
A Mayfly Lives from Dawn to Dusk; Today I Finally Understand What an Immortal Is
朝生暮死蜉蝣命,今日方知仙是仙
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- Ongoing
- Length
- 2.7M Words
- Genre
- Eastern Fantasy
- Subgenre
- Eastern Cultivation
- Updated
- 2d ago
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Synopsis
Other names
- Transmigrate Through Cultivation and Create My Own Technique from the Start to Complete My Spirit Roots穿越修仙开局自创功法补全灵根Alternate title on Fanqie
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See allIn a Terrible Reading Slump: I Drop 9.8-Rated Books After Ten Chapters and 9.7-Rated Ones After Five
I'm so out of books to read, but I'm incredibly picky. For "Ten Thousand People Are Browsing", I made it only thirty chapters before dropping it. I used to read "Dragon King" past chapter 400, but now I dropped "Slay the Gods" after just twenty chapters.
I've Become Immune to Tomato Reads. Nothing Interests Me Anymore. I'm in a Serious Reading Slump
I don’t like quick transmigration, except for Su Lvxia.
Any Protagonists Who Stay Kind and Upright in a Dark, Twisted World?
I have read too many stories about characters turning evil. Now I want protagonists who can emerge unstained from the mire and preserve their original nature amid despair and suffering.
Found a Masterpiece, Absolutely Incredible
Looking for books like "My Wife Is the First Female Demon of the Eastern Jin". There aren't many books set in the Jin and Northern and Southern Dynasties.
Qi Refining, Foundation Establishment, Core Formation, Void Spirit, Nascent Soul, Deification: Mortal Cultivation Stories
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A Charismatic, Smart Protagonist, Please: No Pathetic, Desperate Stalker Types
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Mortal Cultivation, Rags-to-Riches Comeback. Looking for the Best
Looking for books similar to With Treasures in Hand, the World Is Mine.
For Middle-Aged Readers: Smart Characters, No Goody-Two-Shoes, Decisive and Ruthless, Highly Rated
Urban, System, reborn, fantasy, or gaming novels are all fine, as long as they’re good, the characters are smart, and there’s no saintly protagonist. Bring out any books on your shelf that fit the bill!
Any Good Books Where Every Character Is Smart, the Logic Is Sound, and the Story Flows Well?
Ten Pinnacle Novels in the Mortal Cultivation Genre
A recommendation from a twelve-year veteran bookworm. Every one of these has something special: "A Record of a Mortal's Journey to Immortality", "Renegade Immortal", "Striving for the Dao", "Hundred Refinements to Immortality", "Bright Jade True Immortal", "The Road to Immortality", "The Path of Immortal Cultivation", "Seeking the Immortal Way", and "The Fate-Extinguishing Record".
Proper Cultivation Stories: Qi Refining, Foundation Establishment, Golden Core, Nascent Soul...
To help others, first help yourself. To cultivate, first cultivate your heart.
Cultivation Novels About Refining Corpse Puppets and Controlling Ghosts
The Pinnacle of Xuanhuan Cultivation
Highly recommend these invincible fantasy cultivation novels. Reading them three times is just the beginning!!!
I’m Tired of Mixed Spiritual Roots. Please Recommend a Novel with a Heavenly Spiritual Root.
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Any Stories Where the Path of Cultivation Gets Corrupted and the Protagonist Is the Source of the Corruption?
I've finished "Lord of Ten Thousand Nights".
Please Recommend Engrossing Tomato Novels Without Stupid Plotting
Villain, urban, or fantasy novels are all fine 😊 I'm a seasoned reader of ten years, so please don't recommend beginner-level novels; I can't get into them. I'm older now and hope to read something with a well-reasoned, tightly plotted story. I don't mind power fantasies, but I don't want everyone else to act stupid just to make the protagonist look smart.
The Genre Doesn’t Matter. Just Give Me Something with Smart Characters
I won't say more. You'll understand.
Qi Refining, Foundation Establishment, Golden Core, Nascent Soul, Spirit Transformation
A fallen young man
Qi Refining, Foundation Establishment, Golden Core, Nascent Soul, Spirit Severing, Integration, Tribulation Transcendence, and the Like
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Those Overlooked Masterpieces
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In the early chapters, the author failed to establish a complete worldview, resulting in a rather vague feel. This might be because the mortal world isn't the main focus, given it's a cultivation novel. However, this significantly impacts the reading experience, making it difficult for readers to clearly distinguish this work from other transmigration novels.
It's quite good. After being used to the action-packed, superhuman, and lightning-fast breakthroughs in wish-fulfillment novels, this is a refreshing change. It offers a unique perspective on the ordinary yet intense lives of lower-level cultivators, finding a touch of warmth amidst the dangers of their training. It's all just a fleeting dream, a sigh of regret, a tragedy, too late.
It's not bad; overall, it shows great potential. However, the writing style is really lacking. Of course, it's understandable since it's your first time writing a book. But it seems you haven't fully developed some aspects, such as the choice of the female lead, the male lead's future, and the transitions in the middle of the plot. I don't know who you actually want as the female lead.
The protagonist is resourceful but stubborn, willing to sacrifice 80% of his safety for uncertain ideas. He's methodical but inflexible; his plans are always in place, but when thwarted, he's at a loss, refusing to change course even when he feels something is wrong. He has a kind heart and is ruthless, but his compassion often overflows, leading him to sacrifice his own safety for common 'pitiful' people. In summary: a Yuan Shao with an insatiable sense of compassion.
A masterpiece of the "Ordinary People" genre, suitable for seasoned readers. Many of its nuances require a certain level of life experience to fully appreciate. The protagonist's character isn't formulaic or stereotypical like in most online novels; it showcases the complexity of human nature.
The author's plot control is superb, progressing gradually and steadily, with the protagonist growing stronger step by step, making for a very enjoyable read. 👍 The protagonist is intelligent, with clear thinking, and knows how to rationally utilize his strengths; there are no overpowered cheat codes, making the story feel very natural. 👍 The supporting characters are also well-developed.
Finally, I'll add 50 reviews myself 🤭🤭. I've been preparing this story for a long time, and I wrote it mostly because I wanted to. I'm aware of my limited writing skills, and I often struggle to express my ideas effectively. Many times, readers have been providing suggestions and pointing out plot holes, allowing me to copy reviews and correct errors. Thank you all for your support.
The logic is rigorous, the characters are realistic, and even minor characters are vividly portrayed, not just tools existing for the protagonist. As for why the score is so low, I think besides malicious low-score manipulation, there's a deeper issue: many things, the protagonist's actions and choices, require a certain level of social experience to understand.
This book deserves more than this score. Some may find the process slow and lacking in initial excitement, but it truly captures the sense of life, helplessness, and relentless struggle of a transmigrator using their advantages to cultivate immortality in another world. The author's control over the characters is excellent, avoiding stereotypes and creating a strong sense of immersion.
Let me share my thoughts. I've already read the latest chapter, and the story is unconventional and engaging. It's a very exciting world, and the author has depicted a cultivation world that's somewhat traditional, like the one where ordinary people cultivate immortality. I personally feel the story is quite captivating, and you can tell the author has considerable skill. As a seasoned reader of over 10 years, this is a high-quality novel that I'm sure will keep reading.