After Her Dantian Was Destroyed, the Good-for-Nothing Slashed Her Way Through the Nine Heavens

In fact, the main plot and everything else are fine. It's a little thin, but as a new writer, I think it's very good. There are no big holes that I hate. The male protagonist feels that his presence is very low in the front. If you don't like to watch CP, you can watch it. The frequency of the male protagonist's appearance is slightly higher in the middle and later stages. It is completely a story about a strong female character. The heroine grows from the beginning to the only top goddess in the end. That's a newcomer, and then it may be a little thin and flat in terms of plot setting and characterization. But how to put it, at least the three views are correct. Nowadays, some people write novels, in order to pursue traffic, and bullshit, bad people have done 10,000 bad things, and one good thing can be washed away; good people have done so many good things, but one bad thing, all the previous good things have been in vain. In order to attract attention, all kinds of conflicts are created anyway, and it feels like the NPC has lost its mind. This novel basically doesn't have any major flaws. As for the book, you can read it, but if you are pursuing writing style or story diversity, you should also consider it. After all, you are a newcomer as well. Anyway, I think it's great that a newcomer can write like this. Let's keep up the good work and hope to do better in the future!

Just watched it, it's okay, the heroine never shows mercy to her enemies

This Wen Haohao is annoying

Personally, I think this plot is quite attractive to me. Unlike other novels, the trials in the secret realm are all about fighting spirit beasts, but here you are trying to break through the levels, which is quite interesting.

The writing is wonderful, the writing is fluent, lively and interesting, the heroine is smart and wise, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, good-looking, super good-looking.

Yes, it's my first time to write a book so well. It deserves encouragement. [Like] [Like] The words and sentences are very smooth.

Looks good, come on, come on

A good novel