After Entering an Infinite-Loop World, I Gained the Ability to Read Minds

The words "feel" and "feel" used by the heroine contain a lot of content, and some strength and precision will be lost when reading. For example, "the heroine feels cold" is replaced by "the heroine feels cold climbing up the heroine's back", "the heroine feels something is wrong" is replaced by "the heroine senses something abnormal" and so on. Just a little change can make a big difference. There could be more sentences describing the horror atmosphere. In this regard, I personally think the author's narrative is a bit straightforward. For example, "There are no lights in this place. I walked to the end of the corridor and found a door. When I approached, a hand suddenly stretched out." Replaced with "The door at the end of the corridor was ajar, and it was pitch black inside. There was only the sound of some kind of liquid dripping. As I approached, a pale hand suddenly stretched out from the crack of the door, with dark red dirt embedded in the cracks of the door. It didn't grab me, but... Waved it gently, as if to say hello." Etc. The above are just some of my opinions while reading, and are not specific to specific chapters or the author's writing style. Each author has his own unique style of expression. These ideas are just a starting point, hoping to provide another perspective for creation. I believe that with the author's talent, through continuous exploration and polishing, he will be able to create more exciting and moving words. Four stars are for encouragement, and I look forward to seeing more perfect works written by the author.

If this is the case, then give yourself a thumbs up. After all, I have written more than 100,000 words. I never thought I could write so many words. Now I am setting off towards 20+. Believe in yourself. I hope more and more people will like this book, and I also hope that my writing will get better and better. I wish you all happiness and fortune every day.