The Frail Beauty Takes the Entertainment Industry by Storm

It feels good, but I have a small opinion. I feel that the content of the script is too long. Can it be cut down appropriately? I still want to see the plot development of the male and female protagonists, the relationship between the supporting characters and the protagonist, the connection and development of the plot, etc. A very long script has been crammed in, and it feels like a new story has been crammed in for me halfway through the book. I feel that the content of the script part can be enclosed in square brackets to mark it as a script, or you can put dividing lines when you start to talk about the content of the script. Otherwise, I will just skip the script part and read it roughly. I only need to glance at it to know what the content is. I still want to see the development of the main plot. Having said all this, I think it's good and I want to make some suggestions. I'm not deliberately looking for trouble. I also hope that the author can write a plot that surprises me even more! ! Looking forward to...🥰Some sisters may like to read the script, which doesn't mean you have to delete it, but consider this dividing line. It's really friendly to readers like me who just glance at it [crying][crying]

Super nice But I have an idea (rather dark [thinking]) What would happen if the heroine suddenly jumped off the building and committed suicide when the hero loved her most? [Because she is an immersive acting role. She has experienced it so many times and the hero's guidance. During the cooperation, the two got along and the hero slowly fell in love with her. Finally, when the male protagonist loves her the most (when there are stars or the moon is very bright and round), she stands on the rooftop in white clothes and dances (like the crazy feeling of the eldest princess in Mo Yuyunjian) and dances, and then dances [ Shy] [You taste it carefully] [Learned] [Only my personal thoughts, it is about the part where the female supporting actor commented on the female lead's skills but the male protagonist was indifferent and then expressed his agreement with the female supporting actor] - That chapter looked really irritating [smile] [smile] [stop]

How can I put it this way? This book is very interesting, but there are a few things. The male protagonist is inexplicable in the early stage, and he always compares the female protagonist's counterattack to a kitten flashing its claws, kittens, etc. The description of the male protagonist is very strange. It may be my personal reason and I feel a little uncomfortable. But in general, the description and single line of the female protagonist are very interesting.

Overall, it's pretty good-looking and a very novel subject matter, but I always feel a little uncomfortable. That is, the female competition always makes people feel inexplicably frustrated. I hope there are only two scenes of female competition, and there won't be too many emotional disputes later. Watching too many disputes makes me a little tired, because this is a relatively popular script. The heroine is really nice. I like her character very much. She feels a little crazy, but also a little cute. She really feels like a female goose.

Well, let me tell you my feelings. First of all, it's super good-looking. The hero treats the heroine delicately, from the moment when the heroine doesn't believe that she is loved by anyone to the point where she uses up all her strength to move. I'm very touched that the hero is accompanying her. Secondly, the script is super good (maybe I like such scripts). I believe there are countless Zhu Chi in the world waiting to be rescued. When I watched the moment when Zhu Chi gave birth to the baby, I felt that Zhu Chi loved her baby, but Director Xie actually made her hate the child because of Ruan's ideas. I didn't understand at the time and was even angry with Director Xie. I thought An An was already very pitiful and even wanted to abuse my An An, but later he calmed down my anger. Great [like] As for Chen Jingshu, I feel sorry for her. Her world has gone from sunny to rainy. Did she have love for him (brother)? I think she did in those days. But her heart is broken. It was broken step by step by domestic violence, silence (even an accomplice) and the indifference of her neighbors. She had had enough of the rain and wanted to feel the warmth of the sun. She chose the path that suited her best, and she also chose the most painful path for her brother. I marveled at her willpower (the script is very current) Speaking of the female protagonist An An and the male protagonist Director Xie, I understand their emotional lines very well. From interesting to possessive to worthy of being loved, don't doubt this. It is very delicate. The female protagonist has a good sense of transition from prey to hunter, from a sensitive tortoise to a rabbit that slowly stretches out its "ears"🐰I really like such evenly matched fox🦊 and rabbit. Looking forward to the next story and script [Chigua]

It's very beautiful. The plot when the heroine plays "The Doctor" is really heartbreaking. On the other hand, it also warns girls to be careful and stay away from strangers. Their own safety is the most important thing.

Help, help, it's really beautiful. I beg you, the author, not to cheat. You must not cheat. The relationship between the male and female protagonists is so lustful. Help! ! ! Now I quite like the other characters except Wen Wen, the brother. I hope there won't be so many female rivals in the future. The girls are so beautiful with each other [Sending my heart]

The relationship between the male and female protagonists is particularly delicately described, and the emotional changes are not cliche. I admit that I was attracted to it. The first two scripts depict the emotions of the male and female protagonists very well. Originally, I didn't like to intersperse other stories in the novel, but now I find that I was wrong. It seems that it is about Zhu Chi and Chen Jingshu, but I feel that it is describing the heroine. This part is really just right, and the stories of the characters in the play are used to promote a change in the heroine's emotions. Oh my god, how can there be such a talented person. Another part is the relationship between the male and female protagonists. I really feel that the emotions they present are really tense, not too much, but it makes you feel their pain and the emotional pull and change between them. I'm really looking forward to it, please update soon! ! !

In this book, I seem to see a real Shen Ci'an in front of me, who also lost her parents and was abandoned by her adoptive parents who did not love her. But he did not fall in love at first sight like in other novels, but described the process delicately. They are the same type of people and both are crazy, but they have never harmed others. When Shen Ci'an wrote the tragic characters in the book, I felt that he was that character. He could show his sadness on the surface but hide it in his heart. Every role they play makes me feel a huge sadness, like the sun doesn't shine on them

The play-within-a-play content is relatively high, which I prefer, and the author's writing is also very vivid, and the plot closely follows current events. The only thing I don't like very much is that the male protagonist seems to be too perfect. He has a feeling of authority and wants to disobey. Also, the female protagonist is too shy, haha. I hope she will be more sensible and not fall in love too easily. Rate it early. I hope the book's rating will increase quickly and the author will update it soon.