Anime Crossover: There's Definitely Something Wrong with My Life in the Two-Dimensional World

The setting is very creative. The protagonist gives me a kind of beauty that is missing from the brainstem. Also, the protagonist is very strange when talking to others. It feels like every time he speaks, he blurts out without thinking about what should be said and what should not be said. However, it is not easy for the author to write these, so I gave it four stars.

The writing is quite good, I just hope that the author will not have a fixed mindset when writing about Yukino, and venom at his teammates when his life safety is threatened [face covering] It's okay now [laughs evilly]

The polarization is serious, people who like it can't put it down, and people who hate it will abandon it. Of course, those who write comprehensive comics on Tomato are basically doing it for love. Cheers, author👏

After reading the comment section, it is indeed quite miserable. Although the writing is relatively new, and the copy is not as exciting as the one written by the big brother. The wits are a bit stiff, but as a novice, it is pretty good. I feel like I have learned from the big brother. I personally feel that there is no bad point, it is just a bit dull and boring, and there is no feeling of tension and excitement. I will give low scores to those who It is indeed a bit too exaggerated. I personally encourage new authors. After all, no great author's first book is well-received. They all write famous works after going through several books. Authors should not pay too much attention to the ratings. Just regard this book as a way to polish and exercise yourself, so that you can write better novels in the future [Thoughts]

It's good to read. Although the title is a bit deceptive to readers, it's a really good fanfic when you click on it. I've read a lot of fanfics and this one is the one I'm most satisfied with right now. The fast-paced daily life is not so boring, the rationality and logic are very good, and the characters are consistent. The heroines with various personalities are also full of fantasy. You can explore the specific personalities and changes by yourself. As long as the author maintains the current level and increases the update speed, it will definitely become popular. There is a set of reasonable logic that surpasses many fans. It is not awkward, focuses on describing the main plot, and uses IQ and EQ to attract girls. It is much better than those who forcefully establish a relationship with a female protagonist by breaking the character design. You must write firmly! The big brother who loves to brush things off [sending heartfelt messages]

It's a very good book. Judging from the book reviews, the author also listens to the advice. My request for this book is that I hope it can be completed and I can stick to it (I have never seen a practical teaching book on Tomato that can be completed normally, or that it can be written to the second grade. Maybe I have read too few). If I can't keep it, I hope the author can collect everything that needs to be collected first [shy] It would be too uncomfortable if it stops without saying a word. Of course, I still hope that this book can be completed, so I just have to persevere and generate electricity for love. Come on, come on, I hope the author can write it until graduation [laughs]

I don't know what to say, but today I saw another comic book author who also had the idea of ​​abandoning the article. The book is a good book, the plot is interesting, and the author's ideas are interesting. I won't advise you to keep reading for love. I'm not a vampire, and I also understand the pain and hopelessness of a person holding on to his old dream. But let me talk about my personal reading habits. First of all, I don't read the ones with few words because there are too many variables. I don't read the ones that are impatient because they are too awkward. I don't read the completed ones because I prefer open-ended ones to be continued. If you, the author, are tired, I hope you can rest assured that the income from grades is not high. This does not mean that your writing is not good, it is just because the mechanism of Tomato is inherently difficult.

It's quite good. When I first read the title, I thought it was a daily novel. Then I added some wits and wits. I didn't expect it to be about weird rules and brain-burning. Although I prefer relaxed daily life, the weird and weird stories written by the author are unexpectedly exciting. The story is very compact and the atmosphere is a bit tense. It makes me want to stop. The protagonists are both business-minded online and there are various anime heroines who can't stop it. Well, the only point is that for some of the more lively and cheerful characters in the original work, such as Yuigahama, try to use as few lively lines as possible when the rules and monsters are serious and dangerous. For example, hello and so on, you can arrange such cheerful characters to liven up the atmosphere in particularly serious situations, or arrange these characters according to routines to accidentally find some key clues or props. Are these more extroverted characters as cheerful and lively as the original work in a scary and tense environment, with some cheerful questions that are not in line with the environment and make people feel that these types of characters are a little intellectually depraved or boring? (Well, this is my personal feeling)

To be fair to those who have been reading this for more than ten years, it is a good book, five stars. I am one of those people who rarely read brain-burning books. The only problem with this book is that the entry pace at the beginning is a little slow, and then the first copy is too long. It can be seen that the author has written so well that he doesn't care about my life or death, but the rhythm in the rest of the book is off-kilter. It was very comfortable to read, and although the first copy was lengthy, it didn't let me skip it. It was still good. I finished the whole book. The overall wit and wisdom writing is quite advanced, at least 10,000 times better than the brain-dead plot of the original work. There are fewer and fewer good Tomato books. I hope the children who read my review will give a high score to support the author.

The beginning is a bit short, but once you get through it, the plot of the novel is quite interesting. However, I feel that the length of the novel is a bit long. Personally, I don't think it's a problem. After all, reading novels is just to kill time, but it may be a bit torturous for some readers, making it easy for them to read to death. The author can try to adjust it. Some of the interactions between the male and female protagonists are very good, but some are a bit naive. Overall, the flaws do not hide the flaws. It is too difficult to write comprehensive comics in 🍅. It is a niche genre. For the author, it is most painful to put effort into designing a good plot, but there is no positive feedback. Several books that I have followed before have been cut off like this. I just hope that the author can persist for a while, come on, come on [currently working on the manuscript]