Reborn with the Script, I Snatch My Fortunes

I've read Chapter 57 so far, and it's generally okay, but it's hard to comment on a few points. 1. Normal logic, the two spiritual roots - fire and wood, should complement each other, but the settings in the article are in conflict with each other, which looks a bit awkward. 2. The first person and third person are not very clear, and sometimes they can't be understood. 3. Double quotes are used in psychological description and speech, making it difficult to distinguish. 4. From time to time, characters' names may have homophone errors. (Points 2, 3, and 4 are the areas that I think need improvement. There are no big problems. I personally recommend listening to books. These points will not have much impact.) No malice, I really feel that many points in this book are quite in line with my personal preferences (the protagonist is decisive, has a big golden finger, has good opportunities, and does not steal others', is not a lone wolf, and does not trust new friends easily, the character image is really good, at least there is nothing that makes me angry so far) I hope this book will be more sophisticated and exciting in the future [shy] Well, I've read Chapter 62. How can I put it? I really thought it was okay before, but I was worried that I would run out of literature after reading it, so I saved it. But as soon as I entered, I made friends, which was a bit awkward. I was praised earlier that I don't trust others easily. . Actually, it's not that big of a deal. Maybe I haven't watched it for a while and I'm a bit out of tune? Anyway, um, I have no problem with making friends, but this part is really a bit awkward... (No malicious intent) But let me ask, let's not talk about the performance of the heroine. Even if you have a good impression at the beginning, she is ready to open her heart as soon as she expresses her sincerity... I can't understand it... (Maybe it's because I'm too selfish. I think the protagonist is a relatively intelligent figure. It's really not like, well, she's still a human being anyway. It's a human problem, the person with water-gold spiritual roots didn't quite feel the charm of the other person... Otherwise, it should be fine... Mainly reading this chapter alone, it's really hard not to suspect that the person is a little cautious. If you change the novel, it will be a character who will rebel later... If this is the case, just think I didn't say it...) Anyway, I personally suggest that the author, uh, express less of the heroine's, uh, weird psychological descriptions of others. . . Just like what I said in my first book review, it doesn't have any major flaws, and it's even in line with my personal preferences. I hope the author will make improvements in the future. Then I hope that if someone sees it, they will be less malicious towards the heroine's previous dual spiritual roots of fire and wood. I read the first chapter again and found that the author wrote about the dual spiritual roots of water and fire (of course, if it was changed later, just pretend I didn't say it [awkward laugh][awkward laugh])

Cultivation essay-rebirth-portable space-treasure hunter-grab opportunities-no cp The plot is compact, the writing is a little weak, and the heroine's perspective is expanded, highlighting the fun of seizing opportunities. The heroine Su Qingyu, from Xuantian Continent, Golden Finger "Life Script", where you can view personal information and recent opportunities, starts in the Tianjian Sect, washes into the fire spirit root, has no master, grabs the opportunity, makes a few friends, fuses many different fires, enters the secret realm, competes, experiences treasure hunt, the Heavenly Punishment Golden Pill Nascent Soul, the dark forces that have been dormant for a long time return to catastrophe, become the savior of the world, the bloodline of the Chaos clan, break the cage, reopen the new fairyland... Disadvantages: "Mumbling" from time to time, blurring level differences in combat.

I hope that the female protagonist Xiuxian will be beautiful alone, and it is best not to have a male protagonist

After reading it, overall it's okay (many golden fingers are upgraded very quickly, which is good as a cool article. No one said that there are more golden fingers in male channels. Why are female channels so strict?) It's also good that the female host is decisive in this regard. The main characters love to pretend to be pigs and eat tigers (sometimes I think it's completely unnecessary. If you show off your strength, it will save you a lot of trouble, but this is just a personal opinion) Also, I felt that the plot at the end was a bit messy. Maybe it was described too quickly and some parts were incoherent. I read it intermittently, and in the end I still look forward to a much better work! ! !

It smells a bit like the female version of Xiao Yan. It's okay. Never have a male protagonist. The female protagonist is an immortal and uniquely beautiful. Can you not write out the entire life script of the original male and female protagonist every time? Can't you just write about the changes? It feels like water numbers. It sounds annoying.

I think it's pretty good. The heroine focuses on cultivating immortals and counterattacking, and there are relatively few love lines. The new reborn senior brother who appears is not a CP, right. In fact, this trend is quite good now. It's cool not to feel aggrieved. You can turn the reborn senior brother into a being that hinders the development of the original male and female protagonists, but there is no love line. Isn't it good for both of them to pursue strength?

It looks good, but I don't know if there is a male protagonist.

It's very interesting. I really like the heroine seizing the opportunity and then working hard to become stronger.

I hope Senior Sister Nangong and the heroine are together! [Laughing evilly][laughing evilly][thinking][thinking][thinking]

This book made me see the meaning of rebirth...