Is It Really Too Much to Become a God from the Start?

The main character lacks a clear storyline. What do you need to level up? You yourself said you're not the only god, so what have you gained from all that? We don't understand.

Actually, the Zhou Lin part is quite good, but to be honest, I didn't understand what the protagonist was actually doing. He's supposed to be collecting mysteries, but it feels like he's just causing some commotion in the lower realms. Like the Heavenly Book part, which mentions the creation of celestial treasures, so this part just gives advance knowledge that these treasures will appear and…

The writing is a bit messy. For example, the character Zhou Lin used a treasure to enhance his talent, reaching the third realm, then reverting to the second. He had a jade pendant to conceal his aura earlier, and later needed a cultivation technique to do the same. The story doesn't connect well with what follows, and I forgot parts I'd already finished writing, so I had to redo it all. 😅😅😅

Do people nowadays like to write paragraphs with just a sentence or two? I've never heard of piecing together pages.

I don't want just one world; I feel multiple worlds would be better. 🤔

Want to know why it's only two stars? Because I skipped through most of the chapters except for the ones with the main character [rolls eyes] 😅

A god with omniscience was also invaded by other gods through apostles.

Zhou Lin has too much screen time, making the book feel like he's the main character and Leng Yue is the female lead; almost every chapter revolves around Zhou Lin. With slight modifications and some reductions in the main character's dialogue, Zhou Lin would become the undisputed protagonist of the book.

Daily life in a relationship...

Well, well, some of the wording is a bit odd 🤦 Zhou Lin is such a grown man, using "small face" isn't quite appropriate, is it? "Small face restored" is less fitting than "calm expression." Giving five stars to support the new author.