I Transmigrated to a Furry World and Raised the Evil Dragon I Was Supposed to Defeat

Hmm, hmm... I feel like what I wrote may be... Maybe maybe... Probably probably... Okay. If there is anything wrong with the writing style or the general plot, please give me some advice.

The setting of Furui's world is very eye-catching! The orc element has its own cuteness, and the interaction between different races is lively and interesting, which outlines a novel and lively picture of a different world [Thinking]. The protagonist Xia Yu's "rebellious and stubborn" character is lovable. In response to the system instruction of "defeat the evil dragon", he insists on raising a dragon (being raised by a dragon [laughing evilly]). This sense of rebellion is very tense. The plot puts aside the routine of fighting monsters and upgrading, and focuses on the daily life of the protagonist in a different world. Healing is easy and effortless, and the pace is bright. It brings new ideas to the old story of time travel + system. Reading is like watching a relaxing fantasy sketch, which is very suitable for decompressing. The emotional lines of Xia Yu, Yuanyuan and Su Yi are also very sweet [blowing kisses]. Although Lao Jie is updated once a day, the content of each article is very interesting and interesting. Although Lao Jie is a man with a science major, his writing style has surpassed that of most Tomato authors. This is simply a masterpiece, highly recommended! ! ! (≧ｗ≦) We've reached chapter 247. The plot has developed ups and downs, but it's still interesting. I still highly recommend it [laughing]

It looks good, there are no particularly big swords, and the writing is good. The setting is quite interesting, and it doesn't mess up a bunch of settings. As for the author's XP... I wish Xia Yu good luck.

The writing is really beautiful! I was just a shotacon at first, reading Lao Chen Jian's other books, but after reading this book, I fell in love with Fu Rui! The updates are so stable (one update a day, an article is about 2,500 words), can it be updated ten times a day?

I've caught up with the latest chapter, so come over and give it a perfect score. However, I am not educated, so I can only say that this book is very well written. The biggest problem with the whole book is the update speed. (No, there isn't.) I have some suggestions: I feel that there are certain types of passages that easily pull me away from the immersion in the wonderful plot, such as long paragraphs of scene descriptions and environment descriptions. The article mentions the author from Xia Yu's perspective. And it feels weird to introduce it again every time "Mu Yu" is mentioned. I don't know if others feel the same way. If anyone sees this comment, please tell me, thank you.

Very beautiful (=^▽^=)[Send heart][Send heart][Send heart]. However, please take my advice: Never read this novel in public; do not listen to this novel in public; do not listen to this novel with headphones in public; do not listen to this novel with Bluetooth headsets in public; and do not listen to this novel with hidden Bluetooth headsets in public. [Smile][Smile][Smile] You don't have the willpower to suppress that rebellious corner of your mouth. I don't know if the author will read it. It's a very good novel, but in my opinion, it doesn't look interesting. The plot is okay, the CP is okay, but there is an inexplicable uninterestingness. And call it knives, it's sweet everywhere. Call it sweet, but there are knives everywhere. Also, the way technology and magic are handled is a bit messy. Don't focus entirely on the protagonist's side. When the protagonist has technology, technology is effective when facing ordinary enemies. Technology has no big effect when facing more powerful enemies. Moreover, technology cannot be combined with magic on the protagonist's side. But when it comes to Zanfeng, technology and magic are well combined, and technology is very effective. Just, don't write this. Very good novel.

Unlike other time travel stories, the protagonist has to carefully cover up things about his original world. The protagonist of this book can be said to be blatant. However, I feel that the difference in combat power is too big. When the four pillars stand together, the king of the beast realm is so different from the Dragon Emperor, and the Dragon Emperor is not even a little bit different from the boss. But the boss is so powerful that he has to rule the world by slowly infiltrating. Putting aside the combat power, the setting and world view of this book are still very good. The characters are well created. Everyone in the protagonist group has their own characteristics. The plot is also a bit funny. It is worth watching, but don't be bee[cry][cry][cry]

It turns out that comment was a bit offensive, so I deleted it and posted it again. Overall, this book is very well written, especially the description of the environment and the classical Chinese are very literary, and the writing is particularly touching. The plot is also very exciting, a bit subversive and quite funny. Then let's comment on the combat power. I always feel that the combat power of this book is very strange. There are tens of thousands and hundreds of millions at every turn. The gap is too big. I feel that the author fills in the numbers with his feet, but the issue of combat power is not obvious. One obvious problem is the emotional line of this book... Three men, one 1, two 0, two couples were created out of nowhere. This relationship is really novel and how to write it. Moreover, the character of Su Yi is a bit broken. It gives me the feeling... How can I describe it... I feel like the man in Shu Likou's Oh Hua Ai. The author should take care of himself.

Current progress: Chapter 80 Now I personally feel that the novel is quite well written. Maybe I will continue to comment, but let me talk about it first. Because the current plot is very short, I don't see many or big problems. If I insist on talking about one problem, it is too slow. I recommend updating it twice a day. However, the plot is okay. The portrayal of the characters and the arrangement of the plot are very orderly, and the main line has been fully demonstrated so far, so I am now looking forward to the follow-up plot of this book. Just a quick mention: I admire Qianye Yuan and Su Yi One more thing: Can you write me into the protagonist group? Awa, I may be suitable for the words "epileptic" or "awakening" (because my setting is a bit similar) As for why I gave it four stars, it's because I'm afraid you'll be proud of giving me one more star xwx

The book is very good and has no shortcomings, but unfortunately it is not completely suitable for me. At the beginning of the novel, I was immersed in the world built by the author. I would not be involved in it, but I could feel the emotions of the characters in the novel very well, experience their deep friendship, and enjoy the down-to-earth atmosphere of the book. I remember when I first started reading this novel. At that time, I was attracted by the title and introduction of the book, which was rare, and I wanted to give it a try. Later, I actually saw every detail between the protagonist and the orange puppy, and that kind of pure emotion made me yearn for it. But not long after, the little evil dragon appeared. I was confused at first as to why such a character should be added to destroy the originally good world of two people. But soon, the little evil dragon almost perfectly integrated into it, evolving the two-person world into an iron triangle. This was a surprise to me. As for what happened next, I don't remember much about it. All in all, this is a good novel, but multiple male protagonists are not suitable for me. I prefer a smaller circle. Four points support, one point regret; The writing is average (my review), I still hope Haihan.