Worlds Collide: Starting with the Sky Falling

It's quite good-looking and more in line with my taste. The main reason for the low rating is that there are too few people watching it and there is no traffic. Tomato's scoring mechanism is based on the number of viewers and your ratings. I have read 119 chapters so far, and there are no big poisonous points. It is better than some books with higher ratings and more people, but there are a lot of poisonous points. The author mainly writes about the direction of the team. Of course, personal strength is also included, but he is not a lone wolf. And there is only one female protagonist at present, and the possibility of adding more in the future cannot be ruled out. After all, there are other hidden clues. It's a cool article, and I haven't seen much suppression. It's always been pretty cool. I'm not a professional grader, so I will say whatever comes to mind. The book is quite to my liking.

The writing is good, I hope I can finish it and not be a eunuch.

The talent of the protagonist. At present, it is only suitable when the number of people is small. Wait until the team reaches hundreds, thousands or tens of thousands of people. To obtain rare materials, even exhaustion is not enough. If this talent can be used to cover others, they can also get the effect. That's pretty good.

At present, talents can already set the drops of monsters due to the linkage of several talents. Then, my subordinates mainly sign contracts with the protagonist. If they fight monsters, the extra drops obtained due to talents will go to the protagonist. The protagonist is currently nesting in a corner of the city. Should we consider a way to move around? For example, each city builds teleportation arrays, or the protagonist obtains a treasure and goes directly to a cloud island or floating city. Take your men and the city and go out to fight monsters. Otherwise, now that the number of monsters is limited, the protagonist won't be able to fight anything.

It's a pretty good novel. When the protagonist kills monsters, he gets one more chance to choose a drop. The story is well written, but it's a pity that the oath of alliance is too classic. The story is a bit cliche. It's readable, but it feels a little too secondary and boring. You can read it when you're bored.

The setting is perfect, not brainless, and the plot is smooth. (Superior) Five-star orange-, five A Sense of substitution A, attraction B, plug-in B, setting A, writing style B, imagination B, rhythm A, main line B, character design A, logic A Extra points: none #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. This way it should not be blocked. 1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria·Ninth Edition Revised (1) Evaluation items 1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view. 2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading. 3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative. 4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency. 5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot? 6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line. 7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low? 8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal. 9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive? 10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition. 11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (2) Evaluation grouping 1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction 2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings 3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation 4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center 5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense (3) Rating of recommended evaluation items 1. Highlights: S-level 4 points, A-level 2 points 2. Standard: 1 point for Grade B, 0 points for Grade B 3. Defects: Grade C - 1 point, Grade D - 3 points 3. Rating of online articles (1) Up, up 1. Red+: Total score is above level 30 2. Red: Total score is 26 or above 3. Red-: 8 items A (2) High-quality and bright web articles 1. Orange+: Total score is level 22 or above 2. Orange: Total score is 18 or above 3. Orange-: 5 items A (3) Shang Xia·High-level online articles 1. Purple+: Total score is 14 or above 2. Purple: Total score is level 10 or above 3. Purple-: 8 items B (4) Upper-intermediate and high-level online writing 1. Five-star blue+: total score is level 6 or above 2. Five-star blue: total score is level 4 or above 4. Five-star green: 5 items B (5) Zhongyi·High-standard online articles 1. Four-star green+: total score is level 2 or above 2. Four-star green: total score is level 1 3. Four-star white: 10 items C (6) Middle 2 and 2·Standard online text 1. Samsung White+: Total score -1 level 2. Samsung White: Total Score -2 Level (7) Middle and lower three•Flawed web articles 1. Samsung Gray+: Total score -3 levels 2. Samsung Gray: Total Score -4 Level (6) Xia Shang·Web articles with great flaws 1. Samsung Black+: Total score -5 levels 2. Samsung Black: Total Score -6 Level 3. One-star black +: total score -7 levels 4. One-star black: total score -8 levels 5. Two-star black: 10 items D One star is an invalid rating, two stars is the lowest rating (7) Medium•No rating (lower middle to upper middle) (8) Inferior • No grading (middle to lower to lower) (9) Xiaxia·Malicious 1. The first stage: total score - below level 10 2. The second stage: total score - below level 20 3. The third stage: 10 E

The writing is very nice\(//∇//)\Personally, I feel that I still need to transition to level 10 as soon as possible to expand the world view [Thinking] This writing method is fine if it is slower at the starting point, but it is a bit slow on Tomato.

From the perspective of a cool novel, it's okay, but the protagonist's plot is a bit too much, and it feels like a half-sweat, strong-sounding plot.

Other people's talents appear more often than the protagonist's talents. Forget it. At the end of the day, I was loyal to the military advisor.

This book is good, it's a team flow, I personally don't like Lone Wolf in the Doomsday, the protagonist's personality is quite good and calm, not stupid, not a virgin, the author is also very active, keep up the good work