The Qin Clan: The Entire Family Ascends to Immortality

The author could really optimize the punctuation! It sounds okay, but it looks weird, the dialogue has no punctuation.

To be fair, some of the previous chapters jumped too fast, making me a bit confused. . . . After seeing it, it became smoother

Not bad, but why do I feel like this practice is a joke! [Thinking][Thinking][Thinking]

The content is pretty good, but can you put in the punctuation? [Laughing and crying]

Come on, come on, come on

It's very well written, keep it up!

Pretty good, except for some typos Still good

It's okay to take a look

The story is good but the writing needs to be improved

This book is very good. I like to read it.