Lord: After the Villains Fall, I Become a War Criminal

To be honest, I came for the war at the beginning. The development in the early stage has grown to the point where the speech is comfortable to watch, but the emotional development of Feng Aotian described in the middle is a bit too abrupt. When my mind was full of grand emotions at the national level, a personal relationship suddenly came up. It was difficult to change at once, but in any case, the beginning is still very interesting, praise.

If it weren't for the Tenth Turn Forbidden Network Gu, the author could have written a darker story and become a real Class A war criminal. [Smile]

Very nice. The protagonist goes from being a messed up two-dimensional fantasy otaku to getting rid of fantasy and becoming a P Society war criminal. He develops his territory and carries forward the excellent tradition of the Xuanwu Sect's inheritance system. [Sinister smile]

The writing is relatively fluent at the beginning, but becomes a bit incoherent at the end, and the dialogue transitions very quickly. The content is generally very good, it is an excellent lord article, and the details of various technological advancements can be written directly.

It's really good to watch. I finished reading it in one sitting. I just hope that Xier will save everyone in the end! Moreover, the heroine's dislike of the hero in the early stage was also given reasonable explanations. Most of them were due to the hero's own character problems, and a small part were misunderstandings. Moreover, the heroine did not do anything sexy and could be washed normally. There are few poisonous points, and it can be accepted by a harem in the end.

Seeing many heroines, including Feng Aotian in the latest picture, I knew that my wings were probably going to be knotted.

A great book with great potential and an excellent article on farming. Won't make people feel bored I have a problem with the emotional line. If you like Pure Love, why don't you write more about The Wrong Wife and the Asian Princess? But he had to fight with the brave warrior Moji who came out halfway. Let me ask: "If you don't accompany me when the sun goes down, who will you be when I rise again?"

Let me talk about the conclusion first. It is a qualified or even excellent lord book. It can be seen that the author put some effort into writing this book. Then let's talk about the shortcomings. Sometimes the emotional line is very abrupt when inserted into such a war scene, but this is not because the writing is bad, but because the transition is too blunt. Later, after the author realized this problem, he also changed it, but some classic hydrology links appeared again [laughing and crying], that is, it can be said in one sentence, but it is repeated in several paragraphs, but the same meaning is always the same. But it's not a big problem. In summary, readers who like lord war articles and are involved in P Club games should not miss it.

It's good to watch, and the emotional scenes are surprisingly good. When I read the synopsis and the female imp, I thought it would make the heroine very annoying, so I forgave it. But the author handled it really well, and the female imp was not offensive at all. It's pretty good compared to the one I read before. That male protagonist is like a masochist. There are also people who say that the emotional line is strange. The reason is that the author himself said that there is not much writing, and as soon as it is written, people will skip it. And the author is really brave enough to write something that corresponds to reality. It's like eating too many red beans.

Is the strength of other countries increasing too quickly? NATO's steel production should be comparable to that of all countries in the world except NATO. It is completely cross-generational productivity, and there are weapons. At the beginning, they were still playing with swords. Why is it that when the protagonist comes out, there are all hot weapons outside? The industrial base is not satisfied. After all, NATO's own weapons replacement only takes one year. Are there too many magicians on the opposite side? Hot weapons are originally designed to be cheap, but the number of magicians on the opposite side feels like they can be used against a magician with a gun, right? Are the high-level units here cultivated or purely randomly refreshed? Otherwise, why are there so many strong folk but not so many official ones?