Awooo! Commander, Your Spirit Form Is Licking My Palm Again

It's so refreshing, so pretty. Men are menstruating and women are going crazy. It's the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. It's so beautiful that the five-guaranteed households in the village miss and love the widow. It's so beautiful that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood the Qiantang River. It's so beautiful. God is my rose. It illuminates my dark life and makes my world meaningful. I run, I jump, and I dance tango on the balcony of the 20-storey building, which makes me realize that God does exist. I was so beautiful that I couldn't stop crying. From now on, the world will no longer be short of water.

It's okay, it's a lot of fun, and although it has a lot of flaws, it's still worth watching. The writing is average, with some grammatical errors, repeated words and typos, which in some cases may affect viewing comprehension. There are too many referring words such as "XX", which at least made me a little tired of reading the whole article. It's hard to stand up to the character design. He is obviously a powerful person who has been trained to the point of ascension. The behavior and psychological activities described by the author are similar to those of a new recruit who has just come out to practice. All the characters, including the attackers, are quite flat. The villain often shows his face to the protagonist without learning a lesson. Many scenes are just for the sake of sweetness and do things that in my opinion are a bit destructive to the character. It involves two completely different worldviews: cultivation and interstellarism. Logically speaking, there are quite a lot of aspects that can be covered. However, by the 100th chapter that I read, apart from the spiritual body of being sent, the galaxies that are attacked and sent, and the talismans that are drawn by being drawn (it should be called that, right?), There is no other aspect at all, and the above are also very obscure and superficial. According to this progress, the author wants to reach the point of "One Sword, Light and Cold Fourteen States" in the introduction. I don't know how much more I have to write. . . . After all, the author didn't mention it at all from the time he was pierced until now except for one mention of cultivation when he was attacking the galaxy. . . Just enough to watch, please wait for further updates I feel a little sick, my family [laughs awkwardly] I wonder if the author wants to write a book that is contrary to the traditional interstellar formula of cultivating immortals. Otherwise, why would the Zerg be so powerful? Maybe it's because the protagonist of the novel, Shou, has not yet entered this world. Once Shou escapes, the human defense line will be quickly defeated by the Zerg. There are traitors within the human race, and the rebirth of the attack is useless (I vaguely remember that the previous chapter was a bit over-attack and I felt that Self-rebirth has produced a butterfly effect. There are problems within human beings, but the Holy Father who has made great contributions to all mankind has not taken any action to investigate?), So I can feel refreshed from time to time from the perspective of the recipient, but the overall background is not refreshing, and the sense of refreshment is very fragmented. In the latest plot, the author depicts a large-scale invasion by the Zerg. The scenes are clearly written well, but in the end, he wants to make him smarter, and any bugs that dare to damage the furniture of casual cultivators should be punished. . . I was really speechless after watching it. You are a person who doesn't regard yourself as a person in this world at all (I think the rhythm of the author's portrayal of Shou slowly integrating into the interstellar world is quite problematic. Some plots can make people feel that Shou is accepting this world, but the author suddenly likes to emphasize that Shou is a casual cultivator, and Shou is a casual cultivator. Xiu is alone, has no family, and has no sect. After going through many vicissitudes, he is very confused when he sees the soldiers fighting for the survival of mankind. It is very confusing. Does he accept it or not, and how much acceptance does it have, so that the following thoughts appear). When faced with the human defense line project that he saw for the first time, he would have the thought that this is my property? ? ? ? And since when did Shou become able to kill the S-class Zerg with one sword using his abilities in the world of immortality? ? Where did I miss this? Obviously the author still emphasizes from time to time that the law of heaven has restrictions on him. He has never used it before and has not mentioned it much. Suddenly he swung his sword and killed many Zerg. . . . Shou's character really doesn't look like a powerful person who can ascend. Sometimes he behaves like a spiritual young man, and from time to time he displays a cleverness that is hard to judge. Then he uses the image of a casual cultivator in the world of immortality to cover it up, and his attack is even worse. The flat holy father who is not smart but has to pretend to be tough is my only impression of him. . That's it, there's been a lack of literature lately, so I might as well read it for fun (don't use any brains, and don't think too deeply if you find something is wrong). .

It's quite good-looking, with no weird points. It's a relatively normal story. I haven't read it before, so it's a relatively new subject. Shou Bao doesn't need to rely on others like other writers. He is relatively strong. Overall, it looks pretty smooth. The emotional line is sweet, but it feels a bit slow, so let's get together as a couple as soon as possible [Shy] The author, please give me a big boost [Blow a kiss]

It's so sweet. The phrase "My wife is watching, don't do it" really touched my heart. It's so sweet!

It's so beautiful that men are menstruating and women are going crazy. It's the nemesis of depression and an alarm clock for vegetative people. It's so beautiful that the five-guarantee households in the village miss and love the widow. It's so beautiful that tears flow from the corners of the mouth and flood into the Qiantang River. It's so beautiful. It was God, it was my rose, it illuminated my dark life and made my world meaningful. I ran, I jumped, and I danced the tango on the balcony of the 20-storey building, which made me realize that God does exist. I was so beautiful that I cried. From now on, the world no longer lacks water.

Boss, I will follow you to the death. I was stunned as I watched the frontline battlefield. I really wanted to cry. They were A, B and O. The spirit they showed really reminded me of our resistance against Japan at that time. The martyrs risked their lives and defended the last side to the death for the sake of the people. They are heroes. I really watched the description. The writing is so good, and our little gentleman is growing up step by step, because our little gentleman is not a casual cultivator. In the world of the jungle, he is relatively cold. But when he arrived at the front line and saw everyone's performance, he was very touched in his heart. In the end, our little gentleman went from understanding to understanding, which was really gratifying. And our Ayao, woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooohww, oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooh… So far, I feel that the three views are very positive. The growth of the protagonist and the war between humans and Zerg are described in great detail. When I read it, every chapter had the motivation to keep reading. It was very attractive to me. I think there are many golden sentences. What impressed me deeply was that sentence "At this moment, Omegas are no longer weaklings protected by Alpha and Beta, but heroes who protect countless spiritual bodies and Alpha warriors." This article writes a new level of gender in interstellar literature. Everyone's existence is valuable. Don't engage in gender opposition, and don't underestimate each gender. Omegas have never been weak just standing behind and needing protection from others. They can also become other people's heroes, become other people's hope, and protect others. Come on, boss, I will follow you to the death, baby, please update soon! ! ! ! ! !

Unexpectedly beautiful! ! ! Mr. Zhao's mental state is quite advanced, he focuses on one without internal friction, and hits everyone equally hahahaha! Sect Master Lu has a great love brain and loves him to no end. Every time I see Mr. Zhao's blog, Sect Master Lu just wants to laugh🤣🤣🤣 I can't get enough, please give me more updates!

If you like sweet stories without any cruelty, this is a relatively decent and brainless sweet story. Hmm... It has a kind of ancient male protagonist. He is reborn in the magical world from cultivating immortals, an old cucumber paints green to pretend to be a child, and he is a reskinned novel with a sense of déjà vu on campus/in the army. Another point is that the protagonist is set to be an ancestor of casual cultivators who have overcome tribulations, but in the article, except for the author's mention, there is nothing that matches the feeling of an ancestor of casual cultivators. It is more like a social animal who was transported into the world of immortality. If you are a book reader or like to read sweet novels and dual male protagonists, you can read it. If you like the plot and the setting is consistent, forget it. 4 Stars for the sweet article

The author is very good at creating titles. I feel that the title is more exciting than the content. It is very funny [crying with laughter] Zhao Zhao is a natural black man. His experience as a loose cultivator in his previous life has shaped his cold and indifferent character, as Lu Yao slowly integrates into the new world. The golden finger is quite big. The problem is that the casual cultivator has no one to rely on, so he can do anything. Lu Yao is not a bright and cheerful person. Although he is very righteous and awe-inspiring, and looks like a saintly father with no regrets, in reality he is both innocent and evil. There is no need to worry about him being plotted against, which is very reassuring. Overall viewable. I feel like the war scenes are quite messy, and I feel like I don't know what's going on. I can't write with a sense of urgency, it's like playing house, I can't help but fast forward, fast forward, and fast forward again. Shou's way of speaking is also very awkward. He is always a casual cultivator. It seems that the more he looks at the back, the more frequent he is. Three casual cultivators can appear in one sentence. What about role-playing? I know you are a casual cultivator and can you have normal conversations? Search and Replace directly replaced all of me with casual cultivators, right? It's really embarrassing. Just like the kind of person who always talks lewdly about what other people are saying, it is not illegal to use "I" to describe oneself!

This is a little cookie. This Zhaozhao is very cute, has a venomous mouth (no matter friend or foe, he talks at the same time haha) and is very strong. After all, he is a casual cultivator who can quickly rise to the top of the world of cultivation on his own. O's status is not strong in body, but he has spiritual awareness and skills. And he never gets angry, he is in good spirits (emphasis added), he seems very friendly to me [shy], and he loves Zhaozhao's character. The interaction between Zhao Zhao and Sect Master Lu is also particularly sweet and charming. The annoying Lao Deng wanted to change Zhao Zhao's identity and make him drop out of school. Our Zhao Zhao directly married General Lu and changed his guardian. The little wolf cubs are also very cute. The wolf cubs planted in Qinglian make me laugh to death because of how to control them. The spiritual body of Zhaozhao is the Qinglian that was chewed during the period of casual cultivation. Is this destiny? [Laughing]. In the early stage of Zhaozhao, I didn't know that Sect Master Lu was the general. I was so happy that the general's fiancée O cuckolded him for me to watch (she was a double cleanser, but the general didn't like it, so he immediately broke off the engagement after collecting evidence). It was revealed that Zongzhu Lu was married to B (the royal family has the right to hide their surname). He publicly stated, "My husband and I met at a low point. I was in danger and he was in a desperate situation. Although I saved him from fire and water, he was the only chance of survival that I had among thousands of possibilities." I think the title "Mr. Xiao" is particularly sweet.