That Soft Call Stirred a Tremor in Her Heart

A breath of fresh air in fan fiction, which is plot-driven but also original. The main line is clear and the characters are distinct. The opening chapter and the plot are a bit forced. But after twenty chapters, the writing got better and better. Insert a paragraph of original text: "The so-called freshness is to try new things with old people, rather than doing old things with new people. Do new things with old people, and rarely do old things with new people. The former is an ascending mountain road, and the latter is a cyclic quagmire."

It's so good. It has both the classic original plot and the author's new plot. When interspersed, you can recall the classic. You will smile knowingly when you see the familiar plot, and you can also see the author's unique design. I hope the author will continue writing according to his own outline. Come on. However, I didn't watch much of the plot of Werewolf. I only briefly watched who was on whose team and who won in the end. People who haven't played it can't understand it at all [face covering] and can't comment on it.

To be honest, this book feels light to me. Generally speaking, I feel that the main character has less role. After all, this is not a TV series but a novel. It would be boring to write too much about the love apartment instead of about the author himself. Then, when writing about the protagonist himself, he can actually be more detailed and the details can be tightened up. Furthermore, it would be great if the story between you and Nuo Lan, from getting to know each other to falling in love, could be written (that is, to make it sweeter, not just indifferent, if you have the strength, you can have some ups and downs). The white space is well added. This is a classic and very good setting, and the author has written all the words in the play. Logically, except for the beginning, the rest of the chapters are well connected. Come on! Sao Nian, I am optimistic about you. Give you 5 stars as encouragement.

It looks good, I love watching it, keep going!

Very good, very relaxing, just a bit short

Apart from the rushed ending, it was actually pretty good to watch.

You only read fanfics to see how sweet they are. I've already gone through the plot.