I’m Building Dragon City in the Apocalypse

(First in the middle) Four-star white, 10 items C Sense of substitution C, attractiveness C, plug-in C, setting C, writing C, imagination C, rhythm C, main line C, character design C, logic C Extra points: none Personal feelings: The setting is very thin, but the description of reality is very complete, and it is not considered a small opening. #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. This way it should not be blocked. 1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria·Ninth Edition Revised (1) Evaluation items 1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view. 2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading. 3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative. 4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency. 5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot? 6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line. 7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low? 8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal. 9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive? 10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition. 11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (2) Evaluation grouping 1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction 2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings 3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation 4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center 5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense (3) Rating of recommended evaluation items 1. Highlights: S-level 4 points, A-level 2 points 2. Standard: 1 point for Grade B, 0 points for Grade B 3. Defects: Grade C - 1 point, Grade D - 3 points 3. Rating of online articles (1) Up, up 1. Red+: Total score is above level 30 2. Red: Total score is 26 or above 3. Red-: 8 items A (2) High-quality and bright web articles 1. Orange+: Total score is level 22 or above 2. Orange: Total score is 18 or above 3. Orange-: 5 items A (3) Shang Xia·High-level online articles 1. Purple+: Total score is 14 or above 2. Purple: Total score is level 10 or above 3. Purple-: 8 items B (4) Upper-intermediate and high-level online writing 1. Five-star blue+: total score is level 6 or above 2. Five-star blue: total score is level 4 or above 4. Five-star green: 5 items B (5) Zhongyi·High-standard online articles 1. Four-star green+: total score is level 2 or above 2. Four-star green: total score is level 1 3. Four-star white: 10 items C (6) Middle 2 and 2·Standard online text 1. Samsung White+: Total score -1 level 2. Samsung White: Total Score -2 Level (7) Middle and lower three•Flawed web articles 1. Samsung Gray+: Total score -3 levels 2. Samsung Gray: Total Score -4 Level (6) Xia Shang·Web articles with great flaws 1. Samsung Black+: Total score -5 levels 2. Samsung Black: Total Score -6 Level 3. One-star black +: total score -7 levels 4. One-star black: total score -8 levels 5. Two-star black: 10 items D One star is an invalid rating, two stars is the lowest rating (7) Medium•No rating (lower middle to upper middle) (8) Inferior • No grading (middle to lower to lower) (9) Xiaxia·Malicious 1. The first stage: total score - below level 10 2. The second stage: total score - below level 20 3. The third stage: 10 E

You were so far ahead from the beginning, and you still had a 50-50 draw with the enemy. You lacked the ultimate trump card.

When I set the settings at the beginning, I thought the protagonist would live a good life. After all, there are many kinds of superpowers. Fighting monsters, collecting girls, becoming more comfortable and leading the crowd. Once the base is ready, all kinds of classic plots emerge in endlessly. Brothers, Mission: Impossible, combat power. At the beginning, it was said that girls would be recruited, but later on, seven or eight girls were recruited in a row, and they were collected without any emotion. There is still room. Plants can start to enter and live, and there is a high probability that they will become a small world in the future.

I am too good to my friends, but my friends are sorry for me? It's okay, I stabbed myself twice for my friends [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying] [laughing and crying]

My favorite thing is the shelter. Imagine it, it's perfect. It's just that the superpower seems a bit invincible. The structure of this shelter is still okay.

I've seen dozens of them, and the outline is pretty good. People from your own village should be more trustworthy than strangers to help you develop your strength later on. There should be a female protagonist! It's not bad. I hope it doesn't collapse in the future. I'll give it four stars first. If it's good later, I'll give it five stars. [Shy] (Don't always say how much it costs for free novels. The author doesn't owe anyone.)

It can be seen that in about 180 pictures, the protagonist's cheating is not as powerful as not cheating. The enemy camp sneaked into the protagonist's base, and the protagonist even released

The story is very attractive and tense enough to continue.

A welfare book for the harem party, it is not very dark, it is refreshing and semi-invincible, and it does not beat around the bush. If the author is faster, the rating will definitely be higher, but the main author is slower. The author worked hard.

Okay, you can take a look. Kill decisively. The revenge that should be avenged is absolutely satisfying, and the kindness that should be avenged can also be done with an online IQ.