Setting Foot on the Path to Immortality

The young author gives himself a five-star rating. Because the author is a novice, he may have some inaccurate grasp of the rhythm of the novel, or there are some poisonous points. Most readers can point them out. If the author sees that he can change them, he will definitely change them. If not, he will definitely make some avoidances in subsequent stories. There is no heroine or cp in this book, but you can figure it out yourself, because First, the author does not know how to describe emotional lines. Second, the protagonist of this book, Xie Chi, is a relatively calm person, and he also reveals some innocence and hobbies belonging to his age. I feel that this kind of person needs a kind of little sun type or a moisturizing and silent type of partner. The author does not have this writing power and cannot describe it at all. Suddenly, adding an emotional character would feel very abrupt, and everyone would probably feel dry, so the author chose not to write about emotions. Then there is the fact that this book is a traditional fantasy, that is to say, there is no system, there are cheats, and it should be a little slower to get hot. If you are a reader who likes to read a slap-in-the-face type of novel at the beginning, you can browse it a little. If it does not suit your appetite, you can quit. [Working on draft] Of course, this book will definitely be completed, and it will be updated even if there is no profit, but it may be slower (once a day?), Just think of it as generating electricity for love. I hope you will like this book, thank you!

It's a pretty good fantasy novel, in the traditional vein of Goldfinger and Grandpa, and judging from the author's description, I'm afraid the protagonist will have several teachers [something] in the future. The protagonist in the book is gentle and awkward, and likes to pretend to be aloof, but he respects his teachers and is worried about not meeting the elixir. He also takes the initiative to clean the palace every time he enters Wanque Immortal Palace. He is a cute young man. Although it is not as mature as those protagonists of rebirth and time travel, it still has a different flavor. [Laughs] From the author's description of Xie Chi's various childish behaviors and the setting of his family background, it can be seen that the author should love his protagonist very much. He didn't want Xie Chi to be as stressed as other fantasy protagonists who were burdened with blood feuds and desperately trying to climb up, but he also set a goal for him to practice hard in order to protect the people he cherished. But seeing that the author has set up so many characters related to him, I feel like there might be a knife in the future? [Grieved][Almost crying]

After reading it for so long, I'm here to give a book review First of all, this book has no time travel and no system. It is just a pure fairy tale. It is really rare. Moreover, in this fantasy novel, either the parents are dead or the family relationship is weak. The protagonist's parents are both here! The family is complete! Parents love each other! [Blowing kiss][blowing kiss] Among the male protagonists who have both lost their parents and are cultivators of immortality, this kid is simply the winner in life (not [currently in development] I really like the character of the protagonist. He pretends to be cold on the surface but is actually coquettish and narcissistic, but deep down he values friendship. The interactions with my friends are very delicately written, the kind of friendship between young people, which is very comfortable to watch. Moreover, the author really respects women and does not engage in any messy ambiguity. This must be praised! But to be honest, this book is really slow in the early stages, with a slow pace and no ups and downs in the plot. Sometimes I felt a little bored while reading it... And the language was occasionally a bit long-winded. But! I think this kind of plainness is more real. It is the feeling of watching an ordinary boy grow up slowly. There are no pretense and slap-in-the-face routines, but it makes people want to continue chasing. All in all, it is a very serious fairy tale, without any fancy settings, just telling stories in a down-to-earth manner. Although the popularity is low, I will still support it and hope the author will stick to it!

I think it's pretty good. There's no rebirth or system, and the protagonist isn't the kind of person who suffers and hates deeply, but he doesn't lack motivation either. He has his own goals and ideas, and also has the vigor of a young man. Sometimes he gets into trouble, but as long as he is given a little guidance and time, he can always adjust himself. The partners are very interesting [laughs], enthusiastic, aloof, and smoldering. I am looking forward to their growth. Come on, author [blowing kisses]!

It's worse. There is no time travel and rebirth and no system. It's just a young man. It's rare to see a protagonist in this genre, but it's very good. The character of the protagonist is also very cute. He is a sullen and narcissistic boy who pretends to be aloof [laughing]. He has a few companions and friends, and he also has a sense of youth. It looks good.

Five-star praise, the first thing that surprised me is that the protagonist's parents are actually alive! And the relationship is still very good. Although I don't know why the two of them live in two places apart. It seems that the distance is not short, but for this setting, which is like a rare and protected animal in traditional immortality novels, I will give him five stars. And the protagonist is also very interesting. On the surface, he is serious and cold, but in fact, he is very narcissistic, but he also values ​​love and justice, and is very good to his friends. This kind of awkward kid is a good thing~ Well, the interactions between him and his friends are written in great detail, the kind of little details where teenagers are fighting and caring about each other [I learned it] [I learned it] In general, except for the slightly slow pace, the rest of the story is pretty good.

After reading it for so long, I just thought of giving a book review. Overall, I think the biggest highlight of this book is two words: pure! Nowadays, time travel and rebirth systems are everywhere, but this book is a breath of fresh air. It has a local indigenous protagonist, no rebirth, and no system. He just cultivates his mind, accumulates resources, and makes breakthroughs. It is very practical step by step. (But do you feel that the breakthrough of realm is a little slow? [Thinking]) What's even more rare is that the protagonist actually has a complete and warm family! Parents are alive and well, and the family is harmonious! This kind of setting is a rare species in today's fantasy novels where "the whole family worships the heaven" is often the setting. [Crazy] This kind of setting makes the protagonist's struggle particularly rooted. It's not revenge for suffering and hatred, but it's an ordinary teenager's natural desire to become stronger and protect his family. It's very comfortable to watch. The character design of the protagonist is also quite interesting. He is not a cold-blooded boss, but a real young man who is energetic, a little stubborn and knows how to get into trouble. Watching him figure it out on his own when he encounters a bottleneck, be awakened by teachers and friends, and then slowly adjust his mentality, I feel a kind of nurturing happiness inexplicably. Several teammates are also vividly written, some are hot-blooded and talkative, some are cold on the outside but hot on the inside, and some have a lot of inner drama. They fight and support each other on a daily basis, which is very interesting. [Laughing and crying] As for the shortcomings, the author's writing style is indeed relatively detailed, and the initial preparation is a bit slow. Those who like fast-paced and refreshing writing may need a little patience. But once you get into the mood, this solid foreshadowing makes every turn and growth more weighty. Once the setting is over, the subsequent plot development should be smoother. In short, if you are tired of reading routine templates and want to find a book that is not speculative, not impetuous, and seriously writes about cultivation and growth, you can try reading this book. Come on, author, don't be left to die [laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Very few people have read it. My true evaluation after reading more than 100 chapters: It was actually this label that attracted me at first. It is rare to see stories about cultivating immortals without time travel, no rebirth, no system, and no CP. I feel that this kind of writing is not easy to write. If the previous text is not connected enough, the plot will be difficult to transition and develop, but the author handles it well. But this inevitably falls into a cliche plot (?) But fortunately it is not completely brainless. Each character has his own characteristics. However, the character of the protagonist is a bit weird now. The first description is to pretend to be cold, but then the text is a bit lively and a little sinister. He is a scheming one, but he also has calculations against his friends? It's a bit contradictory. I understand that the author wants to write about the cruelty of the times, but it can be reflected in other aspects. Overall, it's good, keep up the good work! If you like this, you can rush it.

To be honest, I have a habit of rating a book only after I have finished reading it. However, the popularity of this book is too low, so let's review it first. In short, it has several advantages. First, this book about cultivating immortals is really pure. There is no time travel and no system. It is very good. 2. The protagonist's family is complete! Complete! How difficult and rare! 3. So far, the plot direction is pretty good, except that I think the language is a bit wordy. But I personally don't like to watch this kind of bland slow-burning in the early stage. It's quite boring, but I will support the author.

The young man is high-spirited and climbs to the top step by step. There is no squeezing to encourage growth. It has a feeling of slowly upgrading from traditional fantasy novels. It is quite refreshing in the current Internet literature where time travel, systems and rebirth are rampant. [Sending Hearts]