Dragon Raja: Twelve Talisman Sign-Ins, Shadow Army from the Start

How should I put it, I can barely watch it, but I was almost persuaded to retreat several times before, so just resist with high poison resistance. Like the Shadow Eater group turns into a mini group, and the Alien group turns into an octopus group? Also, the strongest among the demons is probably the boss, Curlan, otherwise he wouldn't have become the big brother and let all the other seven demon kings obey him.

Well, the writing is okay and pretty, but there are a lot of poisonous points. The 12 spells should not only be equivalent to high-risk spirits. There are still some problems with the writing, but I can barely read it.

I would like to make a reasonable suggestion. So far, the proportion of the content of each chapter that is actually about the plot is somewhat small. I hope to increase the content of the plot and slightly reduce some explanatory paragraphs appropriately and reasonably. Other than that, there is nothing that needs to be changed. The writing does meet the definition of cool in the article. I hope that the protagonist's combat power will not be suppressed in the future. Come on_(:з∠)_

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Every time I hear talk of a deal, I think of the big brother in Nezha making a deal [awkward laugh][awkward laugh][awkward laugh]

As you know, people who type code often face all kinds of strange gestures from users, which leads to bugs in the program. At this time, you should reduce the opportunities for users to operate and reduce the options. In the next book, you can try not to expose all the options at once, but try to turn the cheat into no options and operate in a straight line. Then the reward received also appears as a percentage. This way you won't be disturbed by all kinds of weird comments. For example, many people have various strange understandings of the Cow Talisman, so don't let the Cow Talisman appear in an adaptive form from the beginning, but in a percentage after it is unlocked. This way there won't be anyone shouting about suppressing combat power. Also, I have a novel that does not suppress combat power and I will introduce it to you.

The protagonist is so cool, the feeling of being in control of the overall situation without having to be afraid of most people, and it is also combined with the power system theme of Jackie Chan's Adventures, which I like, but there are not enough chapters at the moment, and it seems easy to get stuck [laughing]

Quick code words, the author is great

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What is yours will eventually be yours, it is just a long time coming. What belongs to you will eventually belong to you. Although it is late, it will always arrive. Please wait patiently and may every dream of yours come true. (ง •̀_•́)ง✨