As a Fox Demon Reborn as a Woman, I Refuse to Become a Pet

Five stars, not much to say, the plot is okay, very interesting, the format and writing style are quite comfortable, I have to say something, the contradictions are a bit far-fetched, such as the part about solving the demon guide, just cancel the cultivation without explanation, and then develop the subsequent plot. To be honest, it is abrupt, after all, it is just before It's lenient to write about two people's confession. Although the relationship is unstable due to Ye's uneasy psychology in the middle, and in this world view plus Ye's character, the character's attitude changes instantly due to the damage of cultivation. It seems very reasonable, but the two of them revealed their hearts after all. If it changes in an instant, what will happen next? The confession of his heart feels like a joke, and it is a bit unbearable. I can write more psychological descriptions of the night after my cultivation is broken. From the disappointment and disbelief at the beginning, and then gradually to despair in getting along with Xue, during this period, I can let Xue continue to do nothing but act without explanation. Because this not only enriches the characters but also deepens the reader's impression of the conflicting reasons for the relationship between the two. In the end, it becomes dark, and later hurts Xue and asks for a sword, resulting in a loss of soul and so on. Anyway, with such an appropriate emotional transition, it can be said to be a perfect work. In terms of character design, in fact, this contradiction is well written, but if I look at it emotionally, I wish it was more delicate. Friends who read this comment, the track of this book is very interesting, the plot feels like chasing your wife in the crematorium, and it has unique features. It is worth appreciating. I hope the works will get better and better Ah, why don't you say more?

I just finished reading the content of the 5-18 update and would like to give a quick review. [Eat melon] The "sexual transformation", "yandere", and "wife chasing crematorium" labels in the introduction are honestly very attractive to me. I have seen too many traditional stickers and sweets, but I want to see something else. The combination of meat and vegetables is also very good. There is not much to say, so let's comment one by one. [Exploration] 1. There is insufficient in-depth exploration of the basic gender transition of Baiwen. The gender recognition of the protagonist Tu Shanxue, the little fox, is simplified into a routine transition, resulting in the setting becoming more and more novel. The article with two female protagonists repeatedly describes other supporting characters. This is not what readers want to see. If I really want to read this, why don't I read other articles with multiple CP tags? ? ? [What] 2. In the middle and later stages, it fell into a cyclical narrative of "punishment-soft-hearted-re-punishment". It lacked long-term foreshadowing and expansion of the world view, and the work had poor coherence. Although this fast-paced rhythm adapts to the algorithm recommendation mechanism, it sacrifices the character's growth arc and exposes the typical shortcomings of the "hundred chapter dilemma". [Cover face] 3. The image of the yandere heroine Ye Wanqing presents a sense of division: there are many forced turns (do you want to use the excuse of magic cultivation as an excuse for a whole book), and lacks logical self-consistency. The gender identity anxiety of the protagonist Tu Shanxue, the little fox, has been reduced to a labeling tool, and has been reduced to a symbol of "misery" and "pity". The characters lack depth and fail to evoke emotional resonance. [Understood] 4. The work packages controlling relationships as "sadomasochistic aesthetics" and avoids ethical reflection on power inequality (for example, Ye Wanqing's forced nurturing behavior did not explore the root of its psychological distortion). Compared with other veteran yandere novels, Tu Shanxue's Little Fox is more focused on traffic-oriented sensory stimulation and lacks thinking in its depiction of yandere. Although this strategy can attract traffic in the short term, it cannot hide the empty value. [Thinking] If the novel is full of 5 chapters, I would only give it to 3, but with the free Tomato novel, I can give it to 4. I am still looking forward to the subsequent "Wife Chasing Crematorium", and I also hope that there will be more astringent details (just kidding, but I don't recommend reading it after writing it privately and sending it to me) and the psychology of the two heroines, and the number of supporting roles should be reduced as much as possible (don't overdo the word count). [Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]

It's very good-looking. There's a bit of a knife in the front, but the more you read, the better it gets. It's very interesting. Other Lily novels get a bit boring after reading dozens of chapters. The dream section contains real feelings. Don't be "indistinguishable" from Li Huowang later.

This is a very delicately written book about abuse. Xue Ye's abuse is heart-wrenching, and the logic is very clear... It's a good book worth reading. Speaking of some personal shortcomings, Ye's abuse of Xue was too heavy. In my opinion, Xiaoxue did enough for Ye's love and repayment. The author handled the first reconciliation between the two very well, with abuse and warmth, coupled with their mutual feelings, very successful. But in contrast, in the middle and later stages of the article, Ye's abuse of Xiaoxue due to misunderstanding was too heavy... The writing was too unforgettable... This made me powerless, and I dare not make Xiaoxue worthy of forgiving Ye's bullying... Because the result of Ye's behavior was too evil, it was a full range of intimidation, betrayal and betrayal in body, mind and soul. Deception... In the later period, the intersection line between Ye and Xue was too far away and scattered (in conjunction with other plots), resulting in no progress in the relationship between the two protagonists after a hundred chapters. It felt like it was separated from the main plot, the article lost the protagonist, and I didn't know what to write... So it seemed very messy... The reading experience dropped seriously... In the end, I personally feel that no matter what Ye does, she is not worthy of being forgiven... Xiaoxue sacrificed from the beginning to the end, and in the end, if Xiaoxue has to experience the painful "letting go" of the world, then I feel that it is just a book about abusing Xiaoxue... She is too painful... And if Xue Ye wants to become a couple, this is a denial of Xiaoxue's previous injuries, negating nearly 300 chapters so far... The author's unforgettable writing of Night's Revenge is really difficult to balance and forgive... It is also difficult for me to accept at the moment...

This book is very interesting. Part of the evil point is really just to select the audience, but it suits my taste🤓. Some seemingly abstract and outrageous operations can be rounded off by the author. I think the contradiction between the two is caused by the lack of opportunities for face-to-face communication. Obviously the author's big hand will not give the opportunity so easily. The torture of the young couple will continue for a long time. Also, the author is very active, and the comments are like [Send heart]

Well, in my personal opinion, the plot and character settings in the early and middle stages are well written. Ye's morbidity, conflicting psychology and the process of gradually growing love are well written. Tu Shanxue's rebellious psychology is also well written. There is no criticism. At the later stage of the current update progress, it can be said that the poisonous points have emerged. First, the part where Tu Shanxue helps Ye recover his cultivation is no different from a mute. It seems that the author is using the knife for the sake of the cat clan. I personally feel that it is a bit inexplicable (if I didn't understand it, it's my problem and has nothing to do with the author) and then I try to break through the dream of Jin Dan in the later period. It is probably the foreshadowing of the author. I hope it will have a big effect in the later period. Anyway, I hope the author will fill it in if it is a trap. Don't end it hastily with some Lily articles. At present, this book can still be entered into the trap and read for a long time. I hope it will not end up being a bad project. I will give it a 4⭐

The first time I was abused to the point of numbness [crazy], I always felt that I was a very sympathetic person, but after reading it in one day, the biggest feeling is - I really adjusted my mood to the point of numbness, the author, your knife successfully cut open my deeper understanding of the word abuse in the novel [cry] [cry], maybe I will never empathize with the novel again. Really, I really feel numb after reading it [smile], the author is amazing [like] [like] [like], strong, really strong [like]

First of all, it is well written. As long as you can accept the rhythm of advancing the narrative through "misunderstandings", this book will be quite good. Most of the plot advancement in this article relies on "misunderstanding" and "emotion overriding reason". To put it bluntly, it means that both parties can reconcile after breaking things apart and talking about them, but they are unable to explain them due to various reasons, which ultimately leads to the situation getting worse and worse. Approximately "the intention is good, the execution is bad" It's okay to advance this kind of narrative once or twice, but if you rely on this method to develop the plot throughout the whole story, it's easy to cause negative feedback that leads to viewer fatigue, or even "the character's mood has not grown." In addition, this book likes to give each character Lalang a voice. Xiao Qi and a certain saint, someone from the Hehuan Sect and the little fox who ran away from home, the fox disciple and the pink fox who couldn't catch any fish. It seems that every character must be assigned a destination and sewn up for them. When the emotional disputes of the main characters rely on the more difficult narrative method of "misunderstanding" to advance, the reader's mentality will tend to be anxious about "when will this shit be explained clearly?" At this time, the characterization and shaping of the secondary characters are difficult to watch. To put it bluntly, I don't care. I would rather focus the narrative on the main emotional drama and advance the emotional line. But that doesn't mean that the secondary characters are useless. Xiao Qi wants to introduce the essence of the Demonic Skill as a trump card, and the fox who runs away from home wants to tie up the Hehuan Sect. The portrayal and appearance of these characters are actually meaningful, but when they are mixed into the main emotional line that is pulled and dominated by a large number of emotions, they will appear very ignorant. "I came here to see these two lunatics dragging and torturing each other, you fox girls, please don't get in my way!" As long as these little foxes can help, even if it is just a casual reminder or two, the protagonists' mood will hesitate and seem to improve. Even if you hypnotize yourself after a few sentences and firmly believe that "No, it's definitely not what she said, it must be the night/snow that ruined me", the reader's emotions can be expressed to a certain extent. As for now, reading is really stressful. The narrative has been foreshadowing the sword spirit pattern and purple energy. It has been repeated many times but there has been no progress and it seems confusing and unclear. The suffocating feeling like a python is wrapped around it.

In addition to being a bit poisonous and a classic plot, this book is pretty good, Hao Kang, and the best before chapter 70. Starting from the plot where the protagonist breaks through the golden elixir, the rest of the plot is a bit boring [thinking], what should I say, the rest of the plot can be guessed (probably not) [full], this book still has an audience. Around chapters 5 and 60, the audience for this book should be all selected (personal feeling, don't criticize) Keep up the good work, author, and look forward to your next book [Like]

It's a very good book. Here's a suggestion for future book friends. The actual knife may not hurt, but it will be very uncomfortable😣😣😣There's nothing to say about the foreshadowing, it's all handled super well👍👍👍 When I first started reading it, I thought this might be an ordinary novel with two heroines, a bit sadistic at the beginning and sweet at the end✨✨✨. Halfway through, I felt that this novel might be different from other two heroines - it was a novel with two heroines. Half knife, half candy🌝🌝🌝It wasn't until the last two chapters that I realized that I was wrong, completely wrong🌚🌚🌚The real book is just like a knife with honey on the tip. Only the last two chapters are truly perfect and sweet😭😭😭 (Author of Little Fox Girl, please 🙏🙏🙏 in addition to updating the new book, please post a few more sweet and greasy extra chapters for Xue Ye🙃🙃🙃)