I Offer My Life from the Start, Fighting Taboo with Taboo

The writing is very good, good luck to the author, but who is the heroine?

I like the setting of Star Road very much. As a high school student myself, this thing feels very clever. I can think more about this aspect in the future. Slightly lower the combat power progression (those awesome things will come out slowly), and first convert some common things in life into interesting settings, just like those community rules

What should I say? I think this rating is very low, so I gave it five stars. But as far as the books I have read are concerned, I rarely give them five stars. Therefore, this should not meet the standards at present, nor is it unbearable. It is considered a good product. Write a long review. If the genre you want to read is a single genre, for example, if you want to read a thriller or a pure urban novel, then this book may not be compatible. The author obviously wants to write a grand worldview. There are many copies of the worldview. It is a fast-travel novel. Now it seems that the author's idea is to diversify the copies. There may be one bus, but it should go through many copies. (Does this count as quick wear?) (Scratches head) If you want to read @ Six Hulu, his kind of protagonist who doesn't write emotional lines, or who kills decisively, is quite similar to the Fang Xiu he wrote. I know that many people will read all the advantages and disadvantages I mentioned before reading the novel, and then judge whether it is consistent or not. His advantages: I haven't seen any obvious flaws so far, and the connection between the stories is also very interesting. You can put your mind aside and read it, or you can put it back in and continue reading. It's just a normal and exciting novel. There are many things that can be seen in this book, and it has a huge world view. Weapons, advancements, upgrades, and skills are not written in a traditional way. What I see so far is that it cannot be passed. The description of realm or something can fully reflect a person's strength. In it, you can see that there are many things that other places don't care about... Strategy, IQ? His shortcomings: The shortcoming that I can't accept is that he explains or describes too much. Anyway, the pace is quite slow, no, that's not rigorous. I should say that he didn't feel better, or that he didn't feel good so quickly. When I read novels, if I read realm novels, they all have a calm description, a normal narrative, and then a big explosion at the end. The words here are more depressing, but they can explode in the end. But he broke out too late, which made me feel unfulfilled. There is also a problem with the author's emotional drama, which may be because I am single. Anyway, it feels awkward this way and that way. (Scratches head) The following is a personal complaint: update quickly, otherwise I will raise you. (Draw sword) And you must live! I read a lot of novels, and before I even got to the backend, I clearly felt that something was wrong with the author. Many of the novels were unfinished, or had been discontinued or discontinued. Don't be like this!

I can only say that as a new writer, this book alone can surpass many other books. It has indeed cured my problem of reading ten lines at a time. There is a lot of foreshadowing in this book. (This will be reflected later) The heroine is not a hairpin girl, (I almost didn't notice). There are a lot of foreshadowings for the protagonist, and the supporting characters are well portrayed (a bit like a round character) Among the many books I have read, this one is very outstanding. It has a little emotional line. I don't know whether the author focuses on the plot or the emotion (I feel it is the main plot). Come on, as long as there are no major problems, 9.5 Or above is a must.

The writing is quite good, but I don't really like Kamen Rider-type stories. Ability is an ability. It is its own ability. What kind of card does it need to be turned into? You have to add an extra restriction. It can be activated directly. You have to get a belt and insert the card. To use Naruto as an analogy, you could have instant activation. In the end, you have to make gestures and seals to send it out. Trouble, you understand what I mean. Of course, the rating is only based on my personal preference. His writing is still good.

It looks good, with many detailed descriptions and beautiful scene descriptions. It can be seen that the author is very serious in writing, but there are also shortcomings. The protagonist always gives me the feeling that he has no strength at all. Although I know that he has this little power, his B character always makes me think that he is pretending to be a pig and eating the tiger, which is not the case. It is a bit strange. And now I don't know what kind of person the protagonist is. The character has changed and there is no obvious personality. If you want to say that he is indifferent and pretends to be a poker face, then so be it. Overall it is good.

In fact, it's quite good to watch, but I don't know why so few people read it. Each dungeon has a different feeling. Clicking on a dungeon is like a big world, so there are more chapters, which is quite acceptable. In fact, I have been waiting for the update of good books on Tomato. In fact, there are quite few. This book is okay, but there are definitely some uncomfortable parts, but it is better than the book about Tomato God. If the author can see it, you can think about my suggestion. First, start with a popular book to attract a certain number of fans. This kind of book should not be too long, so that after a certain number of fans, more people will read it. This book is indeed good, and the author's writing is indeed not bad. You can consider it.

For those who are new to this book, I think they should let go of the "fast pace" of modern society. Although refreshing articles are exciting to read, I wonder whether the pursuit of a sense of enjoyment will also become numb. Feel the author's heart, like the spring breeze blowing on your face, and warm like the sun (although the article is a bit scary now). Finally, I hope the author will use "Rainy Night Butcher (n) + subtitle" in the title of each picture, if this type of copy is involved. The books are getting better and better, so I must give three free gifts every day. [Laughing]

It's good to read. Based on my experience of reading so many books, as long as I keep updating and ensuring the quality, it will definitely reach 9.0 Or above. Also, the author's foreshadowing is too deep, and some parts of it are hard to understand, and the world view is also interspersed in the main text. It is recommended to open a separate page to talk about the world view. [Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates][Asking for explosive updates Explosive update][Ask for explosive update][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post][Top post]

The first few chapters are a little bit toxic, but it's not a big problem. The author has buried a lot of foreshadowing. The heroine should be Li Luo. Some vague and vague feelings are not good. Handling the emotional line is a problem. The picture is very satisfying.