A Month Late, I Became Roommates with Five School Belles

The character portrayal is quite good, the plot interweaving is okay, and the overall theme is very novel. I think the emotional lines can be synchronized, and it can be a big one at the welcome party (mainly about the relationship between the male protagonist, Bai Tiantian and Tang Nana, and there can be some high energy in the middle). The male protagonist can be more detailed, the campus life can be more realistic, and the overall story line can be divided into several more lines: for example, the emotional line of the male protagonist and the female protagonist (it is best to bring the goodwill of the female protagonists to the same level, and the story process is a little more twists and turns) The story line of the male protagonist saving the world (it can be interspersed in the early stage, but the main focus is on the emotional line) In the later stage, the subject can be moved to save the world, and it can be combined with the emotional line. For example, the heroine is in danger, and the hero saves the beauty.) The life experience of the hero can be more detailed, and the life experience and previous experiences of the hero can be made more mysterious. In the later stage, the life experience and experience of the hero can be pointed out, and the hole between the previous hero and Su Yaoyao can be filled. Several story lines can be interspersed, and the battle between the male protagonist and Long Aotian can be more detailed and combined with Xu Jingjing's emotional line. The above is only my personal opinion. If there are any deficiencies, please take care of me. I also wish the author better and better writing, and I suggest the author update ten chapters a day.

What a great book. I read over a hundred chapters in one go, but it was not enough. In the early stage, the male protagonist was a bit soft, irresponsible, and a little bit poisonous, but he was actually thinking like a normal person. When you face a character with a big background, you have to be super tough? It's normal to be submissive, but is it wrong to refuse to save the world? We are all ordinary people and it is normal for everyone to have selfish thoughts. Of course, these seem a bit frustrating from God's perspective. It will be fine once the transition is over. Don't take it too seriously. It's pretty good from the back. It's done when it's time to do it. It's also interesting and funny in daily life. The girls are jealous and jealous. It's very daily. And the author's title is very sweet. There are just too many fusion elements, and sometimes it feels a bit over-the-top, but the overall look and feel is very good.

It looks really cool🤔. I really recommend that those who can't stand knives watch this.

The emotional scenes of the heroines are each portrayed very individually. It can be said that it is not as pornographic as it is. It has emotions and the feelings of each female protagonist, and it is more perfect than its portrayal. It is really well written. Every character has a good heart. From time to time, there are a few jokes that pop up, which also makes me novel [laughing] [laughing]

The characters are vividly drawn, the plot is minimal, and the content elements are diverse and compatible with each other. It's just, too, slow! ! ! Let's all give 5 stars together, let the score reach 8 points, then you can double update, quickly, quickly [send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart][send heart]

Although the character creation is not very good, the plot and story development are still very attractive. It really feels good to me. I hope the author can continue to work hard. I believe you can do it. Come on, come on.

This book is worth recommending. If you like romance and comedy, you can read it. When I first read this book, it only scored 6.0. Now it has a score of 8.0, And it should be higher in the future. It's just that the author's update speed is too slow. Hopefully it will be updated faster to 9.0. This book is good to read, but it's too short. I can only keep reading.

It's really good-looking. It's not too brainless, but it's just a little slow [angry][angry][angry]

It's so invincible that I love Nana [adoration][adoration][adoration][adoration]

Brothers, what's great about it is that the writing style is very scattered and gives people the feeling that it's hard to express clearly, but you can feel what the author wants to write, but the taste of it has changed. I feel that the subject matter is relatively novel, but it touches on the poisonous points. If you want to say that it is enjoyable, it is only moderately enjoyable, and it is frustrating to enjoy. The plot as a whole does not have any major problems. If the author can read this comment, he can hone his writing skills. The current article gives me a feeling of AI. However, if things can be written clearly and the story line is relaxed a little, it will be a magical book. I quite like this setting. Very objective review, don't criticize if you don't like it