Dragon Ball: My Angel Daughter

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The writing is okay, mainly because it's a bit funny... Also, Frieza usually calls himself a monkey and can't speak Saiyan... It's quite fun to watch. I hope the author writes more... The combat power can be speeded up a bit... Suggestion: It may be better to rebate points according to the character's combat power...

When you update, subtle flaws will be magnified, and the rawness of the writing will be complained about. When you update twice, a little patience is born, and the progress of the plot is paid more attention to. When you are on the third watch, the little praise starts to sound, and the number of dead harvests starts to decrease. When you update the fifth update, readers' support will spontaneously form, and the voices of praise will become louder and louder. When you are at the tenth watch, the Confucian debates are deafening, and the tolerant attitude is implemented both internally and externally. When you are twenty, you will have a place in the bookworm's memories. Even in your long life, your name will leave a dazzling trace. Updates may not solve all problems, but more than 90% of problems come from insufficient updates.

The storyline at the beginning is pretty good, logical, at least not brainless. Although some places are different from the original work, at least it is acceptable. I would like to give you some suggestions for the author. Save Planet Vegeta and let the Saiyans provide you with emotional value (for example, forcing them to improve their strength without punishing them). In this way, the overall strength of the Saiyans can be improved, so that they can improve the overall level of the universe (Quan Wang wants to keep only a few high-level universes and eliminate the rest)

It's very good. There are very few Dragon Ball fanfics that I can continue to read. The current low rating is probably because the number of words is not enough. In some places, the protagonist's combat power is a bit suppressed, but overall it is not a big problem. I hope it will not be unfinished.

Watching the introduction and watching the plot "Every 10,000 points of negative emotion points can be drawn once. You're guaranteed to win every time! 100,000 Points can be used to draw 10 consecutive draws. Sawyer had nothing to hesitate and immediately started 10 consecutive strokes. "Congratulations on getting 9 combat points! " "Congratulations on getting 5 combat points! " "Congratulations on getting 2 combat points! "

I don't know why I feel that the back part is not as interesting as the front part [laughs and cries], but I feel that the fights in Dragon Ball are still interesting [laughing evilly]

The author is so short. Can you please stop taking such a rest? Too much rest is not good for your health.

Very pretty. I recommend that the female lead should be size 18, right?

I am not an expert in this field, but I still want to comment. After I carefully read your novel and thought about it for a long time, I actually don't know how to comment. As I said at the beginning, I am not an expert in this field.

I gave it four stars. I originally wanted to give it two stars, but I thought about it. My reasons are first: original characters, second: not interested in female angels (most readers with normal Third: Practice, practice. Some details of the original work were done well by the author, but some were poorly planned. That's it, I've only read chapter 100 and I can't stand it anymore, please come on, author.

I've read more than ten chapters, and I personally think it's pretty good. Come on, author. I hope you'll accept them all. They're all time travel fics. If you don't accept the characters you like, it's better not to travel through time. Author, are you right?

I just read a good article, about the time-traveling Dragon Ball event, and follow the story to develop a series of plots. Write more of your own plots, and you can expand on some plots that are not covered in Dragon Ball. For example, who sold the planet that Frieza attacked, who else is Frieza's family, do the aliens on various planets have other abilities, the Zifir people who were exterminated by the Saiyans, the sealed brave Tapio clan, the creator of the demon Hildegon, and the demons of Babidi. You can write more.

It's a pretty good novel, but it's a pity that it has multiple female protagonists.

Broly and Sun Wukong are the same age, and King Vegeta's combat power seems to have appeared in the anime of 15,000. Vegeta's birth power seems to have been a few thousand, I don't remember clearly. These are all appeared in the anime.

Five stars are given, I wish the author can code like a god, update 100,000 times a day, and be gentle when receiving gifts [laughing]

The battle magic water in Dragon Ball is a bit funny!

So far, I have read The World's No. 1 Martial Arts Conference. This novel is good and has no flaws. In addition to a few original characters, I don't know if they will be collected. Their appearance is also to introduce a cosmic planet similar to the earth. Many readers thought they were double-crossing or group-crossing. In fact, the author explained that it was not

It's quite interesting, and it's funny and hard to laugh at, but why are there no book reviews?

It's very fun and very interesting. I hope there will be more updates every day. Come on, the author.

New version of Chuanchao The full power of Chuan Chao's Super One can overwhelm Gogeta in the Super Series. Even Super Blue Gogeta can't instantly kill Chuan Chao. That's just the Super One from Chuan Chao. The normal state of the combined person is >> single super blue Dragon Ball's combat power has no limit. During the Super 3 period, it had a combat power of trillions.

I would like to ask if the heroine includes the female characters from Dragon Ball Heroes.

It's quite novel and very group portrait. I hope the author will continue to downplay the protagonist.

It's so funny. The author of the novel is so good at making people suffer, all kinds of torture, haha, come on.

Isn't it a Saiyan's passivity? Vegeta has been seriously injured several times, but his combat power has not changed at all?

The Self-Extreme Intention Gong is a state, and the stronger the person, the better the gain effect will be. For example, if Yamcha uses the Ultimate Intention Kung Fu, Yamcha's combat power can be increased to around hundreds of thousands at most.

Very happy and funny, it can bring joy to people

It's interesting, Frieza-sama really likes watching it [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Really, really good. Recommended. Very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very, very good. Can't you use it? It looks good.