When the Three Incense Sticks Burn Out, the Gods Come to Claim Your Life

I have read more than a dozen chapters so far, and it starts with the classic grandfather-grandson plot, which is quite common in this type of novel. There are routines, but the writing and plot design are quite sophisticated - of course, it may be a ghostwriter. It seems quite enjoyable so far. Not bad Pretty good, just a bit cloudy

This novel is a parody of The Twilight of the Old Ghost. It has one grandma at the beginning and a grandpa at the beginning. However, the writing style is not as good as the old ghost, but it is pretty good in Tomato. I won't pick the free one. I'll give it four points first.

It stands out among the fast-food novels. I have read 40 chapters so far. It can be called a masterpiece. The writing style, rhythm and characters are all stand up. If the plot is polished more and the starting point is given, it has the potential to compete with the masterpieces. I hope not to follow the old path of foxtail and bet on the first-hand masterpiece.

It's very interesting. The world view is huge, and the early stage is not laggy. The world view is very well shaped, and you can feel that the author has a huge story system. There are small loves within big love. Both the protagonist and passers-by have their own pasts, and their emotions are very delicate. It's just that the sudden jump from the majestic Immortal-Suppressing King to the Gu-growing section was a bit sudden. I can feel that I want to express a new chapter, but at first glance it is a bit incoherent. One second it was written that Xiaokui turned into a cocoon, and the next second there was nothing. But this is also my personal opinion. The author is very talented and very interesting

It's not bad. There are many folklore elements in the early stage. In the later stage, it is suspected that he has turned into Long Aotian, but the writing is not bad. In addition to the main character who always hides his identity and is looked down upon by others, the characters' IQs are all online. The plots and plots are also one by one. Although Zhenwazi is half Long Aotian, everything is not in vain. But having said that, I really don't understand the meaning of destroying the Li family and leaving the son outside. You said you are afraid of Bai Yujing and the Li family in the underworld, then you just don't destroy it. The mountain god Hebo also respects the Li family, and his influence is no less. Also, when the protagonist reveals his identity, the first thing others think about is not the danger of orphans, but he is actually precious. What are the seven aristocratic families and the emperor planning?

The writing is good, but many details are not handled well. Many unnecessary trivial matters were written during the holidays. These trivial matters also make the protagonist deviate from the original character. But if you don't look at the details, it is still a very good book. If the details are handled well, in my opinion, the minimum level will be above 9 points.

This novel should not appear in Tomato. I haven't seen such a good novel in a long time. The world view and realm setting are eye-catching. The protagonist's sad journey step by step, the transformation of the character's personality, Grandpa Changfu's Jiazi plan is like a cigarette passing through the lungs. It's wonderful! This is not the right time for reading. Why is it only 18 hours?

I remember I commented once before. At first, I saw the high-spirited young man. Then I looked at the middle-aged family head whose consciousness has been drifting for hundreds of years. Then he seemed to be an old man with a twilight. That time when I looked at the author's writing style, I couldn't stop being curious at the beginning. Distracted, the writing is very slow. Although he is vigorous, powerful and hard-working, it is really slow, so slow that I feel that the Li family has no other ability but only one breath. If the breath is gone, the book will be meaningless. In Duanjiang, the Food Fairy time and time again, the breath is like a light that seems to disappear as soon as it is blown. , It's not cool enough, not deep enough, and not cool enough. It seems like the protagonist has nothing today. It seems like he must have nothing in order to grow. To be honest, this is actually very uncomfortable to watch. It's like that tree. You don't know why, but when it grows, the flowers around it must wither. I read a few of them one after another. This time I accidentally clicked in, and I found that the author had changed, and became three points sharper. It gave me the feeling of seeing the dawn through the clouds, and the image of the young family leader stood up again. I am looking forward to it, and hope that the author can continue to maintain this feeling.

The most powerful steward of the Li family [crying] [crying] I cried several times and cried. I finally finished watching it. I have been watching it. Come on, Zhenxian Wang. I blew the head of the dog emperor with one punch. But every time I watch it, something will happen. I don't like to watch time-traveling to reality. It's quite uncomfortable for Li Zhen to be alone.

The narrative is delicate and smooth, and the emotions are sincere and moving. Especially in the follow-up, the protagonist still follows the path paved by his grandfather. The special chapter of Chapter 616 narrates the character of Li Changfu very well, and I hope that he will return in the future [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]