Floating Island Survival: I Can See Health Bars

(Top middle) Five-star green, 5 items B Sense of substitution B, attraction D, plug-in B, setting D, writing style B, imagination B, rhythm C, main line C, character design C, logic B Extra points: none Personal feelings: The difference between your novel and that novel is the pattern. The national survival of the people broke up the power of the official. But your novel has integrated it again. It can directly trade with 7 billion people, so the official can organize tens of millions of people. It is too disruptive to the balance. The golden finger of the protagonist has little advantage. The novel is well written, but the setting is imperfect. #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. This way it should not be blocked. 1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria·Ninth Edition Revised (1) Evaluation items 1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view. 2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading. 3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative. 4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency. 5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot? 6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line. 7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low? 8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal. 9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive? 10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition. 11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (2) Evaluation grouping 1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction 2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings 3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation 4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center 5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense (3) Rating of recommended evaluation items 1. Highlights: S-level 4 points, A-level 2 points 2. Standard: 1 point for Grade B, 0 points for Grade B 3. Defects: Grade C - 1 point, Grade D - 3 points 3. Rating of online articles (1) Up, up 1. Red+: Total score is above level 30 2. Red: Total score is 26 or above 3. Red-: 10 items A (2) High-quality and bright web articles 1. Orange+: Total score is level 22 or above 2. Orange: Total score is 18 or above 3. Orange-: 5 items A (3) Shang Xia·High-level online articles 1. Purple+: Total score is 14 or above 2. Purple: Total score is level 10 or above 3. Purple-: 10 items B (4) Upper-intermediate and high-level online writing 1. Five-star blue+: total score is level 6 or above 2. Five-star blue: total score is level 4 or above 4. Five-star green: 5 items B (5) Zhongyi·High-standard online articles 1. Four-star green+: total score is level 2 or above 2. Four-star green: total score is level 1 3. Four-star white: 10 items C (6) Middle 2 and 2·Standard online text 1. Samsung White+: Total score -1 level 2. Samsung White: Total Score -2 Level (7) Middle and lower three•Flawed web articles 1. Samsung Gray+: Total score -3 levels 2. Samsung Gray: Total Score -4 Level (6) Xia Shang·Web articles with great flaws 1. Samsung Black+: Total score -5 levels 2. Samsung Black: Total Score -6 Level 3. One-star black +: total score -7 levels 4. One-star black: total score -8 levels 5. Two-star black: 10 items D One star is an invalid rating, two stars is the lowest rating (7) Medium•No rating (lower middle to upper middle) (8) Inferior • No grading (middle to lower to lower) (9) Xiaxia·Malicious 1. The first stage: total score - below level 10 2. The second stage: total score - below level 20 3. The third stage: 10 E

Survival stories focus on settings, world views, unique items and creatures, not the history of Xiaobai Capital's fortune

The more you write, the better! Give yourself a five-star rating! [Working on draft] [Pauses face] I'm really convinced. With this rating, many people came here and maliciously gave it 2 stars. I hope that readers who like my novels will give me honest ratings. If there are any problems, the author will listen to them and make corrections. [Sending Hearts] It's best to say that you make a living by writing novels, not by creating content, but by means of suppression [Grief] If plagiarism is involved, you can report it directly [Grief] If you say that similar online articles are the same and don't repeat elements at all, then even a master can't do it [Grief]

Wood elves are terrible at Sky Island, and several books are all about wood elves.

This book is rated 4 stars in my mind. It has no bad points, but it also doesn't have too many outstanding points. Overall, it's pretty good.

Upgrading is too fast

The start is pretty good, but what I don't understand is why the resources should be given to Jiang or something, [smile]

Okay, not bad

A very good book, five-star praise~ Big cheers for the author! Come on! ! Come on! ! ! Ah~

There is no pressure to survive (including ordinary people), the fun point is too low (only the island of the witch has that little bit), and it is the best in terms of trading.