League of Legends: One Thought, God or Demon, Ruling Runeterra

It can be seen that the author is doing his best in writing, but some of the expressions still remain in the lines of his own imagination, without giving the impression that they are lines that the character would say. The story is too thin, giving people the feeling of being lifted high but put down gently. For example, the confrontation between Demacia and Noxa was far less shocking than imagined. Secondly, it is not only the appearance and performance of familiar heroes that can really attract readers. There is also the author's understanding and description of the game's worldview. I hope to see a richer Rune Continent written by the author and more characters with distinctive personalities. Personally, I think the author's description of the environment is too lacking and the description of the appearance of the characters in some parts is too focused. He could try to depict the characters in more detail in terms of their daily movements, demeanor, and psychology. A few humble opinions to encourage us.

Not bad, we still need to work hard on combat capability.

The system is just given by a star spirit

Come on!!!

Nice looking, love watching