Help! My Aloof Disciple Turned Into a Yandere

A very enjoyable book. The heroine's design is particularly ideal and belongs to the rational side. The heroine is in control and I feel comfortable. Anyway, it's this pull that makes me happy. I like that the hero has a reserve and restrains himself but can't control himself and likes the heroine. Please go see it quickly. The heroine is so strong that it should be considered a double strength. The bosses deserve to be included. [Shy][shy][shy] Am I under the impression that the ending felt rushed and plot-lined? From the introduction, I thought it was because there were too many love lines, so let's go high and low. It's worth seeing ahead

After reading it, I was filled with emotions (the following are my humble opinions. If you want to know the content of the book, please move to the main text). The people, objects and scenes in the article all have a unique balance. Most of them are told eloquently, and the plot advancement is cleverly conceived. Here are a few key words I summarized Stele of cause and effect, revision of beginning and end, book of destiny, inscription of struggle, exploration of reality and reality, search for the truth Destiny is composed of countless lines. One end is connected to the cause and the other is the effect. They are parallel or intertwined. Everyone stands on the line of their own destiny. Once you try to jump on another line, you will inevitably bear any or countless other causes and effects besides the "original destiny". Retracing the cause and effect, calculating the beginning and the end, sinking soberly... The ending is a bit hasty, probably because the author dug a hole and didn't know where to fill it, making the story line incomplete. But if you think about it from another perspective, it leaves a lot of room for imagination, and the story is still unfinished.

The writing is very good. In order to increase the rating of this book, I wanted to write a long review so that everyone can see. The plot is not a clichéd master-disciple relationship. The apprentice hides it well, but the master just doesn't notice anything in this regard. My beautiful and powerful heroine discovered something was wrong with her apprentice. The heroine is wanton and unrestrained but also has her own gentleness. She is not simply cold or as exposed as the little sun. How can I put it? She is just like the master in my mind. She will be mature but also have her own thoughts and tempers. The author's character is really well created. I look forward to the introverted apprentice going crazy and stepping on the heroine's baby xp hh

From the current point of view, I think the emotional description is very delicate. The two plots of Shen Zhiyu and others and the family affection of the Song family are superbly written and very delicate. I couldn't help but shed tears when I saw it. These emotional descriptions are so vivid and vivid. Secondly, I feel that the book may be too focused on emotional delicacy, resulting in some deficiencies in the improvement of cultivation and world framework. It is said that cross-level combat is almost difficult, which makes the strength of the heroine feel unclear. The heroine is very strong but there is no description of this aspect. I think what the author wants to write is that the heroine hides her strength because of her illness, but it seems a bit messed up. All in all, I think this book is top-notch in terms of emotional description. It's a bit vague to see the upgrade levels of fighting monsters, but it's still quite passable, although it's not finished yet [Chigua]

When I read more than 80 chapters, what touched me most was not the emotional drama between the male and female protagonists, but the countless immortal cultivators who were willing to sacrifice everything for the same goal of saving the common people. I was really moved. The group portrait is really well written and very touching.

There is no one with such a level in this kind of writing [Blowing a kiss]

After reading it, I have an indescribable feeling. The feeling Sui Ge gave me was very similar to that of senior sister Ye Su and Xi Heng. They are both good people. They have a delicate concern for the people around them, and they also have the struggle and struggle for the immortal path. They have the wisdom to check and balance the situation set by heaven in the overall situation. A book is actually a game of chess, and the first chess piece is also the last one. The whole story can be said to be a cycle and destined. Every storyline and every parallel world is a chess piece that connects the entire chess game, eventually becoming a complete chess game and a circle with a beginning and an end. They can all break the restrictions set by heaven and break through the constraints to achieve a perfect ending. Every character plays its own role and has flesh and blood. As readers, we will feel sorry for the characters who sacrificed their lives for righteousness in the book. The evil path and the righteous path are essentially the same. The pull between Sui Ge and Yin, who are both enemies and friends, also touched my heart. After reading the whole book, I felt deeply touched. I just hope that every character in the book has a perfect ending, a happy ending, and a more happy ending.

Very good looking, with a strong heroine! There is no female competition, the heroine's classmates and the heroine's apprentices are all very good, the micro-groups are like each other, and the portrayals are all three-dimensional. The author greatly cheers for him [love] [love] [love] Among the stories about a female master and a male apprentice, it should be great. I have never seen a similar plot before. I recommend it! ! !

It looks good, the writing is very good, and the environment is vividly described. The emotional description is very delicate - the male protagonist's love is warm and dark, which is different from the description in many novels. It is delicate and natural here, and many places can always draw people in. It is very touching. Family friendship or a sense of mission between strangers are all very touching and touching. It depicts many noble human qualities and is full of positive energy. Each character has a distinct personality, and they are their own protagonists. Young people are always full of energy, love, or affection. They have their own way, and they also understand good and evil clearly. Huge disadvantage: currently being serialized Hope the following article...

I have been reading the author's articles for a long time. Every character is flesh and blood and does not revolve around a single individual. The characters are very vivid and three-dimensional. The sense of competition and destiny is very strong. The writing style is not gorgeous, it feels a bit like "vernacular writing". But it makes people easily immersed in it and has a strong sense of immersion. The author is very top-notch in this category, and the writing is really good. But every time I read the author's articles, the ending always makes people feel rushed, except for Yinze's article, which is relatively satisfactory. Perhaps this is also the author's writing style. It may also be that its starting point is too high, and the ending will always make people feel a little disappointed. But there is no denying that she is a very good author, and this is also a very good article. The author's worldview, overall view, and sense of fate are all very impressive, and some of the detailed descriptions are also very good. If you are a reader who really wants to read a Dzogchen type of article, I suggest you not to read it, because you will be very disappointed and sad after reading it. Because I have read several of the author's articles, and I have now accepted her ending style. Her ending is not very satisfactory, except for the article about the divine fox. The writing style is also very good, and there are many golden sentences. Another book that is also recommended to readers is Bu Yu Yan. The author's articles always make me love and hate them. Every time I read them, I am disappointed and hate them. But there is no meal replacement. The writing is really good. I have read her articles twice or three times.