Western Fantasy: Dawn Rising in the North

To be honest, I came for the war at the beginning. The development in the early stage has grown to the point where the speech is comfortable to watch, but the emotional development of Feng Aotian described in the middle is a bit too abrupt. When my mind was full of grand emotions at the national level, a personal relationship suddenly came up. It was difficult to change at once, but in any case, the beginning is still very interesting, praise.

If it weren't for the Tenth Turn Forbidden Network Gu, the author could have written a darker story and become a real Class A war criminal. [Smile]

Very nice. The protagonist goes from being a messed up two-dimensional fantasy otaku to getting rid of fantasy and becoming a P Society war criminal. He develops his territory and carries forward the excellent tradition of the Xuanwu Sect's inheritance system. [Sinister smile]

The writing is relatively fluent at the beginning, but becomes a bit incoherent at the end, and the dialogue transitions very quickly. The content is generally very good, it is an excellent lord article, and the details of various technological advancements can be written directly.

Seeing many heroines, including Feng Aotian in the latest picture, I knew that my wings were probably going to be knotted.

It's really good to watch. I finished reading it in one sitting. I just hope that Xier will save everyone in the end! Moreover, the heroine's dislike of the hero in the early stage was also given reasonable explanations. Most of them were due to the hero's own character problems, and a small part were misunderstandings. Moreover, the heroine did not do anything sexy and could be washed normally. There are few poisonous points, and it can be accepted by a harem in the end.

A great book with great potential and an excellent article on farming. Won't make people feel bored I have a problem with the emotional line. If you like Pure Love, why don't you write more about The Wrong Wife and the Asian Princess? But he had to fight with the brave warrior Moji who came out halfway. Let me ask: "If you don't accompany me when the sun goes down, who will you be when I rise again?"

It's good to watch, and the emotional scenes are surprisingly good. When I read the synopsis and the female imp, I thought it would make the heroine very annoying, so I forgave it. But the author handled it really well, and the female imp was not offensive at all. It's pretty good compared to the one I read before. That male protagonist is like a masochist. There are also people who say that the emotional line is strange. The reason is that the author himself said that there is not much writing, and as soon as it is written, people will skip it. And the author is really brave enough to write something that corresponds to reality. It's like eating too many red beans.

Let me talk about the conclusion first. It is a qualified or even excellent lord book. It can be seen that the author put some effort into writing this book. Then let's talk about the shortcomings. Sometimes the emotional line is very abrupt when inserted into such a war scene, but this is not because the writing is bad, but because the transition is too blunt. Later, after the author realized this problem, he also changed it, but some classic hydrology links appeared again [laughing and crying], that is, it can be said in one sentence, but it is repeated in several paragraphs, but the same meaning is always the same. But it's not a big problem. In summary, readers who like lord war articles and are involved in P Club games should not miss it.

Is the strength of other countries increasing too quickly? NATO's steel production should be comparable to that of all countries in the world except NATO. It is completely cross-generational productivity, and there are weapons. At the beginning, they were still playing with swords. Why is it that when the protagonist comes out, there are all hot weapons outside? The industrial base is not satisfied. After all, NATO's own weapons replacement only takes one year. Are there too many magicians on the opposite side? Hot weapons are originally designed to be cheap, but the number of magicians on the opposite side feels like they can be used against a magician with a gun, right? Are the high-level units here cultivated or purely randomly refreshed? Otherwise, why are there so many strong folk but not so many official ones?

Thoughts on Chapter 70: The heroine currently only sees the fake system (female brat ➕ princess character) and the purchased slave (not sure). Her background should be warriors, churches, magic technology, racial hegemony, and gods. Talents are classified into ss, s, and a; levels: 1, 2, and 3 The male protagonist has two appearances: the leader, and the one who just wants to be a soft meal. The country established is similar to "Failed Art Students (you should understand)" Disadvantages: too short, not funny enough compared to Dali's, the passion is not outstanding, the driving is not enough (of course it is cut off to 70), a bit bland, you can read it when you are short of books. Advantages: Multiple female protagonists, smart, not bad for a lord story, and the technology tree points are okay Summary: You can see everything and give it five stars.

He's just like a member of P Society, he's too rational.

I finished reading it in one go, so I have never played P Club's games before, but the author did write well. The only shortcoming is that the description of the male and female protagonists is a little immature. Everything else is good, and the most tense paragraphs at the beginning are really too messy. I can make more points clearly so that it will not be too tiring to read. Come on, author, I support you!

It's so well written, I enjoyed reading it. I hope there won't be too many emotional lines. The heroine is just a cat system. Push forward However, I felt that the plot was a bit too fast when the industrial assembly line exploded. The plot won't be changed later to the heroine who is obsessed with slapping her in the face, right?

Good-looking, he is indeed a war criminal, but his morals are still a bit high [smile][smile][smile]

It's a very good book. Anyway, I have strong empathy, especially the paragraph in Chapter 282, which is about "My sister has been sold by you, but I don't feel much sad." This paragraph is said to the slave trader. I was so angry when I saw this. I am extremely disgusted with everything that tramples on the personality. I felt like vomiting after reading it! ! ! (Of course this newborn is dead)

It's a very good harem story, and it's very enjoyable to read, but judging from your plot, there is a tendency towards female rivalry in the later stages. In addition to the military-related plot, the male protagonist is also a typical Japanese protagonist, which is in line with the little chefs' imagination of themselves. All in all, not bad.

Why doesn't the protagonist of the author build a church for the God of Love? He can promote her as the God of War and the God of Plague, dogmatic propaganda, and bring the love of war to the world, love without the pain of death [cool] (The God of Love will definitely thank the protagonist for his selfless devotion to love, as all P Club players understand) The protagonist's golden finger cannot move

More in line with the title, it is really slow-burning, not direct. 1. There are a lot of strange thoughts, such as the protagonist's pursuit of pure love, the intimidation of human beings, in short, having immature ideas is an image that needs to grow up. 2Save it for later

It's a good book on the stream of consciousness. The minor shortcomings can be ignored. The middle period started to get a bit confusing, mainly because the emotional line was a bit strange.

There is a reason for the score of this book. The contents include but are not limited to: the male protagonist controls the female doppelganger and the female protagonist sticks to her body (a bit toxic, but personally acceptable) Use 3 chapters to discuss the finance, internal ideological trends and diplomacy of the protagonist's power (personally I feel it is very watery, and there are a lot of private goods) The father-in-law transforms into a vampire lolita (there is only a small part of the description, but I don't understand why he uses props to help the heroine awaken the vampire bloodline and it becomes like this, and because the props are with the heroine, he cannot change back) There are also authors who have stopped updating (because of double opening) and so on. So this book is in the eyes of the beholder and the wise have their own opinions. Mainly because of the subject matter, I'm still reading it.

It's well written, logical and not brainless, and the IQs of the supporting characters are also online. This book is still very well written and the pace is a little too fast, but it's very interesting to read. The worldview and other aspects are handled well. It's worth a read. If you like reading this type of book, you might as well read this one.

To be honest, the rhythm and writing style of this book are okay. Although it is not top-notch, it can tell a good story. The reason why I gave it a five-point rating is that I really saw the author's thinking on society and issues between men and women, and he has gradually matured. It can be said that with this point, he has surpassed most online novels on the market.

Give it a proper rating. This book is a good book with a lot of brains. The protagonist is very familiar with the brain circuits of PC players. There are not too many cheats. The only thing you need to worry about is not to write too high and get blocked. Be careful not to touch sensitive topics [currently in progress]

This novel is amazing! The plot is full of ups and downs, as exciting as a roller coaster ride, and every turn is unexpected. The characters are so vivid, it feels like they are living around you. The writing is also very contagious and made me completely immersed in it. Highly recommended!

It's a very interesting book, and it also contains some reflections on social issues from time to time. I prefer this type of work to pure systematic novels. It's thoughtful, fun, and contains various jokes. I highly recommend it. Only if you read more novels like this can you read it again and again.

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I have read 16 chapters of the novel, and it is very inspiring. Finally, the author of the novel realized what is the most important thing after time travel, and that is power. Everything else is nonsense. It is difficult to live without rights. If you have no rights, even if you go a little higher, you will be killed.

The author is very thoughtful. Compared with this book, many other books are like quilts with different skins. If you use it too much, it will become empty. This book looks like a high-end product with ASMR, it really has a soul!

Overall it's a good book. After seeing about 200 pictures, the main character will start to develop slowly (it is indeed slow, not unheated) and then start to develop the emotional line of the supporting characters. It is a bit too delayed, and you may not want to watch it. But the rest is definitely worthy of this boring period