Having Fun with Warhammer

What's the main storyline? What happened? It's like a house without a foundation, a dish without seasoning or salt—too passive, like playing a classic auto-pathfinding game's storyline—tasteless.

That's a bit outrageous 🙂 The underworld gangs in this tiny lair on a single planet are all superhumans comparable to Eldar succubi, capable of slaying powerful demons. It makes one wonder how Chaos managed to withstand the Imperium for 10,000 years.

I've read up to chapter 62 so far, and the plot is alright. The overpowered abilities aren't too extreme, but why does the protagonist seem to be getting increasingly stupid? He went from a somewhat shrewd character in chapter two to a clueless Arno in chapter 62. Is this the price of laughing while playing with Warhammer?

I didn't really want to give it a single star—too lazy to rate it—but these three stars are all for the golden opening: the dimly lit nest, the frozen sister, the deceased mother, the elderly father, the struggling people, the sector war causing changes in planetary productivity, the governor's greed and changes destroying the nest's inhabitants' hopes and survival, the instigator, the silent…

It's alright, anyway, I'm reading Cloudwarp, so I'll just treat it like a time-travel novel.

What a contradiction. The protagonist knows it's Warhammer, but he doesn't even know the basic lore of Warhammer.

You could treat this book as a Western fantasy adventure story set in the Warhammer universe; I personally think it would be very good. However, author, you need to think about how to write the story later. The protagonist is an illegal psychic who can transform into a demon.

The writing is alright, but it's a bit outrageous. The Underhive organization has psionicists running around everywhere and even making psionic potions. Are these ghost potions? The Underhive plot is a bit weak. At this rate, I feel like the Underhive is going to wipe out all of humanity's enemies.

The protagonist clearly knows about Warhammer, so why doesn't he know about psionicists and the five evil gods? 🤔🤔

I was actually quite looking forward to it when I read the first chapter, until the protagonist, a transmigrator, appeared...