The Grave Robbers' Lost City: The Mighty Tianyi

The plot of "Tomb Robbery: Tenichi Xiongfeng" closely follows the theme of tomb robbing. Starting from the sunken shipwrecks of the Yuan Dynasty fleet in the Sea of ​​Japan, it leads to the secrets of Genghis Khan's tomb. The exploration process is full of thrills. The author Ruochu 0210 controls the narrative rhythm well. When describing the four people's exploration of the tomb, mechanisms and monsters appear one after another, and the plot has ups and downs, keeping readers tense throughout. The characterization is also relatively successful. The four antique dealers and the tomb robbers have different personalities, and the choices between profit and life and death are very real. However, the explanation of some professional knowledge in the article is a bit blunt, and it can be more interesting when describing the environment of the ancient tomb and the principles of its mechanisms. In addition, the background and motivations of the mysterious old man can be further explored to make the story logic tighter. As a newbie, the writing is good, keep up the good work!