The Knight's Road: The Tale of Alan

This is my first novel. Everything has a beginning and an end, and it must be completed well.

Oh my God, it's really, really awesome. I have to give you five stars. You have to work hard and don't stop updating, otherwise I swear, I will kick your ass with my shoe. I'm not kidding, author!

A fresh stream of tomatoes belongs to It's very interesting so far. The combination of various jokes is also very reasonable. There is no forced laughter that makes the plot abrupt. The characterization is also very good It is a blessing to see such an upright and real protagonist in Tomato, the protagonist's moral bottom line. Many online novels nowadays are accustomed to shaping the protagonists into beings with extremely low moral bottom lines. In fact, it is just to cater to the taste of most viewers For such a kind-hearted character, if the author has enough ability, the upper limit of character creation will far exceed the former.

This book is very well written, with a lot of frustrations and quarrels, and is very realistic. There is no brain that travels through time and space, no golden fingers, no system, and no old man. Even the young master, the superior, appreciated and nurtured, but also beat and scolded. Realism, struggle, suffering, and progress. Have self-doubt and have the confidence to work hard. Sam and Bob are well portrayed, how can they be grounded and sober without going through severe beatings.

At this point, the author has some problems. However, it is already qualified among similar authors. I hope the author will continue to work hard and improve continuously. The article is novel and the protagonist is an indigenous person. Emphasis on the collision of classes. Feudal oppression is very heavy when describing the protagonist and his family. I felt that it was superior to novels. It is deeply rooted in people's hearts. I am already better than similar authors in terms of conception. Some of my writing skills are not good. Although it is my first book, I can see that I have a good foundation. The plot really interested me. It's not as old-fashioned as those lord articles. LeBron is a profound character. I won't spoil it here, I can only say that it is real and touching, and it exists in a kind of image difference. It is very consistent with the identity of the character and true to reality (there may be differences in interpretation, but this full-bodied character is really like a living person. It is different from other novels. This is a very brilliant place.) Speaking of problems, some plots are unreasonable. I will point them out one by one when I have time in the future. Maybe the comment is not very appropriate, I hope the author understands. The author is a hard worker. A person who likes novels. A writer who wants to bring beauty to readers is very diligent. It will be successful in the future. Just keep trying. Some of the writing is acceptable

A book of such good quality that it doesn't look like a tomato It's a bit short. Please read it after you reach 100 chapters.

It feels like an epic poem, so nice

It has to be five stars. I was worried that the reading time was not long enough, haha, so I didn't comment.

It's not a novel, the characters are well-drawn, the plot is full of ups and downs, and it's full of epic feeling.

Come on, well written!