Variety Comic: Yinglili, This Is Just a Deal

It's good, but the latest chapter about Three Kingdoms is obviously too high-spirited. Three Kingdoms can just be included in online articles to make fun of it. There is no need to write the details of the game. Many people actually can't understand it. Also, I don't understand the treatment of five equal parts. Does the author want to get them all or something else? (I personally recommend that the author just include his or her favorite ones. After all, I haven't read Five Equals. Including too many female characters will not be convenient for you to finish the story.) Also, I hope that the author can try to capture the key female characters to write and make the characters more three-dimensional. Like Yinzi, I haven't actually read Dragon King, but I really like the Yinzi you wrote. I also hope that the author's emotional line can be further developed, and there will be some movement in stock trading, and the thunder will be loud and the rain will be small. I hope Yinzi will win the fourth section and then Yinzi stocks will skyrocket.

It's really good. The male protagonist is a thief. I like it. If there is a female protagonist, I hope it's Ginko or Woori. If there's no female protagonist, it's fine. Money is the root of the female protagonist [laughter]

To be honest, maybe it's because I've seen Star God before, so I feel a little disappointed. The male protagonist is like a genius in many aspects. I think it is a manga after all and there is not much to say. The God of the Stars is closer to a gifted normal person. In order to survive, and about the imprints he was forced to leave before, it can even be said that he left a mental illness for this reason. In my opinion, it is closer to reality. Especially the after-sales service provided by Star God, he is still so gentle. What is thought to be kindness from strangers is actually the last tenderness of the Star God

The requirements are not big and I hope the author won't stop updating it. It's really good and it's at the top level among comprehensive comics. Five-star support. I'll watch the videos to support you. Don't let it be unfinished, okay? Please [top post] [almost crying]

It's a very interesting comprehensive comic. The main reason is that the male protagonist has such a pleasant personality. Who doesn't love the setting of adding money to lay people and spending time in flowers but not leaving leaves? ! It's also interesting to see Sora Yinzi's tsundere and reveal the aura that shattered the hero of the anime. All in all, it's a very interesting book. If you like variety comics, don't miss it.

The plot of this article is exactly the same as the one about professional dog licking that doesn't talk about relationships and only talks about money, so I gave it one star less, but the animation characters are restored very well and it's nice to watch~

Super cool comic! I watched Charlotte when I first came into contact with the two-dimensional world. At that time, it was free to watch on Tencent Video, so I really, really liked Tomori Nao. Let's talk about this book. The author's connection of the plot is perfect. In the early stage, she developed feelings for the sake of making money. In the middle stage, Charlotte's superpowers appeared and she finally faced up to her feelings to pave the way for the harem. For harem-themed novels, how to make girlfriends accept each other is a difficult problem. The author has handled it very well here. Some people may find it troublesome, but this is the essence of this work. Otherwise, what else would we look at? In terms of the character of the girlfriend, we can only say that the author has done at least two animations such as Five Quarters. Hehe, I like this kind of author. The characterization of the male protagonist is... Very good, but in terms of appearance, it is a bit behind the book lovers~~. In the end, I have to say that the book is great. Although it is said to be a harem, I quite like it. The male protagonist has his own reasons and feelings and does not mindlessly accept girls. He treats his girlfriends equally, which is much better than the perverts in those harem novels! I wish the author success with his new book, a happy new year, and never fail a class ~ [Top post][Top post][Top post]

It's super good, ah, ah, ah, the pinnacle work of two-dimensional comprehensive comics. It's been a long time since I've seen such a good-looking fan novel. Come on, author, don't let it be unfinished...(/≧▽≦)/~┴┴

The writing is good, and the characters' personalities are consistent with the original work. There are no poisonous points or awkwardness. The plot is also interesting. . . The only thing that makes me feel bad is the protagonist's motivation. Is it just because of money? Do you like money because you were afraid of being poor in your previous life? The reason is too far-fetched. . . If it's for money, the protagonist's ability can do more. . .

I don't know how to be second-rate, and I'm still afraid of embarrassment (I'm at the end of my secondary school syndrome [making faces]) [face-covering] [face-covering] [face-covering] Although I don't want to watch it, but overall it's okay. I think I can also play this protagonist [laughing] Just ride the white dragon on the face, and let Rikka see Pai Lao's exclusive facial skills [laughing evilly]

The Lord promises not to give up, I am willing to follow the Lord! The painting style is pretty good, and the heroine has a lot of personality, but there are a few articles about the protagonist's battles. I think I can add some detailed articles about the protagonist and the hero saving the heroine in this daily love story. A little personal suggestion. The author thinks it will damage the book, so you can ignore it [smile][smile][smile][smile]

Thank you so much for this impressive article! Your writing is insightful, informative and engaging. I especially appreciate your grasp of details and in-depth exploration of emotions, which makes your article unique among similar works. I look forward to reading more of your work and recommending it to more readers. Thank you again for your talent and hard work!

It's good to read, I love reading it, and I hope the author can keep reading it. I haven't read many of the chapters here but I can still read them, so I encourage the author to keep reading them, and I will keep reading them (quietly: Do all these netizens have such fast hand speeds? I haven't gotten the first update once)

Beautiful! Is it that sometimes the protagonist feels a bit dull? I deliberately don't feel the heroine's favor, but it's not too poisonous. Of course, if the author updates it, please pretend I didn't say it [laughing] [laughing]

Generally speaking, it looks good. The main plot of the whole book is not Eiriri's life-long regrets but the male protagonist's superpower journey in Charlotte (maybe he really saves the world). After reading this, I feel that it is almost over. The heroine is more like Yuri Nao and Sora Ginko than a harem. After all, Kasumi, the fifth grade, Rikka, and even Yukino, who was only mentioned in the introduction, are all close to Kamigakure (the fifth grade has more scenes). Generally speaking, it is a good novel

After reading the existing chapters, I found the writing to be very good. The writing, plot, and character settings are very good. There are no silly situations or frustrating situations in traditional books. I saw book friends saying that the author loves to stop updating. This book is really good. It's a pity to stop it.

First of all, five-star praise. It's well written. However, I personally feel that I feel a little rushed when I get to the Sea of ​​Stars. I think you can go directly there even if you haven't passed the school. The change is a bit fast. There are no other big problems.

How should I put it? The author's writing style is very good and humorous, and he has a good grasp of Tomori Nao's character. At least it is better than what I have seen before. The connection between different stories is smooth, but I don't know if he can expand more on the basis of the original work.

The feeling is still very good. Although there are still some minor flaws, the author listened and the protagonist's strength and IQ are always online. There are no overly brainless or outrageous plots. The character restoration of each anime is also quite good.

So far, it's quite good. Riqing has some superpowers, and he's very good in daily life. He also breaks things off instantly. He captures the protagonist's love for money without losing the bottom line. At the same time, although it seems to be a multi-female protagonist, it doesn't give people the feeling of being a petty person. The contact is also very decent, which is very good.

The structure and narrative are very good. The only problem is Bai Nianyu's life and death (the middle part of the plot related to super powers). It is not very good as a comprehensive comic. The plot is fast and slow at times, and the super power is a bit rushed at the end. It is innocuous. It gives a somewhat uncomfortable but perfect ending. I have an idea. I am also looking forward to the author's next comprehensive comic (I read the review on the same day and will read the new book now😋)

It's very good. It doesn't have the characteristics of most of the male protagonist Asasi. The male protagonist mainly cares about money and also thinks rationally. Other comprehensive comics are all based on a request from the heroine, but this book will solve the superpower for 3 months and give you 2 million yen, which is 97,000 yuan in RMB. Who wouldn't be moved after seeing this?

Good review! Although this evaluation only has two words, it has rigorous grammar, neat wording, clever structure, and catchy language. It can be seen that the words are concise and concise. In addition, it ends with an exclamation mark. It is really the finishing touch, wonderful writing, profound artistic conception, and echoes the sublimated theme of the previous article.

Although I haven't seen many of the characters in the comic, the male protagonist of this book is very interesting to me, just like the God of Stars.

It's a very good variety comic. The plot and characters are well connected, and the protagonist's personality is also very good. It's like a staple of the variety comic [Blow Kiss]

This novel is so wonderful! The storyline is compact and the characters are vivid, making me completely immersed in it. The author's writing style is also very good, and the description of details made me feel like I was actually there.

I've just seen the latest chapter. I haven't seen anything about Charlotte for a long time. Tomori Nao is the best in the world ヽ(*^^*)ノ. The overall writing style is good, and I don't write too much. I write a book within my own ability. Good luck, author! It's so unfinished, there's a lot of foreshadowing and it's ended hastily without even writing it.

It's a very interesting book. Although Yinglili's emotional line makes me feel uncomfortable, the silver line is still very painful [shy][shy][shy]

Clear and concise, children want to win prizes Having said that, this book is indeed well written, and I really recommend everyone to read it. The author is also quite interesting (Xiao Nanniang?\(≧▽≦)/) If there is a shortcoming, it is that I did not fill in the chapters, and some of the plots were forgotten, but the author did not fill in the pictures [sending heartfelt thanks]

It's not bad. There are many female characters that I like, but I just don't know if I'll accept them. To be honest, I'd rather the protagonist has a bad character and a bit more of the spirit of the Great Lord of Wei (the legacy of Wei Wu). There are really too few manga fandoms that attack Sayuri, and it's a waste of resources.