The Age of the Chrysalis: The Forgotten's Apocalypse

It fully demonstrates the despair and cruelty of the apocalypse, and the theme of flesh and blood distortion is also very attractive, but it is a bit heavy-handed, and not everyone can accept it. To provide the author with some ideas, the protagonist's current adventure experiences are repetitive and highly similar, and the length of a single adventure is small, giving people an industrialized canned feel and prone to aesthetic fatigue. 1. You can write a group portrait, and write some other Tinder or other artificial intelligence like the protagonist, or local humans. 2. After the base of Fire Source β has developed relatively stably, the protagonist will go on a long trip to explore or negotiate/cooperate with other bases. 3. Flesh distortion is a very good setting. It reminds me of the games "Prototype" and "Contempt". You can talk more about it, and you can use the DNA evolution function of Fire Source Beta to upgrade the protagonist. 4. Each base has different artificial intelligence functions, so the style of each base can be designed differently. 5. The bird looked like this before the fire came, and it still looked like the bird after the fire came. So the fire came in vain? There is no need to rush to change the status quo, but I hope that human life will gradually get better in the later period, so that the theme will always revolve around saving mankind. 6. (Personal subjective opinion) The character of the protagonist is not bad. He is emotional and sympathetic but not impulsive. It is in line with the character of pre-century civilization. However, I hope that he can slowly become a savior-like figure and gradually revive pre-century civilization. 7. I have no idea how humans can live for 1,000 years now. Their ability to withstand risks is too low, and local humans are too weak. I feel that just digging up a deformed monster can cripple the entire base. Survival of the fittest means that the bases that have survived to this day must have some unique tricks. You can talk about the unique survival methods of each base. For example, humans in some bases can use deformed monsters or live in symbiosis with deformed monsters. 8. You can write about relatively weak aberration monsters. For example, some monsters have special functions, and humans can use them. The monsters we encounter so far are killing each other, one is more competitive than the other, and they are extremely dangerous at every turn. When all creatures are fleshed out, humans will become useless. 9. The protagonist can go out to find other fires and awaken them to develop together. 10. The protagonist is now like a brick, moving wherever it is needed. It lacks a clear goal. This goal can be to help the base develop and grow, improve people's lives, or it can be something else. 11. Although the base is now in ruins, it would be too monotonous if the protagonist just stayed in this base after a hundred chapters, sewing and repairing the base. That's all for now, I'll add more later if I think of it

It feels a bit like a spiritual cage, very nice!

Super like👍🏻will keep watching