Harry Potter: Professor Snape Invites You to Detention

Professor Snape Try to have as few OOCs as possible (less broken characters), everyone wants to survive (except Death Eaters), no abuse, super sweet! This is a fanfic written by me, infused with love and hard work. I hope you all like it and leave more comments. Snape: Very good, at least you have clicked on the comment area. Five-star praise, plus ten points for Azkaban/Gryffindor/Slytherin/Hufflepuff/Ravenclaw! Ps: This book has a sub-CP, which is ggad, and I don't split the official version, so there may be a little bit in all official versions. I express my gratitude to Rowling, it is she who allows us to see the beautiful and mythical wizarding world.

Overall, it's pretty good. It's actually quite normal for Snape to love the heroine. For a person who was able to give up his friends for strength in the early stage, it is possible to say that he likes him, but it is ridiculous to say that he is in love, not to mention that people are married and still love each other for a lifetime. On the contrary, he agrees with the author's concept. Snape was trapped by friendship and guilt for his whole life. The heroine has a really good personality, so good that she wouldn't be worthy of a pure-blood family. The relationship between the male and female protagonists feels like they are evenly matched. They are so sweet. Neither of them is a good person. I know you are not a good person either, but I just love you. There may be some areas that are not rounded out. For example, the heroine's soul retrieval was obviously initiated when she was in love with Snape, which is a bit contradictory. There is no explanation at the end. There are still a few small contradictions in the middle, and the logic may be a little less rigorous. But it is still very interesting to watch. There is no abuse, no fighting and fighting with the Lily in my heart, and no humiliation of love. It is very comfortable to watch.

It's not bad, the relationship is progressing quite quickly, and it's more of a daily routine. The heroine is from Slytherin House. It was she who made Snape reborn and had a soul mate setting. (There is GGAD in it, and it has been mixed so far (ω< )★) Finished spreading flowers! ! There is a movie to watch in the extra episode. It's really a bit sweet😊 [Love] [Love] The interaction between the heroine and Sri Lankan teacher is interesting, and they are all living well and really make my heart soft.

It's very interesting. The heroine is really a magic genius. The invention of the fake death curse really benefited Harry Potter's parents. The time-travel magic also caused emotional changes between her and Severus. As Dumbledore's granddaughter, she also witnessed the love of her grandfathers.

The emotional line is handled very well. Tragedies that have changed many people, I like this the most (but I seem to get tired easily. After knowing that everyone is doing well, I don't want to continue watching if it's not funny. The pull between Si Jiao and the heroine in the early stage is very touching, I love watching it.)

Lily and his wife are saved alive by the heroine/Sif is reborn/the heroine graduates and becomes a professor, you can see this for yourselves, I won't tell you, hahaha/There is a knife in the middle, but it is still sweet, don't worry [shy]/You can still watch it, it's a bit awesome [laughing evilly]! /Married, hehehe [shy]

Highly recommended. The plot is tightly paced and avoids Dumbledore's death in a clever way. The relationship between Selina and Sif develops quickly, and all members are HE (except Lao Fu, of course). It's a super nice HP. Their daily lives are also quite warm. Highly recommended.

After tasting this article, I personally think that it may actually be closer to 4 stars, more than 3.5 Stars, or less than 4 stars, but these missing stars have been filled by Teacher Xiaotao. Teacher Xiaotao, I declare it to you! Let's talk about my opinions. The progression of the emotional line is a bit abrupt. There is not much description of the running-in between the two, and the heartbeat begins. Of course, it can also be interpreted as the connection of minds after the soul traces back. This is ignored, but the reader has not experienced his heartbeat together, so it will feel that the progress is a bit fast. And how I feel about the whole article, I would describe it as a bit like a flat plastic water bottle, and the blue transparent plastic water bottle is a perfect symbol for this article. This is my first impression of this article. The above is the objective evaluation I saw. The following is the subjective evaluation. Of course it is my favorite teacher Xiaotao. The emotional line at the end is indeed quite sweet. It makes me crazy. My sister is so brave in playing straight. In addition, GGAD99 The positive reviews section is not as large as the objective review section, because good reviews don't need to be elaborated, everyone understands them.

This is the story of Si Jiao and the original heroine Selina. The story is very sweet and the rhythm is well grasped. The interaction between the dull Si Jiao and the lively Selina is very attractive. The heroine of the Knott family is not very common, and it is a very novel angle, making it very fresh to read. The author's updates are also relatively stable. Works watered with love can always bloom different flowers. I hope that under the leadership of Si Jiao and Selina, we can witness more joys, sorrows and joys together in this lively, relaxed and interesting atmosphere.

The flaws are not hidden, the story is very interesting, the heroine is well portrayed, the love is very good, everyone is there, and it is a happy story. However, in the early emotional portrayal, a lot of ellipses were used to express unspoken words, which makes people uncomfortable. It is a pity that the story after the war was not narrated and was directly added to the story.