The System Wants Me to Win Over the Male Lead, So I Went After the Female Lead Instead

Hey [Send heart] Dada, let me be the first book fan to comment [Like] The article is beautiful and the characters are very attractive [Send heart] You have to work hard to update, don't stop updating, otherwise I will send you a knife [Grief] Hey, actually... Am I the only reader? It seems like I am the only one responsible for urging her to have sex...[Grieved]

The plot is okay, as long as the author keeps updating it and doesn't make it too shocking later on. I also have something to say about changing from third person to first person. I'm a little uncomfortable with it. I think third person is better. The first person feels weird.

Among the two heroines, the plot is okay and the heroines often interact with each other. But I think it's important to decide whether it's third person or first person. It's a little strange halfway through the movie. Also, I think our protagonist should be more financially independent... Just like when the protagonist is locked in a room, let go of your brain and let the protagonist save himself. Don't just wait in the room for your sister or friend to save you. At least you must learn to help yourself, and you shouldn't be foolhardy.

Can the heroine be more proactive and bold in pursuing Su Ah [pouts]. And this Father Jiang, I hope he will not end well [angry], and I also hope that the heroine will rise up and inherit the family business and overthrow Father Jiang, and don't even think about recovery even though he has been so wronged.

It's great to watch, I like the character settings very much [Sending my heart] There will be more updates, these are simply not enough ₍˄·͈༝·͈˄*₎◞ ̑̑It's best to update 8 chapters a day [Shy]

This article is very good. The author can describe the height and clothes and make some foreshadowing. I hope Mian 1😏

Be less careful. I may be used to other people's personal pronouns, but suddenly I am not used to the first person pronoun. The writing is very good. Keep up the good work, the author. I think it will be better if the first person pronoun is changed.

Not bad. Pretty good. The original world was frozen, and they could still be together after they died in this world. How wonderful it is to be together for two lifetimes.

I remember didn't someone secretly take a photo of the two of them near the end? So who ordered that person and where did the male protagonist go in the end?

Alas😔I actually finished reading it...