After She Stops Teasing Her Unhinged Brother-in-Law, He Kisses Her Like a Madman and Keeps Her Captive

Nice! ! ! But I have a small suggestion: don't write it in the main text and let the readers decide whether it's about plot development or not (it feels like it's not a good reading experience like this, it's like knowing the next plot and next direction of the book in advance, without the unknown feeling of reading a new book) The author can write whatever he wants (everyone loves to read it)

Overall, it's okay. The contrast between the male protagonist before and after is well written. I'm just curious that in the early stage, the male protagonist took the initiative to tell the female protagonist to go away, and wanted to kill her countless times. The most important thing is that in the male protagonist's inner activities, the male protagonist always feels that the female protagonist is deceitful. If this is the case, I don't understand why he can still fall in love with her, and he can be so in love later. I think the most interesting part of the article is the part about the past life [laughing and crying][laughing and crying][laughing and crying]

Oh my gosh, the ball must come out. I really like watching it and have been following it for a long time. [Crying][Crying][Crying][Crying] Giant Invincible is so beautiful. Author Qiuqiu, can you please write that the male protagonist is frustrated and agrees to contact others, and then the female protagonist regrets looking for the male protagonist [crying][crying][crying][crying] It feels like the male protagonist has always been paying for the female protagonist, but he still ignores the heroine. I can't see the sincerity of the female protagonist [crying][crying][crying][crying] Or maybe the male protagonist is willing to cut off the scenes with others to anger the female protagonist [crying]

The plot and subject matter of this novel really suited my taste, and I couldn't stop reading it. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is sweet and sadistic. The crazy setting of the male protagonist is so touching. On the surface, he is a flower of the high mountains, but in fact he is extremely possessive. He loves and hates the female protagonist. He loves her madly and hates her madly. The heroine is not that silly and sweet, she has her own opinions and thoughts, and the emotional line between the two is particularly delicate. The author's writing style is very good, and the characterization of the characters is very vivid, bringing the male protagonist's madness and the female protagonist's stubbornness to life. The descriptions of some scenes in the article are also very atmospheric, especially the ambiguous and tense rivalry scenes between the male and female protagonists, which made my heart beat faster [adoration][adoration][adoration] This novel is really worth reading. I highly recommend it to sisters who like to read ancient novels and like this crazy male protagonist setting. You won't lose money if you invest in it!

It's very well written, and it's the only rebirth novel I've ever seen where a man betrays the heroine and stabs her.

It's good to watch, but I was so angry when I saw it in front of me. I should have tortured the male protagonist so hard, one after another, and he was so frivolous. I was so angry while looking down [face covering]

Very interesting, especially the plot is novel and interesting But the author's writing style... Sometimes There is a kind of beauty that is not contaminated by knowledge. (My sympathy is with you) Impressive today) Maybe I don't have enough writing skills, so in the first half of the article, men and women The character of the Lord... Is a bit off-putting (it will get better later), There are also some plots that are a bit illogical. The pitfalls left by the author can be recorded in a small notebook, such as The female protagonist made a colorful rope for the male protagonist and said that she would give it to the male protagonist. Didn't show up; I feel like I can give it before the hero goes to Yangzhou , it can also be regarded as a point of emotional warming, which will make the male It is more natural for the protagonist to fall in love with the heroine Because the male protagonist is created as a man who lacks love and had nothing when he was a child. Yes, the male protagonist in the article said that only the female protagonist can give him love (without mentioning it) show up) At this time, we should add a little plot, how to give him Love (even if it is a small thing that the heroine inadvertently does), should It's a characterization. I really didn't notice that the heroine gave it later. What does he love 0 When the author describes the heroine making a sachet for a full-month-old baby, At this time, the male protagonist also asked for it at this time. I thought the female protagonist The protagonist will make one for the male protagonist before escaping to Xuancheng. If this plot It's not to deepen the male protagonist's love for the female protagonist. I think this paragraph The plot is a bit thin and boring. This matter was never mentioned again. If the heroine gives it, you can describe the psychological life of the hero Move, "…" Then after the heroine left, the male protagonist took the sachet and cried sadly. Woo I wish the author a big hit!

Super pretty! ! The storyline is great! Highly recommend everyone to watch it! The author's writing style is very good. Except for occasional typos, the relationship between the male protagonist and the female protagonist is also gradual. The description of the male protagonist's details and emotions are very delicate, as if he saw a very vivid and real man appearing in front of his eyes. The female protagonist is also very good and smart. She approached the male protagonist with all her scheming and then slowly fell in love with him. It was really exciting! ! ! I like the plot of Flower of the High Mountain where the male protagonist falls in love with the female protagonist and pretends to cry all day long! Come on author, I will keep chasing until the end.

Damn, this book is really good. [Crying] [Crying] From being an arrogant man to chasing his wife in the crematorium to living happily ever after, there is still a bumpy journey [Crying] [Crying] This is the only book that I have followed from 50 chapters to more than 300 chapters when it was updated [Crying] [Crying] I like it so much

It's good to watch, I hope to see more abuse and abandonment in the future, hehe