After She Turned Down My Confession, My Gentle Senior Smiled and Said She Loved Me

The following represents only my personal views: Regarding the role of Jiang Nuannuan, it is very strange for a high school student to refuse with some excuses. I can also see that he treats the male protagonist as his younger brother, but when he refuses, he says that the male protagonist does not understand what love is. It is very strange. Then there are the supporting characters He Yang and Sister Si, Li Bingbing. The previous paragraph shows that Sister Si is very simple, but has a good relationship with the scheming girl Li Bingbing. Li Bingbing spread rumors about other people for the position of league secretary. When the incident happened, there was a big fuss and no consequences were mentioned, but Judging from the subsequent plot, there are no consequences, so how can a simple person maintain such a good relationship with a scheming girl? Especially when someone spreads rumors and makes a big fuss, it is impossible for Sister Si not to know whether she is just superficially innocent? But from the later plot, Li Yang plays games at night and ignores Sister Si. Sister Si wants Li Yang to accompany her, which leads to Li Yang compliing with Sister Si and reducing the gaming incidents. However, later the male protagonist encounters Sister Si and a boy, and Li Bingbing is also there. This plot has a foreshadowing. Li Bingbing smiled in the direction of the male protagonist. After hesitation, the male protagonist told Li Yang that Li Yang went to ask and said that the boy was the person Li Bingbing liked. Then we can find the existing problem from the information in the plot: 1. Li Bingbing, a scheming girl from a poor family, spread rumors about others in order to obtain the position of Communist Youth League secretary. She made a big fuss but was not punished in any way. 2. Why does Sister Si still have such a good relationship with Li Bingbing? Normal people would just stay away after knowing about it. 3. The male protagonist encounters Sister Si and a boy by chance. Li Bingbing is beside her and lays a plan. After hesitation, the male protagonist informs Li Yang. After asking, Li Yang learns that he is the boy Li Bingbing likes. Analyze this paragraph. Since the male protagonist chooses to tell Li Yang, it means that the distance between Sister Si and the boy is beyond that of a normal friendship. Friends distance, and Li Bingbing is next to her, then our normal thinking is that when a girl helps her best friend chase a boy, the girl should stand next to her and bring her good friend to stand with the boy. This is obviously a problem, and the foreshadowing is unreasonable. How did Li Bingbing know that the male protagonist would appear and smile in the direction of the male protagonist? And who can Li Yang ask after the male protagonist informs Li Yang? Who did he learn that that boy was the one Li Bingbing liked? And why would you believe it so easily? There is also a roommate and a supporting character who said after Li Yang inquired about it that girls would be embarrassed to face the person they like. This point of unreasonableness has reached its peak. The previous plot stated that the male protagonist knew that Li Bingbing was a scheming woman in the dormitory. Why did he say this? Why would Li Yang believe it so easily? So as a sweet love story with a single female protagonist, the plot of the male and female protagonists is reasonable and sweet. What I like very much is that the male protagonist went through the external relations department without mentioning the plot, and the career line has also developed. These alone are not a masterpiece, but also a masterpiece. However, although the plots of the supporting characters Li Bingbing, Li Yang, and Sister Si are not much, they are like sugar-coated bullets. The love plot of the male and female protagonists is sugar-coated. He Their plot is a cannonball. Watching the male and female protagonists fall in love sweetly, the cannonball immediately pops up in the face. Apart from these three supporting characters, there is the little villain in the love story, the scheming girl. What role do they play?

This treasure. The author's writing skills are very good. Don't know if it's my problem? I actually read a flavor of Jiangnan @wuwuwuwuwu

The writing is okay. I personally think your writing is a little better than that of @prince. Maybe this is because you have more experience. But I give you a suggestion, don't spoil it. Otherwise, if the audience knows the ending of He Yang and Sister Si in advance, the readers will not have much desire to read on.

Sour and sour. This is purely autobiographical. [Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying] It's good, but because it's an autobiography, I have to deduct one star. [Cry][cry][cry][cry][cry][cry]

It's really good. I feel that the low rating is due to the book's title being a bit der.

To be fair, the score is low, it shouldn't be 7.2, I feel it is at least 8.5

You better not be an autobiography [punch out] [punch out] [punch out] [punch out] Why is the rating so low? I think it's pretty good [punch out][punch out][punch out]

It's good-looking, except for the name (it's really autobiographical)

It's great to read, and the three views of the characters are the most honest books I've ever read.

Very good. The writing is not bad.