The Twin-Tailed Mecha Girl Won't Dream of Ancient Cultivators

Although I haven't read it for a long time, I still give it 5 stars for fear that this book is dead. Please give the author a big boost. Novice authors have this kind of trough period. As long as there are no poisonous points (you can read more comments) and the characters are not blurry (you can prepare the main characters in advance, and then integrate the characters with the plot). Also, don't rush to push the plot. If you want to write about love, you should use daily routines to pile them up one by one (especially for the kind of eldest lady, whose status and vision are different by birth. For example: "Tian Ying" although this book is different, it is the smoothest plot of "the male protagonist saves the female protagonist and later cultivates into a positive result") I also recommend the author to refer to the book "This Miss, I'm Really a Good Monster", which has a very similar background. Originally I just wanted to encourage the author, but I ended up writing so much without realizing it. Big boost to the author😁😁😁

The low score mainly comes from some plots that have restrictions on the protagonist. The author may do this to suppress the plot, or to create a fuller character image, but this will make readers feel aggrieved. This is a big taboo in online writing. It is difficult to balance the purpose of writing and the reader's feelings, but once you gravitate towards a certain side of the book, you will fall in love with it. Apart from this shortcoming, everything else is great. If this is the author's first book, that's great, but if not, the author will have to wait a while.

New wine in old bottles, with a unique charm. Elements such as "corporate", "immortality" and "cyberpunk" are very common, and this book combines them well. The plot is obviously a bit abrupt and deliberately pushes the plot in many places, but it doesn't hurt. The character's personality is relatively distinct. Next, it depends on how the author manages the growth of the mechanic girl (it can't be like this now), handles the emotional line (it can't be a single female protagonist), and promotes the main plot (it's very grand, now in the novice village, there will definitely be an advanced village and a monster-fighting tribe later) without letting the combat power collapse.

I love reading it, it is refreshing and clear, the logic is clear, and the writing is better than 80% of the peers. The shortcoming is that it is not enough to read. Also, the advantages of the protagonist who is an immortal cultivator always feel a bit boring, and is a bit unworthy of the evaluation of "The Last Fire". I hope the author can add some patches to the protagonist in the future, such as the protagonist's bloodline, magical powers, alien talents, etc. In the former cultivating civilization. The current golden finger is still a bit weak.

It's not bad. There are many female protagonists, the protagonist is decisive in killing (compared to other novels), there are no too many poisonous points, the plot development logic is reasonable, and everything is there [smile], I hope the author can stick to it until the end.

It's okay. There aren't many tracks for cyber + immortal cultivators to travel through. The writing is okay. It's a good casual novel. But please be aware that although it is a cool novel, the protagonist is not a demon cultivator. You can't stop eating beef in the early stage. You won't stop eating beef until about 30 chapters. If you look at the villain who doesn't eat beef at the beginning of the novel, you don't have to worry about it before complaining.

It's quite interesting. It combines the ancient cultivation of immortality with the modern cyberspace, and the world view is also very big. I have several love lines, and I really like the little maintenance man.

It's beautiful. The writing is delicate, the narration is superb, and the heroines all have their own strengths. It's super beautiful! It's just that the author updates too slowly, only updating one or two chapters a day. Even the dogs in the production team don't dare to be so blatantly lazy!

I can't figure out why it's not popular

It's really good, the story is quite novel, and it's quite enjoyable to read.