Demon Slayer: The First of the Twelve Kizuki, Doted on by Muzan

A copper man's elaborate schemes are no match for a straight man's quick thinking. Brilliant! Absolutely brilliant! It's amazing how Bulbasaur, eating Doritos, arrived at Mickey Mouse Clubhouse! Okay, I just love watching this kind of ambiguous brotherhood.

Dear author, your writing is very delicate, and your portrayal of Yoriichi's emotions is excellent, including why the protagonist became a demon. However, I feel the despair and loneliness during the process of becoming a demon could have been explored more deeply.

It's so good! I've always loved reading stories about villains, and the main character and the tragic boss are such a perfect couple. I don't believe the author is straight. The Ubuyashiki Demon Slayer Corps was wiped out, and the protagonist showed no mercy—well, not exactly no mercy, but in the end, only Mitsuri and Tanjiro's family remained. In short, those who enjoy reading stories about villains should definitely not miss this.

It's really good. Unlike some other ghost stories I've read where the encounters with the Upper Moons are so sudden, I think the author's portrayal of Mei and her brother is exceptionally well done. I hope the author continues this work. Also, I hope this is a novel without a female lead, where the male lead is handsome on his own.

It's a pretty good story. It seems to be without a romantic pairing, and the protagonist is quite strong. The author says there's no female lead, and some comments say it's pandering to male characters, but I didn't see it. The characters who interact with the protagonist don't seem to have any romantic sparks; they're mostly colleagues with at most a touch of familial affection?

So good! This is my favorite Demon Slayer fanfiction!! It's incredibly good! I just hope it's a female-only story!! The male lead is just so handsome~ Of course, it would be even better if he ended up with Muzan 😘😘

This book is good in every way: the writing is decent, the plot is reasonably logical, and the emotional impact is alright, but it's just not enjoyable. Of course, that was my initial thought. Before reading further, I always thought this book was good, but it was just hard to read. However, it became better after chapter 29. Therefore, you must think carefully before reading the book.

First, a heads-up: most of the Pillars from the original work are dead. Muzan is a bit out of character later on, but the impact isn't too significant. The protagonist is evil from beginning to end, killing many people. The ending is rushed and many plot holes remain unresolved. Overall, this book is enjoyable. The author's writing is good, and you can feel the protagonist's charisma.

This is amazing! It's the only Demon Slayer fanfiction I've ever finished. The protagonist is incredibly powerful and intelligent (I absolutely love the crow character!!!). The revenge plot runs throughout the entire story, and the protagonist is truly strong! It was a very enjoyable read, with almost no frustrating moments; he's strong from beginning to end.

It's very well written; this is exactly how the protagonist of a villainous novel should be born. However, the comments section in the early chapters made me very uncomfortable, so I dropped it for now. I wish the author continued success in their writing and send them five stars.