A Mayfly Lives from Dawn to Dusk; Today I Finally Understand What an Immortal Is

The author did not describe a complete worldview in the first few chapters, which gave the impression that it was very general. This may be because the mortal world is not the focus at all. It is a novel about cultivating immortals after all, but this really affects the perception and prevents readers from making a clear distinction between this article and other time-travel novels. So far, there is no unified summary of the world of cultivating immortals. They are all descriptions based on the assumption that readers understand and agree with the system of cultivating immortals in other novels. However, the author is indeed excellent in describing some details, such as the description of "watching the moon". It is still a work worth watching. I look forward to the subsequent chapters, the opinions of the family, and rational discussions.

It's very good. I'm used to reading Shuangwen's fights and killings that defy the heavens and advance through the realm of enlightenment at such a rapid pace. I can taste the ordinary but tense life of low-level monks and find a touch of warmth from the dragon's pond and tiger's den. It has a unique flavor. The yellow beam is just a dream, sigh, sadness, it's too late

The protagonist has ideas but is stubborn, and is willing to sacrifice 80% of safety for some uncertain ideas. I have a plan, but I don't have enough flexibility. Every time I plan well, but when the plan is blocked, I don't know what to do. I don't think it's right and I don't change the plan. He has a kind heart and dares to take action, but he is often so sympathetic that he sacrifices his own safety for some common 'poor people'. Summary: A Yuan Shao with overwhelming compassion.

Excellent works by ordinary people, suitable for old bookworms. Many of its charms require a certain amount of experience to feel. The character of the protagonist is not as formulaic as most online novels. It reflects the complexity of human nature. As the plot develops, the character of the protagonist also changes visibly. Moreover, the occurrence and changes of the characters are very logical. No poisonous points have been found so far. The supporting characters are also very three-dimensional. Each character has his or her own thoughts and ideas. They are not dry characters meant to surround the protagonist or deliberately advance the plot. This is hard to see in Tomato. The complexity of human nature reflected in this kind of book cannot be imitated by AI. To be honest, it is much better than the fast food rice on the list. This book shouldn't be so popular.

The author's plot control is very good, step by step, the protagonist becomes stronger step by step, it is very comfortable to watch [Like] The protagonist is very smart, has clear ideas, and knows how to properly explore his own advantages. There are no cheats and he is very natural [Like] The supporting characters are also well portrayed, and everyone is not deliberately portrayed as ruthless and selfish just because it is a novel about cultivating immortals: Some of the supporting characters are affectionate and loyal and keep their promises, some are neutral and self-reliant, and some are selfish and calculating. There are thousands of people with different faces, each with their own characteristics, and they feel very real [Like]

This book should not only have this score. Some people may think that the process is slow and the initial excitement is less. However, it really writes about the sense of life and powerlessness of a person who has traveled through time and used his own advantages to cultivate immortality in another world. The unwillingness to try his best not to give up. It also controls the character very well without being stereotyped, and has a very strong sense of immersion.

The logic is rigorous, the characters are real, and even a passerby character is vivid, not a tool that exists for the protagonist. As for why this score is so low, I think that in addition to being maliciously lowered, there is also a deep problem. Many things in it, many of the protagonist's behaviors and choices, can only be understood with certain social life experience. Just like the interaction in the beginning where the protagonist teases the little maid, some people scolded the dog in the comment area. I want to say that this kind of behavior, in the eyes of an uncle like me, is just teasing a several-year-old girl as a little girl. This is also in line with the protagonist's thirty-year-old time travel setting. There is also the issue of the protagonist taking a few junior brothers and sisters with him when his sect was destroyed. There are a lot of people clamoring about the Holy Mother, but in fact, looking back, you can see that the protagonist is just holding the handle without affecting himself, and there are only a few more followers. On the way to escape, the four worthless women found a wealthy businessman to settle down from the beginning, and the ones left behind were all able to help themselves. Subsequently, those who betrayed the protagonist were decisively killed by the protagonist, and those who chose to leave were allowed to leave. And with the death and departure of the junior brothers and sisters, the character of the protagonist also changes little by little. This is very good, surpassing 99% of the novels. This kind of choice is in line with human nature. It is not a modern peaceful society that goes back to the past and kills decisively without recognizing relatives, like a suppressed pervert releasing himself. There is also the plot of returning to hometown. I saw a lot of people in the comment area arguing about not going home to see my mother and the little maid, but is it possible to go back? When I was in the Demon Sect, I was planted with a mark, and then the Demon Sect was destroyed by the Righteous Way. I fled all the way and couldn't go back. Later, I didn't have to escape anymore, and there was something parasitic on my body. How could I dare to go back? The Demon Sect was finally destroyed, and no one knew where their hometown was. Their families were in the safest state, so they had to pretend to be cool and bring the danger back just to go back, right? You'd have to be happy if your mother and maid were all contaminated by the Ke system and turned into a bunch of sarcoma tentacles, right? Why doesn't Han Lao Mo dare to go back? Aren't you just afraid of bringing danger back? Even if there is no danger, you have to create danger and bring it back, just to hold a cup, right? From the current point of view, the plot is very stable. As long as the plot does not collapse at the end, it can definitely be regarded as a fine novel.

Let me tell you my feelings. I have read the latest chapter, and the story is not conventional. The content of the story is also very good and attractive. Anyway, I feel that this is a very exciting world. The author outlines a somewhat traditional world of immortality for mortals. Personally, I feel that the story is still very exciting. It can be seen that the author still has some skills. I have been a bookworm for more than 10 years. This is a high-quality novel that can make me interested in pursuing it.

It is an undoubted masterpiece. It involves life and death. It is not a traditional happy ending plot. The protagonist's mentality is also growing, and the characters around him are also very vivid and deeply touching.

Oh, it's so painful to watch sometimes. The protagonist is often in a very powerless state. He always meets a bunch of people who help him. If it weren't for these people, the protagonist would have died long ago. He also often brings disappointment to those he trusts, including the death of his mortal maid, the death of his mother and brother, and the half-death of his junior sister. To be honest, this book is not easy to read, but a bit depressing. Some details are also written in a general way, giving people a feeling of fast and slow pace. Many decades in the article have passed, and the sense of jumping is too strong. I can only say that my writing skills really need to be improved, but my ideas and imagination are still good.