Luoluo's Adventure: I, the Great General of the Moon God Temple!

(Upper and lower) five-star purple, level 13 Sense of substitution A, attraction B, plug-in B, setting B, writing A, imagination A, rhythm B, main line B, character B, logic B Extra points: none Personal feelings: no system + original characters + reasonable plot, hurry up and get to the main line, it is a bit delayed. #Objective evaluation. If you have different opinions, you can evaluate it yourself. This way it should not be blocked. 1. Recommended Evaluation Criteria·Ninth Edition Revised (1) Evaluation items 1. Sense of immersion: The attraction at the beginning and the foreshadowing of the world view. 2. Attraction: follow-up attraction, follow-up reading. 3. Plug-in: The golden finger is reasonable and functionally innovative. 4. Setting: background credibility, system self-consistency. 5. Writing style: Does each paragraph promote the development of the plot? 6. Brainstorming: Whether each small story is connected to the main line. 7. Rhythm: Are you tired of reading or feel that the word count is low? 8. Main line: Whether all plots revolve around the core goal. 9. Character design: Is the protagonist's behavior consistent and whether the supporting characters are impressive? 10. Logic: Whether making money, cultivating, etc. Are consistent with basic cognition. 11. Extra points deduction: balance the scores of the first 10 items, data, economy, structure, three perspectives, supporting roles, time, geography, knowledge... (2) Evaluation grouping 1. First impression: sense of immersion at the beginning, subsequent attraction 2. World background: reasonable plug-ins and background settings 3. Content: Writing • Promote plot, imagination • Secondary innovation 4. Structure: Rhythm • Overall coherence, main line • Close to the center 5. Details: Persona·Character design, logic·Consistent with common sense (3) Rating of recommended evaluation items 1. Highlights: S-level 4 points, A-level 2 points 2. Standard: 1 point for Grade B, 0 points for Grade B 3. Defects: Grade C - 1 point, Grade D - 3 points 3. Rating of online articles (1) Up, up 1. Red+: Total score is above level 30 2. Red: Total score is 26 or above 3. Red-: 10 items A (2) High-quality and bright web articles 1. Orange+: Total score is level 22 or above 2. Orange: Total score is 18 or above 3. Orange-: 5 items A (3) Shang Xia·High-level online articles 1. Purple+: Total score is 14 or above 2. Purple: Total score is level 10 or above 3. Purple-: 10 items B (4) Upper-intermediate and high-level online writing 1. Five-star blue+: total score is level 6 or above 2. Five-star blue: total score is level 4 or above 4. Five-star green: 5 items B (5) Zhongyi·High-standard online articles 1. Four-star green+: total score is level 2 or above 2. Four-star green: total score is level 1 3. Four-star white: 10 items C (6) Middle 2 and 2·Standard online text 1. Samsung White+: Total score -1 level 2. Samsung White: Total Score -2 Level (7) Middle and lower three•Flawed web articles 1. Samsung Gray+: Total score -3 levels 2. Samsung Gray: Total Score -4 Level (6) Xia Shang·Web articles with great flaws 1. Samsung Black+: Total score -5 levels 2. Samsung Black: Total Score -6 Level 3. One-star black +: total score -7 levels 4. One-star black: total score -8 levels 5. Two-star black: 10 items D One star is an invalid rating, two stars is the lowest rating (7) Medium•No rating (lower middle to upper middle) (8) Inferior • No grading (middle to lower to lower) (9) Xiaxia·Malicious 1. The first stage: total score - below level 10 2. The second stage: total score - below level 20 3. The third stage: 10 E After the plot of Tiger King and Tyrannosaurus ended, it started to get a little boring. If new variables are not introduced, my overall feeling is that it will continue to decline.

I have a question. Where is Luoluo? Isn't it gone? They've all gone to Time City. Why hasn't Luoluo come out yet? [Face covering]

I was thinking, if we create a motorcycle warrior based on the J-20, how strong would he be? After all, the J-20's numerical value is already very high.

The writing is quite good, but there are a lot of magical changes. According to the plot, Lolo should be out, but the result has not been out yet. The combat power level has not been written. The reason for not writing it should be that you can write the plot and other people's combat power casually, and inflate others a few levels. It all depends on the protagonist's own feeling. When the Golden Iron Beast first attacked the City of Time, it was level 8, and the Thunderbolt was level 2. Then it strengthened a few levels, making the Golden Iron Beast at least level 10 and above, and the Thunderbolt to be close to level 10. Currently in Chapter 68, Boundless Sea is definitely at level 19. The protagonist's combat power level should be around level 17 or 18, at least level 16 or above.

Keep up the good work, there are no big surprises at the moment. The protagonist is brave and resourceful, not crazy, but he can be regarded as a bold artist. I look forward to the follow-up plot. There are still some embarrassing stumbles in some places, but compared to other fan works in the same period, it is indeed of high quality.

There are not many good Luoluo fanfics on the market. Are there any other good ones besides this one? Please recommend.

The fanfic is very good. Except for the ending, which is a little sloppy, it is not toxic in other aspects. It cannot be compared with the Chiliaoxing one, but it is much better than other fanfics. I can give it an 8.4-8.5 Rating. It is worth reading. It is not smelly or long. In short, it is quite good.

A small trash boss at the beginning has three amethysts, nb

Good luck, come on, the author has made a lot of magical changes and is not very friendly to the original party, but the logic and plot are not bad, and the protagonist is already considered the number one person under the King of War. Why haven't Luoluo and Jingjing come yet? You won't have to wait for Luoluo to come before you can be promoted to the King of War, right?

It's a very good novel. As a fan fiction author, he combined the current novel ideas to write down a different path. To be honest, although the meaning of the plot of this familiar cartoon is simple, the true meaning conveyed is indeed very thorough. There is no need for deep shaping or complicated plot. It is simply put in front of readers, and it is very consistent with the feeling of the original work. It can be regarded as a very good second work of a childhood classic. Come on, author!