[Physical Transmigration + Overwhelmingly Satisfying + Ruthless and Decisive, No Saintly Heroics + Scheming Heroine + Plots Within Plots + Invasion by Another Race + No Harem]
Duan Jiu was originally from Blue Star. After an accident, the System forcibly brought him to a high-martial cultivation world, where he lay low for five hundred years. He was bound to a Villain Redemption System and tasked with adopting and redeeming Jiang Li, a future demoness who would destroy and slaughter everyone in this world five hundred years later.
Teach Jiang Li love and kindness, and save this world!
System: “A villain has appeared. Choose to redeem them and receive all their villain points, or kill them and get half the points.”
“Points can be exchanged for cultivation.”
Duan Jiu: “What, he's a villain? Then kill him. Justice that comes too late isn't justice. Death is his redemption.”
The demoness Jiang Li: “Brother, I'll listen to you, but you have to be mine...”
Duan Jiu: “Are you out of your mind? I'm your brother.”
The demoness Jiang Li: “He's not my blood brother. Did I ever say he was? Keep nagging and see if you can still get out of this immortal realm!”
Duan Jiu: “...”
As time went on, Duan Jiu realized that redemption was merely part of a trap set long ago. He, the demoness Jiang Li, the hidden powerhouses of this world, and even the mysterious and powerful System were all just pieces on the board.
And beyond that was an even bigger scheme. Was this a plot within a plot?
Everything was being controlled by the mysterious Fu Xing race from beyond the world.
They intended to rule and enslave this world, turning it into a medicinal field for their cultivation.
They even wanted to lay hands on Blue Star?
Be a pawn?
Duan Jiu wouldn't play along. Anyone who wanted the role could take it.
He would be the one moving the pieces.
To all who invade my homeland: though the Fu Xing race may be far away, I will still destroy you.
He'll slay immortals and demons alike.
The author is great. Although I haven't read it for long, I have gone through the general content. The core of your plot should be written around the "layout", which also highlights the characteristics. However, the male protagonist almost only wants to return to Blue Star, and the emotional drama is difficult to write, so I suggest that the author give it a try and let the male protagonist understand what he is doing. What is the heroine thinking, so that the other female characters can give up. I hope the author will suggest reducing some of the plots between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, otherwise people will say that they are having an affair. Because you, the author, are labeling them as having no harem, then, author, you can go for the pure love route, which can also attract some readers who like to watch single female protagonists.
First give yourself a good review. Do you have any friends who read the book? Which friend often urges you to update? Please comment and let me find you. Is it poorly written? A friend has added a bookshelf. If it doesn't matter, you can tell me. Let me know that I'm really bad at writing.
Come on [Admiration]🥰[Admiration] By the way, it's a single heroine, I see you wrote no harem in your profile [Sending my heart][Sending my heart]
There are few people. It's not without reason. The whole process is controlled by the system 🍉
It's okay, but the rank gap is a bit big. In the first few pictures, he was a martial artist, and then he became a martial emperor. Maybe I missed it, but overall it's not bad. Come on🤔
It's pretty good, but sometimes you can't redeem your cultivation level, and the cultivation level is temporary.
It's a pity that there is no yandere plot