Harry Potter: The Eastern Occultist and the Dark Mark

It's a book that I like very much. How can I put it this way? I didn't expect that there would be another HP book in Tomato that made me so satisfied. Feng Xingchen is a real heroine. She uses all the power around her to achieve her goals. She is strong, confident and beautiful. She feels like a man and woman. To be honest, if I had such a reliable friend by my side, I would fall in love with her. I really didn't notice the relationship between Xiaolong and Xiaoduo at first. I always thought it was with Xiaoduo, but after reading it, I found out that it was with Xiaolong. I was very happy. After all, I really like Tang Tiantian's Draco~ When I read the book, I always looked at Tang Tiantian's face~ The author said that he will write the if line later. I don't know how to round out the early Xiaoduo line. I am somewhat looking forward to it. Can I write it tomorrow and write 100,000 words in two days? Just kidding~ Finally, author, please come on~

Yes, the setting is quite novel. This does not mean that the setting of the heroine Dongfang Xiuxian is novel. What is novel is that Dongfang Xiuxian does not stick to the plot. Many fans are chasing the plot (although it is normal, but I am watching the Snake Yard, and I don't want to know what the lions are doing every day). The plot of this one is relatively independent, daily oriented, and has plot content, but it is more about the life of the Snake Yard, which is good. I haven't found any clues yet. The emotional line is a little complicated. The heroine has been afraid to start a sweet relationship for some reasons, but it is a double arrow. Well, that's probably it. Here are some random thoughts I didn't update much when I thought it was good at first, and then I started to stock up on articles. I have been collecting them for a long time and I felt that I had no books to read today. Suddenly I remembered this book and found that the number of chapters was quite impressive. I started reading, and as I looked, I found that the author was asking for book reviews, because there was no traffic. I rushed to comment. If I have time in the future, I will do some reminders (usually when I have time, I feel uncomfortable if I don't read some novels every day) So finally, come on, author~

I haven't finished it yet, I'm in the middle! I feel that the highlight is the friendship between the little snakes. It is very warm and warm with Slytherin's unique loyalty and trustworthiness. For example, whenever something needs to be kept secret, they will take the initiative to use the Loyalty Charm! Unlike the typical representative of the Lion Academy, the predators, who fly the banner of bravery (actually they are reckless and ignorant, such as the early pursuit of Lily), hold up the theory of blood equality (actually the attitude is discriminatory, such as Sirius using Lupin's werewolf identity to get rid of the Sect), and shouting slogans of justice. (In fact, campus bullying is carried out in the name of pranks), self-righteous loyalty (in fact, how easy Wormtail's betrayal is), the author uses the small details of the daily life of the little snakes in the Snake Yard to write out the Slytherin-style bravery, loyalty, trustworthiness, glory, rights...

It's really good. I thought I had finished writing the book review, but after reading it twice, I realized I hadn't written it, so I hurried over to write it. I really like the heroine Feng Xingchen in this book. She is an oriental beauty. She is not a cute wife, but a real grown-up woman. Her brain is always online, and her cp with Xiaolong is also sweet. Now I am in my fourth year of writing, and I can be a professor in my fifth year. I am so happy. Feng Xingchen studied medicine, so I can feel her kindness and sense of mission to save people, which is very real. At least the classmates I know who are studying medicine (not 4+4) really want to save lives, so I can understand her temperament of wanting to save people. Finally, I hope you can write the if line earlier. I also want to give Xiaoduo a home! Come on! Big!

Highly recommend this HP fanfic! The heroine Feng Xingchen is so well portrayed, a real big woman, a female among females! ! A woman among women! ! Just kidding, I can't help but make this joke, but this book really has a heroine. Know how to use all resources to achieve goals, full of charm. The emotional line is also very cleverly designed. The early foreshadowing made me mistakenly think that CP was Xiaoduo, but it turned out to be Xiaolong. Thinking about it later, the interaction with Xiaolong was indeed sweeter. It was said that there will be an if line in the back. I wonder if there will be a CP with Voldemort? I really want to see the cp combination of the big and small dark lords. Now that I have written about the sweet love period, it is still a bit interesting, like watching a Harry Potter extra. Come on, author, I'm optimistic about you! Looks good! ! ! ! ! !

It's really good to watch. It tells the story of Feng Xingchen, a powerful heroine from China. It doesn't have too much plot in the original book. I quite like the three protagonists of the original book. There is no black mistress in this book. If I say it's a rant, it's more of a rant against Deng Xiao. But with GGAD, I can forgive the whole world~ As for CP, I quite like Xiaolong, but why do I feel that Xiaoduo is more suitable for Xingchen? Xiaolong has the mentality of a kid who wants to be loved by the stars, but Xiaoduo has been loving her silently. The author said that there will be an if line in the later stage, so maybe Xiaoduo's deep affection is burying the line? I have no intention of influencing your writing, you can just write as you like! I really like it and recommend it to everyone who wants to check it out! Finally, I wish you the best as you write, and don't stop updating! Come on, come on, come on!

It's really good-looking. It's a different style. It's completely different from the HP fanfics I've read before. There are so many life scenes in the Snake Yard. I really like this style. I really hope they are all happy. I love you so much, the author (´▽`ʃ♡ƪ)"

"The Scourge of Hogwarts" is an online fan novel serialized on Tomato Novels. Judging from its content and style, the following comments can be made: Relaxing and humorous daily fandom This novel is more like an "everyday flow" work that can easily decompress. It does not have a heavy main plot, but focuses on the protagonist Feng Xingchen's campus life at Hogwarts. The story is full of interesting gags and unexpected "turnover" scenes, such as the first attempt at Weasley's trick shop, interactions with various magical creatures, etc., Providing readers with many relaxing and enjoyable reading moments. Imaginative plot settings One of the highlights of the novel is its unbridled imagination. The author has built a magical world full of fun, including some "sand sculpture" style plot settings. For example, the protagonist will "overturn" due to various unexpected situations, or have wonderful chemical reactions with other characters. This style injects freshness into the traditional Harry Potter fan themes, making the story full of surprises and laughter. Casual and loose narrative structure As can be seen from the chapter list, the narrative structure of the novel is relatively casual, even a little loose. The story switches freely between the main plot and daily fragments, sometimes giving people a feeling of "writing whatever comes to mind". Although this writing method enhances the sense of randomness and life in the story, it may also lead to a slightly weaker coherence and logic of the plot, which may require some adaptation for readers who pursue rigorous narratives. All in all, this is a Harry Potter fan novel with a relaxed style and wide-open imagination. It does not pursue a serious epic feel, but focuses on providing readers with a magical journey full of fun and imagination. If you like daily stories that are lighthearted, humorous, and imaginative, then this work may be a good choice. Copied [laughing]

The heroine Hua Guo, a demigod, Slytherin, CP Draco, became a professor in the fifth grade. Super pretty! ! ! Highly recommended! ! ! [Like][Like][Like]

This book is very good-looking. The characters are very three-dimensional and the personality is well developed. The heroine is very powerful. So far, she doesn't feel aggrieved at all. The tsundere dragon doesn't feel OOC at all. Overall, it is highly recommended.