Anime Crossover: Eriri Is My Inner Player

Veterans are different. Eiriri appears first every time and sheds tears later [check it out]. I hope there will be a good ending this time [laughter]. The author still loves Nao and the five sisters the most [laughter]

How shameless! It's not like a local one, it feels like a master from an outside station comes to experience life😀👍🏻

I felt that the plot of "Old Man in Coincoat" was very awkward. Now I finally understand what the awkwardness is! The awkward thing is that the character of the male protagonist is a character who has a small love but not a big love. If the protagonist is asked to choose between the female protagonists and tens of thousands of strangers, the protagonist will definitely choose the female protagonists he is bound to. The plot of the old man in the coir raincoat is that the old man in the coir raincoat treats his believers as family members, and tries to save his believers regardless of the cost of letting the believers' ghosts harm others. In fact, he is the same as the protagonist. If the protagonist falls into this situation, he will make the same choice as the old man in the coir raincoat. However, the protagonist continued to ridicule the old man in coir raincoat in the plot. Even if the narration later tried to make amends, he did not take any practical actions to make up for what he had done before. All in all, it feels like I'm scolding myself, which is quite abstract. Everything else is good, there's not much to say. I like the subject matter very much. I hope the author can continue writing. It's difficult to write about Miko's world view. If you want to write better, the author must supplement the world view or reduce the proportion of Miko's plot. But I still can't help but look forward to Miko's plot... After all, Miko is so cute! !

This setting is quite interesting, and the author understands the plot. It looks like a harem, and the writing is very fluent. If it is popular, you can book an 8.5 Or above

It's good to read, it's really quite good. Overall, it's a daily-oriented book. The protagonist is basically invincible. There's no drama that kept me in the dark for two or three years. The only bad thing is the old man in the raincoat, the octopus, but overall it's not very affecting. My impressions, yes, I really don't understand why some similar books bind them all as soon as they are available. It's too messy. The book-loving heroine seems to have controlled it very well so far. As long as the quality does not deteriorate in the future, this will be a very good book. Also, please update quickly!

It seems that the author has written the book carefully. After reading ten chapters, I feel that it is much better than other comprehensive comics. I hope the author will continue to work hard. I want to see the author dressed as a woman [laughing]

Overall it's okay, but there are two things that are not so good. One is that the author's description of the battle is not very good. Although you can feel the anxiety of the battle that the author wants to describe, or the fierceness and difficulty of the battle, the description is not very good, and there is a sense of abruptness. Later, the author can reduce some battle scenes or just skip them. The author also felt a little abrupt when he added new hooks to the protagonist, and when the hooks were too big, the battle became even more difficult to write. He had to highlight the intensity of the hooks and describe the difficulty of the protagonist's battle. Another point is the acquisition of emotional values. There are too many emotional values ​​that a female character can obtain, which feels very outrageous. A lot of emotional value is obtained through a Yingli pear, giving people a feeling that the emotional value is very cheap. Millions of emotion points can be resurrected. In the early stage, a large amount of emotion points can be obtained through one person. Later, when the number of characters increases, it will be easy to reach a million emotion points. The protagonist will be pressured later, either by reducing the acquisition of emotional points, which conflicts with the large amount of acquisition in the front, or by letting one or two heroines die and then launching a resurrection heroine service so that the protagonist can continue to earn emotional points. In short, I hope the author will pay more attention to the acquisition of emotional value and grasp the degree. Moreover, the author's description of the villain is a bit unsatisfactory (I reviewed it after reading chapter 65). I can also understand that the author wants to use the villain to show the strength of the protagonist, but the protagonist suddenly confronts the villain and it feels abrupt, and the reasons given are not appropriate. It gave me a feeling of a virgin, very awkward, and a sense of character collapse. I hope there will be less battle scenes later on. Overall, the subject matter is quite novel, the relationship between the female character and the protagonist is well described, and overall it is a good "electronic mustard" that consumes a lot of time.

Hmm... How should I put it? First of all, I have to say that I have never read any of the author's previous books (nor have I heard about it from others), so I will not use any filters when reading this book. I do base my evaluation on the content of this book. Secondly, I read a wide range of books, and I often read comics, so the evaluation I give is relatively objective... Right? How should I put it, it feels a little different from what I thought before I clicked it. At that time, I mainly came for the two themes of daily life and electronic ghosts. I thought that most of the plot content was chatting with various characters on the virtual network, and having a series of daily interactions with various characters as an AI intelligence (of course, this is probably more boring). After reading about 2/3 of the book so far (I have caught up with the latest progress when writing this review), I feel that the protagonist appears a bit frequently in reality, and the plot... Can't be completely regarded as daily life, right? It feels a little bit supernatural. Originally, I was planning to abandon the book at the breakfast bar. Of course, I can't say that it's a bad spot. It simply felt that the content was different from what I wanted to read. That was purely due to my personal taste. But from an overall point of view, the plot of the breakfast shop is quite good, and it lays a small foreshadowing for "the protagonist has a reasonable reason to remember her in this world." As for why I was able to read the latest chapters without interruption even after I had the idea of ​​abandoning the book... Sometimes, I can flip through it faster than I think in my head. Not long after this idea came to me, I turned to the copy section about the bell, which is also a bit controversial in the eyes of most people. The content of the controversy is naturally whether the protagonist has "double standards". The general content is that a demon passively dragged 50,000 people into his back in order to save a few hundred believers. The protagonist's idea is roughly that "those hundreds of people died in accidents were innocent, but those 50,000 people were more innocent than them." (I'm sorry, because I read it all at once, so I can't fully recount all the content) Then there was some debate in the comment area at this time, probably about... If among those hundreds of people, there were people who were more important to the protagonist, would the protagonist still be like this? But rather than arguing about this matter, I became more curious about the relatively three-dimensional character of the protagonist, and I was a little curious about what he would do in the subsequent plot. Of course, it makes me curious about the future development of the plot, and also shows that the characters are relatively fleshed out. As for the plot, from my subjective point of view, this level is quite good. If it were more concise, it would be too fast, if it were more detailed, it would be too slow, if there were more twists and turns, it would be too annoying, and if it was more routine, it would be too boring. It can be seen that the author is quite experienced in this aspect. There is nothing to fault about the writing style. After all, it is a comprehensive comic. Compared with books of the same type, it is already very good. Then there is the author himself... In this regard, I can only construct my understanding based on a few sentences in the book, so if there are any inaccuracies, please let me apologize in advance. It's not particularly lazy when it comes to updating, but it's definitely not lazy. If I occasionally ask for leave due to something, I will explain the reasons. Occasionally posting a few complaints in the book will not delay the total number of words in the chapter. These interactions with readers are also a point that attracts fans, and the fact that I often read book reviews can be regarded as a sign of responsibility to readers. Comprehensive evaluation: The plot is good, nothing serious The writing style is good, but it doesn't depend entirely on peers. The characters are rich and the protagonist can arouse discussion among book friends in some aspects. The author is interesting, often interacts with readers in the book, and provides benefits The writing style is neat and will not make readers feel incoherent when reading. Personal evaluation: It is a very good book. It is worth spending a few hours to catch up with the latest chapters. It is not recommended to read the book. It is best to read chapter by chapter. After all, what the author writes in the book is quite interesting. Summary: To sum up, there are no problems in the manga's outlook and plot. It deserves five stars.

Just so-so, this five-star review is not given because the subject matter is novel, the author writes well, and it suits my taste. I just feel that if I don't give you a five-star review after reading it for so long, I feel that you will cry for a long time, hum! Remember, I only give you good reviews because I take care of your emotions. I only give five stars because the novel is good. It's impossible.

It's nice to watch, and the setting is very novel, but I hope it doesn't get too emotional.