Demon Slayer: The First of the Twelve Kizuki, Doted on by Muzan

It's not as good as a straight man to have an idea when a copper man puts all his efforts into it Wonderful~ It couldn't be more wonderful~ It's so wonderful to bring Bulbasaur seeds and eat Marvelous Crisps to Mickey's Wonderful House. It's so wonderful~ Well, I just like to see this kind of ambiguous brotherhood.

Damn, your writing is very delicate, and your emotional portrayal of Yuanyi is very good, including why the protagonist turned into a ghost. , It's just the desperate loneliness in the process of turning into a ghost, I think it can be deeper. Well, there is. When the protagonist's brother dies, I think we can let him live a little longer, and then talk about his reliance on the protagonist after his death. , Should be able to make the feelings a little richer. The last point is that you update too little, update more.

It's so good. I've always loved reading villain stories. The protagonist and the miserable boss don't get along too well. I don't believe it when the author says he's straight. The Ubuyashiki Demon Slayer Squad was completely wiped out, and the protagonist showed no mercy. It can't be said that he didn't show mercy at all. Anyway, Mitsuri and Tanjiro's family were left in the end. In short, those who love reading villain stories must not miss it.

It's really good to read. It's not like some of the articles I've read before about becoming a ghost. The writing about encountering Mei and her brother is very sudden. But I think the author wrote about meeting Mei and her brother really well. I hope the author will keep at it. In addition, I hope this is a novel without a female protagonist, and the male protagonist is handsome alone. If the author cares about the flow and popularity of the book, I suggest that the author can hold a poll. The author can write down several endings he wants and let readers vote for the final ending. The extra chapter can be about two male protagonists. I really want to see it [shy] (I know the author can't get up, but I really want to read it, don't complain). Of course, if the author writes according to his own interests and ideas, I also support the author greatly. Write whatever you want, come on [Send Hearts]

A very good article, it looks like there is no cp, the protagonist is quite strong, the author said there is no female protagonist, some comments said that selling rotten food, I didn't see it, and there are no ambiguous sparks among those who have contact with the protagonist, basically they are colleagues with a little affection at most? (The question mark is something I can't describe) I am very curious about the direction of the story. When I read the title, I thought CP would be Mukai, but no, at least not now. I haven't studied the pillars before Demon Slayer in detail, so I don't know, but it's not important. I haven't seen those pillars in Demon Slayer anime yet (I haven't watched them for a long time, so don't blame me if they happen). The protagonist is very strong now. I can't imagine the next plot. I hope you don't abuse me. It's really fun to watch the protagonist's baby's revenge. It's really exciting when I lose my brother, the master. 😭

Looks good! I love this Demon Slayer fanfic the most! ! It's so beautiful that there's nothing to say! I just hope it's a story without a female protagonist! ! The male protagonist is handsome~ Of course, it would be better if he is with Wuhan [Blowing Kiss][Blowing Kiss]

This book is good everywhere, the writing is good, the plot is reasonable, and the emotional rendering is okay, but it just doesn't read. Of course this is what I thought before. Before reading the back part, I always thought that although this book was good, it was just ugly. However, after chapter twenty-nine, it turned out to be okay. So you must think clearly before reading the book. Based on the current content, you have to endure at least 60% of the frustrating content. To put it nicely, it is foreshadowing, to suppress first and then to expand, but to put it ugly, it is history. However, although its content is a bit slack, the author's writing style makes up for it very well. So my opinion is that you can just skim the previous content and skip to read it. The really good content must be after the death of Guoyuan.

Let's clear it out first. Most of the pillars in the original game are dead. The later stages of the game are a little OOC but the impact is not particularly big. The protagonist starts from the beginning and ends up evil, killing a lot of people. The ending is very hasty and leaves many pitfalls unfilled. Overall, this book is good to read. The author's writing is good. I can feel the personality charm of the protagonist. He is also very strong and it is very refreshing. The protagonist also has a brain and has not done any brainless behavior. The protagonist has emotions, but he is still decisive and kills when he has to kill. Most of the ghosts in the Twelve Ghost Months were single-handedly promoted by the protagonist. The protagonist has a slight heartthrob attribute in the ghost camp. In the middle and later stages, the protagonist overcomes the sunshine and gets rid of Wuhan's control. His strength is stronger than Wuhan. It is really refreshing to read this book. Ah, I don't need to think about it at all, but I still feel heartbroken when I watch the pillars die in the original work. There is no particularly bad point except for the extremely rushed ending. I finished it in one breath without realizing it. I couldn't stop reading many of the stories and looked forward to finishing them someday. This one is just too short and not enough to read, and there are almost no major problems with the timeline of this book. Some places may not make sense logically, but it does not affect the overall reading (if it is not too outrageous, I can throw away my brain and spoil it)

It's a good read, the only Demon Slayer fanfic I've finished reading. The protagonist is really powerful and has a lot of brains (I really love the crow setting!!!!) And the main thread of revenge runs through the whole story. The protagonist is really powerful! It was a pleasure to watch, there was basically no frustration at all, and it was strong all the way to the end. (Although there will be some knives that prick you from time to time, it doesn't hurt.) Wuhan and the protagonist are also very good at fighting (although the author refuses to admit it [laughing] [laughing], but in the end, a little dream came true, which is really good [admiration] [admiration]

It's very well written. This is how the protagonist of a villain novel should be born. However, the comment section in the early stage made me very uncomfortable, so I gave up on it. I also wish the author better and better writing, and send me five-star blessings.