In the Great Zhou dynasty, the Imperial Jade Seal contained the lingering soul of Princess Zhaoyang. The Young Lord of Jiuyou bore the divine aspect of twin dragons, while Rong Ying, the princess's reincarnation, had lost her memories because of an incomplete cycle of rebirth. Various factions fought over the seal and the imperial throne, while Chancellor Rong vowed to sever his daughter's ties to her fate.
The underground palace collapsed, and the outline of the Pavilion of Meng Po appeared through the blood rain.
Rong Ying pressed the jade seal against her heart, letting the twin dragon patterns devour her soul. "Huaizhou, if there is another life, I want to meet you as an ordinary woman!"
The Young Lord held her as they fell, while the projection of the Rebirth Stele covered the land in every direction.
The inscription began to run backward. Eighty-seven thousand carved traces of "Rong Ying" vanished one by one, until only an unfinished twin lotus remained.
"No, A Ying!" The Young Lord's blood stained her frost-white temples. "We have a marriage pact. You can't do this..."
In the void, Rong Ying caught hold of his dissolving spirit and gathered up the last fragment of his divine aspect, pressing it into his heart. "I wish so much that what you said could come true. When the plum tree blooms with flowers from our next life, you'll come claim your wedding night..."
The red spider lilies of Jiuyou bloomed across the mortal world.
Rong Ying sat beneath the plum tree, watching fresh snow cover the cracks in the Rebirth Stele.
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