[One Piece] VS [Naruto] [System] [Livestream Donations]
[Subverting Expectations] [Behind the Scenes] [Epic Battles]
Yan Luo was desperate. Refusing to give up, he spent seven whole days in conversation in the Kun, until inspiration finally struck and he came up with a plan. Now!
Turn the tables!!!
Go live, now!!!
Fourth Raikage VS the Strongest Man on Earth
Fourth Raikage: “I’m fighting Whitebeard? For real? Me?”
Sakura, the Cherry Blossom Empress VS the Pirate Empress
Freshman Sakura stares at herself, having punched a canyon apart, lost in thought...
Madara VS Nika Luffy
Madara: “I acknowledge you. When it comes to freedom in battle, I’d call you the strongest!”
The duels of the strongest, all in the Sea-Ninja Arena!
Yan Luo’s transmigration failed from the start. He could have stayed alive in the rift between dimensions, but while desperately searching for a way to survive, he was betrayed by the System. All that remained was enough life-saving energy to keep him going for thirteen days, and a defective little System that had been forced to stay behind by their agreement.
Yan Luo swore that once he got back on his feet, he’d make that System pay for betraying him!!!
But it seemed a little something had gone wrong...
“Draw character cards!”
“You need emotion points to draw.”
“Then how do I get emotion points?”
“Draw character cards and livestream battles.”
“But I don’t have any cards or emotion points!”
“Please draw a card.”
“I don’t have any emotion points!”
“Livestream battles to earn emotion points.”
“…”
How should I put it, the writing is super good, except for the first few chapters, well, there are some very necessary nonsense, I don't know what to say, mainly because there are some problems in the first few chapters, the rest are very good, very good, very good.
It's okay so far, but the colors of ninja and pirate power shouldn't be marked so high. Of course, if you only plan to write these two, I'm not saying.
Author, come on Ollie, follow me and make me crazy!!
The ideas are novel. Except for the Chinese colloquial style which makes the characters a little too down-to-earth and the crazy writing which is too packed with rhetoric, there are no big problems with the writing style.
It's well written. I like this kind of second creation 💕. Namikaze Menma, Namikaze Hinata, Naruko and so on.
It is very well written and has its own creations. Additional thought was put into it without sticking to the original work. I really can't wait, I want to see it, I want to see it.
Great writing, keep it up
Please keep writing, it's really interesting (›´ω`‹)
It feels good. The author's writing is good, but why don't many people see it?
How to say it? Be creative