in the ordinary world, but what is the use of this thing in this extraordinary world other than holding it? You can also be caught off guard when holding a gun. The bow will be cold even before you have a good posture, and there is no chance for a second arrow.

Not bad, but the proportion of movies with book titles is currently very low, the focus is still on double penetration

Why not give 5 stars for the 4-star review? It's because the author's updates are not powerful enough, so author, you have to work harder to bring out the functions of your tentacle monster. Author, you are stuck!

The writing is very interesting, the ideas are very clever, and it looks good, but the updates are too few and too slow😡

It looks good, I love watching it, but the author must not cut it

It looks great and could become a classic!