Film, TV, and Anime Crossover: I Became the Male Lead's Baby

The writing is very nice and healing, but sometimes the logic is a bit confusing, but it does not affect the viewing. Also, in the section about Li Lianhua, I feel that the first half and the second half are a bit inconsistent. In the first part, he is clearly called daddy, but later he becomes a master. In the first part, he is clearly a three-year-old child, but in the second part, he is boiling medicine for Li Lianhua alone. Although he does not specify how old she is, it is definitely more than just boiling medicine alone. Three years old, the connection in the middle, I feel that there are many things that have not been explained. Lianhua has not taught the heroine how to make medicine and check her pulse. These are all learned by the heroine in the previous world. The author said before that everything the heroine learns will be engraved in her soul. I just think that it is learned from the previous world. But she is only three years old when I meet Li Lianhua now. What is the concept of three years old? I think this section has quite a big problem, but the other sections are very well written. There were several sections that made me cry. I hope the author will continue to work hard and improve. After all, I really like reading it.

The heroine Chen Xi My Fireworks in the World: The heroine became Meng Yanchen's child. On a rainy night, they met. Meng Yanchen took the heroine home and started the mutual redemption between them through family ties. It's really good to see that Meng Yanchen did not fall into emotional entanglement with Xu Qin and reconciled with his family. The heroine has a complete life, but the story of the heroine's growth is not described in detail. It only writes about people's inner journey at several points in her life. Really nice. I hope to write a story about Li Xiangyi and Li Lianhua raising children in Lianhua House. Give them a family redemption.

I read Yun Zhiyu. The writing is very good, a bit like prose. It is very warm and touching. It reminds me of me and my mother, but I don't know when the time period is. When I thought it was a continuation of Gong Shangjiao's appointment, Shangguan Qian appeared again, but it does not affect the reading. It will make people cry.

Very warm and healing! Good looking, saving each other! However, there is a slight problem with the logic of the story. It is different from before and after, and it feels like I wrote it wherever I thought. The end of one chapter may be completely different from the beginning of the next. It is obviously a type of fast travel, but the memory of the first world has become crystallized, the second world asks if the memory can be retained, and the third world starts from scratch again...? But it doesn't affect the author's writing style, which is really good!

Dear author, can you write another full-time hunter? Please🥺

It's good-looking. It's really good to accompany and redeem yourself as a child. There is a kind of love called family.

Very good, squatting like a young man singing songs