【Clan Cultivation】【Building and Farming】【Light Ensemble Cast】【Steady Progress】【Rational, Not Brain-Dead】【Well-Paced, Not a Power Fantasy】
Xu Changqing, a modern-day overworked drone, accidentally transmigrates to a cultivation world and takes over the body of a sect disciple who died when a failed breakthrough sent spiritual energy surging back through him.
While inheriting most of the previous owner's memories, he also gains the essential golden finger of a transmigrator: the Clan Longevity System.
So, after a stroke of good fortune, Xu Changqing leaves the sect, marries a cultivation partner, raises a family, and establishes a cultivation clan, setting out on an immortal path that will endure for generations...
Important note: Although this is a System novel, it isn't a brainless power fantasy. Handsome readers who aren't into that sort of story, please don't read it. If you stumble in by mistake, don't flame me. And if you do flame me... well, go ahead!
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It seems that the content is quite good so far. It mainly talks about the world view at the beginning, which is not bad. But at present, it is too long and has too little main content. It is not easy to retain readers, and there is not much description of the group of people in my family. Of course, it is understandable that it is a transitional chapter in the early stage, but this novel needs to save more main lines. In terms of length, there are more plots about the male and female protagonists, which will make it easier to retain readers. Generally speaking, it is okay, but the "threshold" is a bit high. Most readers can't stand the "water" in the front. It is best to intersperse a small amount of background introduction with the main story. It is not bad. The author will update more main plots and the plots of the male and female protagonists. Come on.
It's so awesome that I can write dozens of chapters on people in the sect. It's like the road to entrepreneurship in modern cities is covered with the veneer of cultivating immortals. It focuses on honest young men. I don't appreciate it but respect it [Like]
It equals 54 chapters. 85% Of it is in the introduction in the early stage. It is a bit too long-winded. The book feels good. I hope the author can introduce as little as possible later. Basically, skipping chapters does not affect the plot. There is really no need to be so detailed. It is very tiring. Please promote the plot and character dialogue more.
An introduction can write 500,000 words
It's quite good-looking. I don't mind if it's written in more detail. This will give me a better sense of immersion. Moreover, the gradual development of farming and the rise of farming and the improvement bit by bit will make it more immersive, but it shouldn't be too boring. It's better to have some refreshing highlights occasionally. Therefore, the author hurry up and update. The new book should be updated when it is ready. If the update is too slow, it is easy to be addicted to the book and then die.
I just wrote more than 50 chapters and started to write one chapter a day. It took me a long time to save 9 chapters. The author will update it slowly. I will keep it slowly.
There are too many introductions before, and subsequent updates are a bit slow. So far, it looks pretty good.
It's a very real story about a family's cultivation of immortality. If it is written in a down-to-earth manner, it should become a masterpiece.
There are a lot of settings in the front. It can be seen that the author must have written carefully. The image of the heroine is also very vivid, unlike the NPCs in other articles.
Not bad, not bad, really good, come on, author!
Updates are a bit slow at the moment, but a good work is worth waiting for. Come on, author, don't let it be unfinished.
It seems that the content is quite good so far. It mainly talks about the world view at the beginning, which is not bad. But at present, it is too long and has too little main content. It is not easy to retain readers, and there is not much description of the group of people in my family. Of course, it is understandable that it is a transitional chapter in the early stage, but this novel needs to save more main lines. In terms of length, there are more plots about the male and female protagonists, which will make it easier to retain readers. Generally speaking, it is okay, but the "threshold" is a bit high. Most readers can't stand the "water" in the front. It is best to intersperse a small amount of background introduction with the main story. It is not bad. The author will update more main plots and the plots of the male and female protagonists. Come on.
It's so awesome that I can write dozens of chapters on people in the sect. It's like the road to entrepreneurship in modern cities is covered with the veneer of cultivating immortals. It focuses on honest young men. I don't appreciate it but respect it [Like]
It equals 54 chapters. 85% Of it is in the introduction in the early stage. It is a bit too long-winded. The book feels good. I hope the author can introduce as little as possible later. Basically, skipping chapters does not affect the plot. There is really no need to be so detailed. It is very tiring. Please promote the plot and character dialogue more.
An introduction can write 500,000 words
It's quite good-looking. I don't mind if it's written in more detail. This will give me a better sense of immersion. Moreover, the gradual development of farming and the rise of farming and the improvement bit by bit will make it more immersive, but it shouldn't be too boring. It's better to have some refreshing highlights occasionally. Therefore, the author hurry up and update. The new book should be updated when it is ready. If the update is too slow, it is easy to be addicted to the book and then die. I just wrote more than 50 chapters and started to write one chapter a day. It took me a long time to save 9 chapters. The author will update it slowly. I will keep it slowly.
There are too many introductions before, and subsequent updates are a bit slow. So far, it looks pretty good.
It's a very real story about a family's cultivation of immortality. If it is written in a down-to-earth manner, it should become a masterpiece.
There are a lot of settings in the front. It can be seen that the author must have written carefully. The image of the heroine is also very vivid, unlike the NPCs in other articles.
Not bad, not bad, really good, come on, author!
Updates are a bit slow at the moment, but a good work is worth waiting for. Come on, author, don't let it be unfinished.