Becoming the Sickly Villain in a Novel

Feeling okay But the dialogue gave me the feeling that it was translated from Japanese to Chinese or Korean to Chinese. It was strange that I had read a Korean or Japanese comic now. The plot is relatively flat and doesn't have too many twists and turns. You can just watch it when you're bored. It feels like a machine translation, bland and uneventful, with many typos and a draggy plot.

Well, it's okay, it's ordinary. After the male protagonist came to the world in the book, he had no memory of the original protagonist. He only knew the characters in the book and said that he had lost his memory, and then he got along with them normally. Because the original protagonist was in poor health, he basically spent time in the hospital. Later, after getting along, the male protagonists of the original book Attack 1 and Attack 2 both fell in love with the male protagonist. However, the male protagonist ended up with the second male protagonist. From the moment the male protagonist entered the book, there was no plot. Everything developed freely~ The main character in the original book, Shou, who is the male protagonist's half-brother, did not end up with Gong 1 in the end. The two did not call each other at all, unlike the various abuses in the book~ The younger brother finally had his own life. In the end, the original protagonist in the book actually awakened, and experienced his own death many times with his own eyes and was unable to change. Later, he met a god and drew the male protagonist closer to the book, and then the original protagonist in the book was reincarnated~

The writing is really good, but there are a few typos. Why is the rating so low? [Crying] [Crying] I almost missed it because of the rating I really cried at the ending. I still like Li Nuo and Li Yan as a couple. It would be great if this couple was CP [crying] [crying]

It's nice to read, but I generally don't have much patience. I mainly read fast-moving articles with many subjects. I rarely read this kind of one-subject book, but! ! ! It's super good-looking, the relationship between the protagonists is sweet, and contains spoilers: Nono is such a good baby, Xiaoyan, a brother-in-law, couldn't defend against everything, haha, but I don't blame him, blame the opponent for being too strong [like]. The emotions are also very delicate. Watching it made me twist like a maggot in bed at night [shy]. It's just that the score is a bit low. Maybe there are fewer people reading it for the time being. This book is a dark horse. I personally feel that the minimum score is 9 points or higher.

Oh my god ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh, I really, really, really like it! I like the gentle Mo Chuan & the cute Nono. Ah ah, the plot is novel and the characters are outstanding. Although President Qin is not bad (very contrasting), I still like Mo Chuan haha, and of course the most important thing is Li Yan! Ahhhhhhhh I like Li Yan [laughing][laughing][laughing][laughing][shy][shy][shy][shy][shy][adoration][flying kiss][adoration][flying kiss][adoration][sending heart][flying kiss][sending heart][flying kiss][sending heart][flying kiss][adoration][flying kiss][adoration ][Shy][Blowing a kiss][Shy][Flowing a kiss][Shy][Shy][Flowing a kiss][Flowing a kiss][Shy][Flowing a kiss][Admiration][Admiration][Flowing a kiss][Admiration][Flowing a kiss][Sending a heart][Flowing a kiss][Sending a heart][Flowing a kiss][Sending a heart][Flowing a kiss][Admiration][Admiration][Flowing a kiss][Shy]

It's very good to watch. I recommend everyone to read it. Nono is so charming. It's so gentle that I fell in love with it. The love is also sweet. Five stars. Nono has a charming personality. In fact, she feels like she can be with everyone. She's so gentle.

I think it's okay. It's well written, but I still feel like I'm more of a brother and a younger brother.

It's so cool. When Li Nuo traveled through time in the book, he had no memory of the original owner, so he had no choice but to pretend to have amnesia. However, after amnesia, his character was gentle and transparent, without the vicious character of the original owner. The original owner's brother Li Yan was tortured by the original owner for a long time, but he was extremely afraid of his brother regaining his memory and fearing that he would turn back to his original vicious brother. Qin Xu and Mo Chuan, who originally hated Li Nuo, took the initiative to approach and take care of them. They never liked to become I care, the author's introduction does not say who is the male protagonist. Let me tell you here that the male protagonist is Mo Chuan. In fact, this reader is fond of the elder brother and the younger brother. After all, the author has more plot lines about the elder brother and younger brother. The original protagonist will appear in the later plot and reveal the truth about Li Nuo's time travel. The villain in it is offline quite late, but he rarely appears. There is a side story. There is no abuse in this article. Personal opinion, please don't criticize.

The psychological description of the characters is very delicate and their personalities are very clear. I like Mo Li very much! Mo Chuan will give Li Nuo his only love, which may be the reason why Li Nuo chooses him (I also hope that the former Nono can live happily in another world [crying])

Very fragrant rice. I really like the character and image of every character in the book. The emotions are quite delicate. Mo Chuan poked me a little bit. The description in the article is a bit Japanese, but the writing style is very good and the whole article is very smooth to read.