Dragon Ball: My Angel Daughter

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The writing is okay, mainly because it's a bit funny... Also, Frieza usually calls himself a monkey and can't speak Saiyan... It's quite fun to watch. I hope the author writes more... The combat power can be speeded up a bit... Suggestion: It may be better to rebate points according to the character's combat power...

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the rawness of the writing will be complained about. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

The storyline at the beginning is pretty good, logical, at least not brainless. Although some places are different from the original work, at least it is acceptable. I would like to give you some suggestions for the author. Save Planet Vegeta and let the Saiyans provide you with emotional value (for example, forcing them to improve their strength without punishing them). In this way, the overall strength of the Saiyans can be improved, so that they can improve the overall level of the universe (Quan Wang wants to keep only a few high-level universes and eliminate the rest)

It's very good. There are very few Dragon Ball fanfics that I can continue to read. The current low rating is probably because the number of words is not enough. In some places, the protagonist's combat power is a bit suppressed, but overall it is not a big problem. I hope it will not be unfinished.

Watching the introduction and watching the plot "Every 10,000 points of negative emotion points can be drawn once. You're guaranteed to win every time! 100,000 Points can be used to draw 10 consecutive draws. Sawyer had nothing to hesitate and immediately started 10 consecutive strokes. "Congratulations on getting 9 combat points! " "Congratulations on getting 5 combat points! " "Congratulations on getting 2 combat points! "

I don't know why I feel that the back part is not as interesting as the front part [laughs and cries], but I feel that the fights in Dragon Ball are still interesting [laughing evilly]

The author is so short. Can you please stop taking such a rest? Too much rest is not good for your health.

Very pretty. I recommend that the female lead should be size 18, right?