Harry Potter: The Gentle Senior Who Became the Academy's Beloved

The author's early writing style gradually improved as the article progressed. I hope you won't give up because of how you feel at the beginning! ! At the same time, I would also like to thank everyone for your attention and support for this book. The character of Raven Street in my writing is mainly kind and optimistic, but it will change due to some accidents in the later period. At the same time, because it is an all-Hufflepuff novel, there will be fewer career lines. (Maybe I will write about it later) I don't want people to make critical comments about a certain character in the book. I can accept [the character seems OOC], [the setting is off] and [the word is wrong], but if it's a review of the protagonist Mary's Heart, I will delete the entire review. The current decision for the article is to cover the entirety of the article with the word 500,000. If the storyline is welcomed by more people, I will make special extras to give each character a more perfect ending.

To be honest, I really, really like some of the settings in this book. The double is a pseudo-orthopedic in his youth... And the main character cannot recognize the twins, so he is very passive and exciting when facing their identity swap game [Adoration]. And although the relationship with Cedric looks weird in some places, it is evaluated as a daily relationship like pure love. What surprised me was that this book also describes Quirrell, which can be said to be the first time I have seen it. To summarize, the professor who stutters and looks like a dark and perverted man is actually an innocent and reserved man who likes to give the protagonist exquisite dried flowers. Moreover, the author describes it very carefully. I really like this contrast setting. From what Snape said, there was relatively little plot in the early stage, but from his constant emphasis on "I believe in you" and Sirius's "I'm sorry, sorry" who escaped from prison in advance, I feel that the plot of the original generation will be exciting, and I'm super looking forward to it! ! ! ! (Especially I want to watch the plot of Regulus hhh) Author, I will always follow you! ! ! !

Push push! , I particularly like Baby Raven, who is super cute. This is my favorite HP fanfic. I really like the setting and the writing is great. Mrs. Cuttle dotes on Raven and it feels very warm. Harry and Syd are also very good babies. I hope the author Xiaobao can keep updating. I will always support Du. Finally, Happy New Year to Baby Raven, the author Xiaobao and the readers. I will always be happy in the new year. Best wishes [shy]

Ryan is really gentle, and he has a lot of foreshadowing. It's also the first time I've seen a Hufflepuff novel. The ones I've seen before were either in Slytherin or Gryffindor. It's very interesting and touching. There's nothing wrong with it except that it's a new story and I need to update it a little bit (everyone has their own preferences for carrots and greens, but I don't think there's a problem with it anyway). In addition, it's an all-rounder, but it's not the kind of love at first sight, it's the feeling of a steady flow. It looks good, it looks good, it looks really good, and it feels really warm to get along with Cedric.

It's well written, the main character is cute (aIl heartthrob), it has mermaid blood, and the ending should have no cp, but there will be a personal side story (I asked the teacher, and the teacher said it's okay), although the rating is a bit low, but the writing is super good, so gentle, and I have had entanglements with many people before, and now the 36 pictures are super good-looking, with women's clothes, and Xiaolong will also appear!

Dad, I love you (bubble sound) My love for you is like a summer fire. Like winter snow. Like the vitality of spring. Like the coolness of autumn. Oh, baby, you are unique in my heart. [Send heart][Attention][Blow a kiss]

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Not bad, it suits my taste quite well. I have added it to the bookshelf. I hope the author will continue to update [sending my heart][sending my heart][sending my heart]

I feel like the protagonist is a very gentle child

Very nice, nice looking. I feel like the author created a somewhat warm atmosphere. But it also feels like a memoir. Gives people a hazy feeling. All in all it looks great. But I suspect there is a big knife behind it