Has the Professor Been Won Over by a Sweet Girl Today?

Here is the author. This is a sweet novel. There are no knives or quarrels. Both of them have mouths (mouth-to-mouth kind). One is a cute cartoonist and the other is Sister Bingshan. There are no knives in the whole book and they adopt different ways of love. Everyone is welcome to read and leave comments and reminders for updates.

In the first half, the author probably wanted to describe the world view of future science fiction, and also introduced the background. He used a lot of professional words, but after the sports meeting, when the plot started, it was really well written and looked very comfortable.

Some of the dialogues I saw in the early stage are completely incomprehensible, but they seem to be romances that are exclusive to this profession. It would be better if they could be written simpler. I give you five points.

It's a sweet article. But sentences that are too technical or too gorgeous will make it difficult for readers to understand. So it might be better to use a slightly simpler and clearer sentence to describe it. You can add a little more gorgeous description when describing it, but it doesn't need to be too much, it will be better [Like]

Not bad, pretty good